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Nice Update Fiza
i am hating Majan here,Nupur is bearing so much,she should leave him,he dont deserves her...
please yaar move the story fast,wanted to read where Mayur story is headed
continue soon
Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur
very nice update Fiza😃
loved it.😃bdw, m not going to comment too much in this update...u knw why.😉.bt i loved this update.😃being a mayur fan ... i was really satisfied in this update.😃love mayank-gunjan bonding 😃... n their convo 😃... u again knw why...😆i can read in n out of this update.😛but first time i was shocked for mayank's accident.why???? then i realized, this is the turning point i thot.😳loved it very much.😃i just loved garden scene ... hayyy ... i cant wait k ye sach kab hoga...mayank nupur ko kab bolega😳waiting for next update😃continue soon ...😃cant wait for next updte😳love u ...🤗EID MUBARAK 🤗
after reading some comments i think some thing is fishy how can u guys can be so positive 😊😊😊
i respect ur descion..plus i thnku u for nt stoping reading this ffOriginally posted by: palz_ArTi4ever
i hv chosen not to comment over this ff untill the situation changes and nupur 4 good 4 ever leaves that man...i personally dont want nupur to b with mayank after all these...this is below her self esteem...and she cant put her self respect at stake 4 a heartless person...all the best to sharma 4 his upcoming conjugal life with his flame...let nupur come out of this trash 4 once and 4 all...i beg of u..please !!
ps- i clicked the like button 4 ur potential in writing...not 4 the story...bcos i detest such concepts a lot,as much as i adore ur writing...
i 'll tell u yOriginally posted by: mayuloveu
OMG mayank and gunjan? fiza why? I hope mayank thik ho
hey yupiifor the first time -me first!!!
nice update but its so ...whats between mayank-gunjan?
Originally posted by: arjunratirocks
o god !plzzz sab theek ho aur mayur ke beech bhi sab thik ho jaye im sacred now waiting for ur next update
hey roshneeOriginally posted by: -roshnee-
i wish the last line comes true. i wish that nupur never has to face mayank again. a responsibility is a responsibility when you love it, otherwise its a burden. and mayank has made it clear that nupur is indeed a burden in his life. and no one has the right to make her feel so not even if he has apparently saved her from being all alone.
thnku
Oh God what is going on here
i am really scared .Now what will be Nupur and Gunjan reactionwaiting for Next partThanks for Pmcont soonEID MUBARAK
thnk unice updt fiza
I am hating this mayank..hope nupur leave him & his house
cont soon
thanks for the pm
Eid Mubarak Cascade
Cascade i really cant stand for mayank here
wherever u want to do with mayur - now u can
i gave up my hope...
thnk u so much dear for liking my writingsOriginally posted by: clustersofstar
u r such a brilliant writer u convey the pain of nupur beautifully but the thing is cant see nupur in pain .That majan is unbearable nupur please leave mayank he doesnt deserve u. i think infuture she might get more pain leave mayank please its good for you hate majan to core🤢😕 thanks for the pm😊
lolOriginally posted by: clustersofstar
after reading some comments i think some thing is fishy how can u guys can be so positive 😊😊😊
thnks dearOriginally posted by: --Ruchi--
Fiza...the pain of nupur is very well described...
Although I am not liking majan in any way...but theyare essential to give a depth to mayur relationship...Lets see what happens next...last line is scaring me.cont soon.P.S.Happy Eid🤗
sorry i know to much of emotional atiyachar im doing on all of u sorry for thtOriginally posted by: parul_bansal
awww wat was that
i m so scared after reading the last lineall that mayank is doing with nupur is not gud at all ...arre yaar sahne ki ek limit hoti hain y my nupur is tolerating everything so silently 😭😭😭she must fight 4 her rights...EID MUBARAK to u ... may god bless u
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