Emotions Unfelt- Arnav AND Khushi-updated!! - Page 4

Originally posted by: ILoveHussain

Hey Geeta (or is it Geet?),

This is the first post I read about today's episode... Won't be watching the episode for next 8-9 hours at least, but I can imagine how I will feel while watching it just by reading your post..

I have become fan of your 'emotions unfelt' as much as I am fan of the show. Now that you have started writing it for Khushi too it's even more fun to read it.. Loved how you combined it in the later part and the last 4 lines were the best...loved how the colors are mixed just as their emotions are intervened..

I do not want to take it away from you by saying God has gifted you with great talent.. the credit goes to you & you only for making the beginning of my day so special.. hope you keep writing.. not just on this show/ forum but otherwise too! All the best.. Love you!!

~Swapnali

Originally posted by: adits7

geetu rani teri post hai jaise kahani ... khushi-arnav ki zabani..😆..(sry i knw it bad 1)

i lkd hw emotions unfelt mein u added khushi as well along wid ASR..

Originally posted by: tinsel

Awesome Poem 👏🤗

I was walking one moment, and the next, time had stopped

She was in my arms, so very close to my heart

Did she know what was there in that moment shared?

Could she hear the loud beating in the silence of our stares

The things we cannot see, 
Is often what we hold close. 
What we cannot feel, 
Always effects us the most. 

Happiness: we rarely feel it,

Some never get to hold it,

Its like a feeling unfelt,

A mystery hiding just around the corner,

and yet,

We spend our whole lives..

Trying to found our way around that corner.

I hold you in my arms,
But the soft touch of your skin is unfelt.
You embrace my body in a hug,
But your warm breath on my neck is unfelt.
Your sweet soft spoken words,
Are unfelt by my heart.

I want to feel,
What seems so far away,
But to my dismay,
Everything is left unfelt.

Originally posted by: ridhman_naila

Hey...thnx a lot.its a treat to read ur post. :-)

Originally posted by: geet.a

hey there!!

welcome love!

im glad u commented here😃

and thanks a lot!!

Originally posted by: sruthi12

dat is beautiful..😊 seriously.. it couldn't have been btr.❤️.👏 

i sometimes get a doubt dat do u peep into their heads n write d post daily..😉 

Brilliant post!!👍🏼

Originally posted by: Radhe1085

 

Thanks for the warm welcome. Will look forward to your emotions unfelt.

Geet You are AWESOME !!!!! So freakin talented !!! and you write w/e happened on the screen so perfectly on paper !!! 

Originally posted by: tinsel

Awesome Poem 👏🤗

I was walking one moment, and the next, time had stopped

She was in my arms, so very close to my heart

Did she know what was there in that moment shared?

Could she hear the loud beating in the silence of our stares

The things we cannot see, 
Is often what we hold close. 
What we cannot feel, 
Always effects us the most. 

Happiness: we rarely feel it,

Some never get to hold it,

Its like a feeling unfelt,

A mystery hiding just around the corner,

and yet,

We spend our whole lives..

Trying to found our way around that corner.

I hold you in my arms,
But the soft touch of your skin is unfelt.
You embrace my body in a hug,
But your warm breath on my neck is unfelt.
Your sweet soft spoken words,
Are unfelt by my heart.

I want to feel,
What seems so far away,
But to my dismay,
Everything is left unfelt.

Originally posted by: subtlesapphire

hayeee☺️😍