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Posted: 17 January 2012 at 5:05am | IP Logged
Nice FF
PM me when you will update next part Smile

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Sorry for late comment Fiza

I loved the concept its beautiful and different.

It is very difficult for me to comment on first ten chapters as I cant see nupur in pain also I cant tolerate majan and their closeness he is too much into gunjan that it feels he ignores nupur and she still cares for him,  ready to sacrifice everything for his happiness, I just wish mayank understand once what she is going through I know shows care or concern for her but it is not reachig her. After reading these chapter it is difficult to know where this story heads

You have beautifully decribed nupur's pain through her POV



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Chapter 11

I read this update thinking he is talking about gunjan but somewhere I felt he cant love gunjan c'mon fiza can be so cruel with us then when I read last part I was shocked then surprised ki  thank god he loves only and only nupur

And he loved her from teenage and only thought about her this is next shock but happy one..

Still how can he say he hate her when he love her so much...

After reading nupurs name I have to read this update gain to feel his love for nupur

Kya jhataka diya hai manana padega

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Chapter 12

Nupur's pain is killing me, she is unware of his feeling but her love for him that she is sacrificing everything for his happiness

You have beautifully potrayed his feelings of her

As ususal wonderful update loved it

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Chapter 13

They loved each other so much but its sad to see how they misjudge eachothers  actions

I felt Nupur has always taken initiative to lessen the gap but mayank has increased it in the name of giving her space.

Nupur is feeling so lonely at her place rememberiung about her father, its painful to see her like this when the fact is completely opposite of her thoughts.

Beautifully expressed mayank feeeling about their first morning, blessing and samrat teasing

Lovely updat beautifully expressed their POVs

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Chapter 14

Fabulous update '''..He loved her so much I wish he has expressed a bit without thinking how will she react as he know she cares for him isnt this means she likes him and loves him.

OMG so many things cleared by him sigh!! now I m feeling good so he knows that she brought shirt for him but reluctant to give him. He also know that evreynight she used to stoke his head to feel him better,  he felt her care and concern wish sometimes he had told her that how much it sooths him and I wish hea would have done what his heart told him  to'.

Mayank is too inexpressive c'mon she is your wife and you know she care for you

Thanks for clearing everything



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Chapter 15

Beautifuly decribed Nupur's pain and what she is thinking about rentering in his life but she don't know new beginning awaits for her.

Loved mayank's line "biwi hai ap hamari disturb karneka haq hai apko" and when he said her to bring her luggage "aur main puch nahin rah"first time he showed his right on her

Thank god he brougt her back and hopefully everything will sort soon

As usual awesome update  

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Chapter 16

Beautiful update rather an eye opener for Nupur it was much needed finally all her illusions are broked and she can see things with new sight. Sometimes his too caring nature towards nupur felt that he has been very formal to her.

Poor Nupur cursed herself for misjudging him according me its not only her fault as anyone can think like that, they are  too close and open with each other.

I wish samrat would have shared this earlier itna sab drama hi nahin hota

So it's a sigh of relief, no more misunderstanding and my mayur can be together foreverSmile

 

Thing I like about this FF his different story the way you decribed their POVs and the communication between non living things it was cute and reader just go with the flow

Thing I hate is Majan are too close which I really cant tolerate  not only nupur but anyone else seeing them this close can judge the way nupur thought. Infact I was not able to tolerate them in MJHT also as I m  die hard mayurian can see Mayank and Nupur with anyone else than each other.

Thing I want see apart from romance and confession is how he will feel when he come to know about nupur's thought about him and gunjan and she was actually going to leave him secondly how he will take this I mean I want him to understand while thinking this what nupur had gone through and she was actually going to sacrifice eveything for his happiness because that is the gesture from her how much she loves him, she was leaving him knowing  she don't have anyone in her life apart from him

I loved you approach of story and the way you handled frankly I really like whatever you write.

Well about poetry I do understand sometimes but sometimes its totally bouncer sorry for that.

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