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Emotions Unfelt- Arnav AND Khushi-updated!! (Page 5)

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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 11:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ILoveHussain

Hey Geeta (or is it Geet?),

This is the first post I read about today's episode... Won't be watching the episode for next 8-9 hours at least, but I can imagine how I will feel while watching it just by reading your post..

I have become fan of your 'emotions unfelt' as much as I am fan of the show. Now that you have started writing it for Khushi too it's even more fun to read it.. Loved how you combined it in the later part and the last 4 lines were the best...loved how the colors are mixed just as their emotions are intervened..

I do not want to take it away from you by saying God has gifted you with great talent.. the credit goes to you & you only for making the beginning of my day so special.. hope you keep writing.. not just on this show/ forum but otherwise too! All the best.. Love you!!

~Swapnali


aww swapnali..thank u so so muchHug i have been writing...hopefully my teachers will like it haha
im so glad u think i made ur dayHug

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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by adits7

geetu rani teri post hai jaise kahani ... khushi-arnav ki zabani..LOL..(sry i knw it bad 1)

i lkd hw emotions unfelt mein u added khushi as well along wid ASR..Thumbs Up

mwaahz meri jaan..thankie!LOL
aaj no bad ones..i know sab ko sab kuchh achha lagega..ahr cheez pe smile hoyengaWink
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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 11:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by tinsel

Awesome Poem ClapHug
I was walking one moment, and the next, time had stopped
She was in my arms, so very close to my heart
Did she know what was there in that moment shared?
Could she hear the loud beating in the silence of our stares

The things we cannot see, 
Is often what we hold close. 
What we cannot feel, 
Always effects us the most.
 

Happiness: we rarely feel it,
Some never get to hold it,
Its like a feeling unfelt,
A mystery hiding just around the corner,
and yet,
We spend our whole lives..
Trying to found our way around that corner.

I hold you in my arms,
But the soft touch of your skin is unfelt.
You embrace my body in a hug,
But your warm breath on my neck is unfelt.
Your sweet soft spoken words,
Are unfelt by my heart.

I want to feel,
What seems so far away,
But to my dismay,
Everything is left unfelt.


Dude You Rock !!!! If you have written this poem yourself you are as talented ad Geet !!! 
A really nice poem !!!
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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ridhman_naila

Hey...thnx a lot.its a treat to read ur post. :-)

hey there naila!

doods told me about ur enquiry yday...thanks dear for liking the post!
I was tied up but was really flattered by what u wroteHug

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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by geet.a

Originally posted by Radhe1085

Hello Geet, wonderful post I loved it. Specially this part
What we both wanted, was done by fate instead
Her dupatta was stuck in my cuff-link, in my hand's stead
Only this morning, I had asked her a question
It was answered tonight itself, somewhere deep I said
 
 
Because while watching the scene my thoughts were the same just this morning he asked her "pakadna chahiye tha kya" and walla fate made it possible.Embarrassed
 
 
And you know what yesterday "The Psycho creep" was saying his stars are helping him all the way but I thought its not your you idiot its "Kushi and Arnav's" which are shining very bright and we can see the proof right infront of our eyes.
 
Hey I am new here if made any wrong comments pardon me.
Loved your post and looking forward to many more.
 
 

hey there!!
welcome love!
im glad u commented hereBig smile
and thanks a lot!!
 
Thanks for the warm welcome. Will look forward to your emotions unfelt.

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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 11:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sruthi12

dat is beautiful..Smile seriously.. it couldn't have been btr.Heart.Clap 
i sometimes get a doubt dat do u peep into their heads n write d post daily..Wink 
Brilliant post!!Thumbs Up

haha aww thanks sruthi!HugHug
im so so glad u liked readingBig smile
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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 11:49am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Radhe1085

Originally posted by geet.a

Originally posted by Radhe1085

Hello Geet, wonderful post I loved it. Specially this part
What we both wanted, was done by fate instead
Her dupatta was stuck in my cuff-link, in my hand's stead
Only this morning, I had asked her a question
It was answered tonight itself, somewhere deep I said
 
 
Because while watching the scene my thoughts were the same just this morning he asked her "pakadna chahiye tha kya" and walla fate made it possible.Embarrassed
 
 
And you know what yesterday "The Psycho creep" was saying his stars are helping him all the way but I thought its not your you idiot its "Kushi and Arnav's" which are shining very bright and we can see the proof right infront of our eyes.
 
Hey I am new here if made any wrong comments pardon me.
Loved your post and looking forward to many more.
 
 

hey there!!
welcome love!
im glad u commented hereBig smile
and thanks a lot!!
 
Thanks for the warm welcome. Will look forward to your emotions unfelt.

have been writing an OS as well if ur interested Embarrassed


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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 11:50am | IP Logged
Geet You are AWESOME !!!!! So freakin talented !!! and you write w/e happened on the screen so perfectly on paper !!! 

You are a POET LAUREATE Of this Forum !!!
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