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Short story Journey of Life (maaneet)pt4 at pg9 26 (Page 8)

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 10:44am | IP Logged
w8ing w8ing & w8ing ...

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged

Maan took her in made her lay down NT and Pinky  quickly gave her water to drink

Maan: Geet are you ok?

Geet: didnot reply she remain her eyes closed .

Maan: pat her cheek " Geet"

Pinky: i think she is shock let her rest for sometime.

Maan: ok  he walk out

Geet: why he took me wrong ? she just had a self thought and cried silently.

Maan: straight walk to DEV

Dev: i am really sorry for what all has happen ?

Maan: not a single girl is save he is a beast ...

Dev: we cannot help it

Maan: ask him to stay some where else

Mamaji :son i have warn him he will not do it again.he just kept his hand on Maan shoulder, Maan just look at him

Arjun : we have open the aid there are few things in it we can make partition, ladies side and gent side .

Mamaji  that is a good idea.

Arjun i need help from you guys so we can build .

Lucky :bro i am here

Romeo too came to help him.

time passed it was after noon

Sasha : are they coming to get us

Dev: there is a note in every parcel,they are coming on foot as helicopter cannot reach this place ,and it might take 3 to 4 days .

Sasha :what 3 to 4 days ?started crying ..i am fed up

Dev: sorry we cannot help it ...

Mama ji: beta they have trace us they will come as soon as possible , hum ha na

Dev: we have food ,medicine and warm clothes now just relax think you are here for camping

Sasha :with a terrorist no way.

Lucky : he had promise he will not harm any one

Sasha: he had scared her so much that now she is having temperature.

Maan: who was busy with Arjun heard her

Sasha : .the girl who had cheered me yesterday is scared just because of that guy pointed at Briji who was sitting far from them

Maan: can i see her ?

Sasha: no she had said she doesnot want to see any one .

Maan: why she is angry from me?

NT:please come in Dr is calling you

Maan: me ?

Nt: yes

Maan walked in

Adi: you are her fiance right.

Maan : looked at Geet"ya"

Adi: she is running temperature, i want to give are an injection so it does not get worst ,but she is not cooperating  , please will you help me?

Maan : sure he just sat down next to her

Geet: "i dont want injection"

Maan: "you will get more sick"

Geet: hona do

Maan: you dont want to go for hiking, like yesterday you plan

Geet: looked at him

Maan: trust me it will not hurt you.

Geet: it does hurt i know ...

Maan: this time it will not he hold her arm.

Geet: bola na nahi

Maan: bola na ha ... just pull her sleeve up.

Geet; nahi try to push him

Maan: give me back my I phone ..with eyes he asked Adi to inject

Geet: nahi do gai woh it is mine now

Maan : jee nahi ,if you will not have the injection then i will take it back...

Geet; so rude "Dr kya koi apni de wohi jee wapise lata ha "

Maan: ha lata ha jab koi baat na sona...

Adi: now dont take Maan she took injection ...

Geet: kab bit shocked

Adi when you were fighting on I phone? had a laughter

Geet; looked at Maan

Maan: pata chal

Geet;shake her head in no

Maan: ok now Go to sleep , pull her sleeve down

Geet; hiking?

Maan: pehla thek tou ho?

Geet: if they come to  take us

Maan: they are not coming in next 3 days  ,so you chill.

Geet: hold his had as he was about to get up..

Maan: what ?

Geet; thanks for helping me

Maan: whisper in her ear " my pleasure "

Geet; shyly moved her face her lips brush his cheek.

Maan: you can... wink at her froward his cheek

Geet: sorry by mistake ...

Maan: keep doing such by mistake.

Geet: just hide her self in sleeping bag...

Maan: silently pray that she had not taken the incident serious ..walk out

Dev: how is she ?

Maan: smiled she is better.

Dev: thank God.

Lucky : why don't we find way Our self

Dev: it is thou good idea but if we get lost we will not be able to come back...

Maan: but we can try  ,it is useless to sit here like this, we will be back before sunset

Arjun 3 of us should go & remain stay with girls...

Maan: i am coming with you.. he quickly got ready

Arjun: let take that guy too

Maan: why him?

Arjun: he should  not even left here too.

Maan ok ..they took required things & walk towards hill..

Geet woke up in evening, she was feeling better.

Pinky: how are you?

Geet: i am fine

Pinky: have your soup .

Geet: soup

Pinky yes don't your remember they drop goods

Geet: oh yes... wait let me go out

Pinky why? it is very cold out there.see everyone is in

Geet; Maan tou nahi ha?

Pinky he has gone

Geet; where?

Pinky in search of way

Geet: what? she open the door of the tent  chilly breeze came in.

Mamaji : beta close it

Geet: why nobody  stop him?she said bit loud..

Dev: he will come back by night,

Geet:it is night. i am going she just picked up a torch

Dev: hold her arm  "pagal ho it is dark "

Geet; what if any thing happen to him? i will go

Dev : no wait for some time ..

Geet: just removed his hand over her arm..she started walking in the passage ... everyone was looking at her..time flies ... they heard noise ...

Geet: Maan..

Lucky & Dev went out with flash light...Arjun & Briji was coming ...

Geet: went out where is Maan..she just pull his coat..

Arjun: he is there? she just ran in the direction .."he is too heavy we can't care him more" ..Dev & Lucky ran too...

to be it is mostly in english :) dont forget to leave comment as it help in proceeding. i will update once a week ..may be some time twice as having alot of load shedding so i apologized in advance ...  

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 11:38am | IP Logged
awesome update
loved it
wat hap'd to maan
continue soonClapClapClapClap
harshithaaaaaaa IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 11:41am | IP Logged
nice update...
is maan  fine? what happened to him?
luv_DD IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
awesum update . .
Maan ko kya hua ? ?
fatema_007 Goldie

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
lovely update...but which incident was maan refering 2 when he wished 4 geet 2 not take it seriously???
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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Awsum. Upd next part soon
seemamary IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 26 September 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Loved it, continue soon. I hope maan is safe .

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