me commenting first, ohhh ive never been the first to comment..i'll like to thank my timing and its reallyreal for coming up with such a beautiful concept...
"I'm sorry Geet, I was jealous of the hair on your lip so decided to replace it with my lips "
nawww...that was so cute! i love this maan, i was shy for geet myself!
"Geet smiled innocently trying to give him her cutest look so that he wouldn't get mad but then suddenly started yelling herself."
hehehe, that is such a sweet part, it made me smile till me cheecks started to hurt, you write everything soo nicely, its as if im watching a movie!
"I don't know Geet," Maan said sarcastically, "maybe a TENT," he looked up at her with one eyebrow raised.
ohhh, i see where this is leading to
"fine Maan, we'll both use the sleeping bag."
SAY WHAAAT????
WAITING FOR THE NEXT UPDATE...UPDATE AS SOOON AS POSSIPLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
EVERYONE PLEASE LIKE SO WE GET UPDATE SOON,, A HUGE STADING OVATION FOR BEAUTIFUL UPDATE!!!!!
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