made it all that more interesting...didn't it? thanks for the comment...Originally posted by: YusLizooo this is turning out to be very intriguing esp when u had given us an early twist by making us think it was Geet that had died but in actual fact its DadiMa
pls continue!
Thanks Shravya,,,,glad u liked the start...Originally posted by: Shravya.MCongrats on the new SS
Interesting prologue
Loved it
Thanx for the PM
Thanks hun...glad u liked the start...Originally posted by: -memorable-βοΈcongrates on the new ss βοΈnice start πwaiting for more to come π
it might be...so u gotta read on to find out...thanks for the comment...Originally posted by: krati5mafia... is really ds matter is related to mafia...????????π²... update soon... nd here sada MAAN SHER KHURANA ia a cardiologist... new... continue soon.. thnks for pm
let's hope the girl is geet...read on to find out πOriginally posted by: zoha25Great concept.
I think its geet, poor girl.
continue soon.
Thanks swetha...glad u liked the start πOriginally posted by: swetha10congrats on the new ff...
wow maan a doctor... hmm nice prologue..looks interesting..plzz continue soon
i have no motivation to keep her (who may or may not be geet) if i get such short comments...π...so make up for the comment with the next update...πOriginally posted by: mchopraThnk God GEET si alive,..i was so scared that i didnt open it...ahhh she will survive...tht much i know..
lovely but tooo short..make it up next time...hehe..
hehehe π...death is the first thing u think of whenever u read something of mine...thnanks for the comment...π³Originally posted by: preethiacongrats on new ss...
when it started he lost her..i was thinking another sad story but thankfully i read further...seems interesting...waiting for the nxt update
hahahaaπ€£..wouldn't it have been even more fun if i had done that ? u all would have just killed me π...i loved how u said safe for now...u know me too well darling...and let's see if the damsel in distress is geet or not π..Originally posted by: hopehotOMG!!!
did u kill geet already!?!?!***deep breath*** Thank god! ...u killed dadi .π²π...oh well at least maaneet are safe (for nowπ) as u have already shown geet( i m assuming) to be hurtFANTASTIC!loved it cont soonoh ...and before i forget :
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