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Chapter 1 done... mera and maan ka sentiments are just the same! I mean he doesn't know what he has gotten himself involved into and even I don't. So far... I get a feel its going to get dark... Right reyu... 😉
Okay... Now the begenning, I was like... damn, she did not begin the story with seperation... But you being true to yourself, ie sadistic approach 😡 YOU begin with a talk of death and regrets... I just relaised Speration would have been less depressing... Or may be not... Anyway, moving on... Talk about deaths and we have a near dead woman... Its geet... Right... Has to be... Afterall its a MG story, or so i hope... Ok ceasing the dramatics... Saving her life for the first meeting sets up for a good base for their story... one thats founded on humanity and perhaps reverence [later on] instead of attraction is always a welcome... I for one am not really a fan of trip-and-fall kinda first meetings with eyelocks and MAHIII... typical... they make me 😳... All in all loved the starting... I hope i am not in for shocks... I get a jittery feel about reading the next chapter... alll right you have it, I am scared to read the next chapter... Oh, i know you won't kill her, not at the beggening of the story at least but then if not that it has to be something worse... Or may be i m fretting over nothing...
Hoping to the next chapter...
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