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Emotions Unfelt- Arnav AND Khushi-updated!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
intezaar ka fruit hota hai sweet😆
yeh rahi aaj ki treat😉

Khushi

I revealed all one by one,the contents of my bag,
no apt place for a necklace such as that
But there was something ever more precious there..
didn't want to reveal it, it was not mine to share..


His mannat's key, there it was with me
Should I return it once more, or keep the key?
But i kept it outside, placed it with everything else
Felt bad for the insult, but kept quiet and to myself

Anjali ji took me to the kitchen
The best offer I had ever had
A chance to make jalebis, with a new friend of mine
So I began to talk and make jalebies with Lavanya by my side

I told her about marriage, and we hashed a plan
of making Lavanya talk to laad governor- lavanya's man
With that, I rushed out and back to home
wondering what names will be hashed up back home

Crashed into a huge wall, a solid soft wall
Enwrapped in strong arms, his figure standing so tall
I tried to pull away, but felt a pain, elsewhere
this wasn't just about my earring, I wanted to stay there...

Di told me all that had passed that day
I was concerned for her too, I wanted to say
What I told her instead was not to worry,
And walked out of her room, in a somewhat hurry

I was walking one moment, and the next, time had stopped
She was in my arms, so very close to my heart
Did she know what was there in that moment shared?
Could she hear the loud beating in the silence of our stares

I didn't want to let go, she didn't pull away either
I kept my hands where they wished to be, wishing to keep her there
But her earring was stuck, and caused her some pain
So I removed the aberrant before it drove me insane

Time stopped as we looked at each other, it seemed
there was no anger in his eyes, it was a beautiful dream
I walked away ,embarrased and reluctant
But it seemed there was something else in store, for fate didn't relent

What we both wanted, was done by fate instead
Her dupatta was stuck in my cuff-link, in my hand's stead
Only this morning, I had asked her a question
It was answered tonight itself, somewhere deep I said

There it was, a connection I didn't want to name
It was simply awkwardness, I think I was going insane
Freeing my dupatta, I almost would have fled
But he asked me, If I was okay, instead

Eyes wide open, she looked on with shock
Simply nodded with her big eyes in a kind of lock
She went away then, not that I wanted her to
I think I was going insane, and those moments in my life were few

HEr soft skin, inches from my hand
his strong hand, inches from my skin
This was surely not a new hate-less beginning?
Then, why did the man I hated, made my heart sing for a moment?

Okay guys...this is it for tonight!
LOVED today's episode!
Arnav even old looks sooo good!!
AWw- barun looked adorable!
And i really liked La today!
the precap dialogue was deep!

Hope u guys liked the post!

HAve been busy with papers, so couldn't write yday
LOVED yday's epi..lemme see if weekend a bonus post can be made :))

will write about the last scene on monday, coz it will be in continuation then 
Love to all!

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res... toh hum sab se pehle yeh sweet kahein gay... aur commentwa bhi first um first dein gay! Edited by mahi0809 - 12 years ago
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Me waiting very sweetly😍
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Oh! How sweet the fruit of thy garden😍

Crashed into a huge wall, a solid soft wall
Enwrapped in strong arms, his figure standing so tall
I tried to pull away, but felt a pain, elsewhere
this wasn't just about my earring, I wanted to stay there...

Time stopped as we looked at each other, it seemed
there was no anger in his eyes, it was a beautiful dream
I walked away ,embarrased and reluctant
But it seemed there was something else in store, for fate didn't relent

Eyes wide open, she looked on with shock
Simply nodded with her big eyes in a kind of lock
She went away then, not that I wanted her to
I think I was going insane, and those moments in my life were few

Ok ok! Before I lift your entire paragraph out, I must say it was B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L
Simply breathtaking😍 The scene and your words, both have such an effect on me❤️

Geetu, you are just amazing, I don't know how you do this but it's just amazing!😳

I loved La today!! Yes, don't be shocked, I've tried my best not to call her blah for the moment😆

She really stole the show today! Brilliant acting and comic timing! Everything was spot on!
Her chamkili style entry and Arnav's reaction to that! Hilarious🤣
"Yaha fancy dress competition ho raha hai kya?"
Love him man! he was totally conphused and messed up😆 So adorable!

For ArHi, they were just their dreamy self..bringing me into my dreamy eorld along with them😍
nothing else to add there.

Ofcourse Barun looked totally yummy..like my fav peice of chocolate cake on the stand☺️ delish!

Plese do make a weekend bonus post!! i'll take it as a going-away gift! I'm going to try to read your posts these 1 and a half months that i'm gone!😳

Love youuu geetuuu❤️

-Noorie
Edited by cute_gurl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I tried to pull away, but felt a pain, elsewhere
this wasn't just about my earring, I wanted to stay there..

Awww! geetu wat an episode...

main toh abhi bhi hosh main nahi hoon...kya type kar rahi hoon...yeh bhi pataa nahi!

This man! Consoled sis not 2 worry par iske dil  to train ki dhadaka hoga n dimaag ordered 2 check her!
I wil not talk abt the remaing part n spoil its beauty...but a single with concern and her acceptance! Wow!

Even la was cute 2day with her dream n Chamkeeli ka twin avataar!

I don't want 2 tell this but I wanted 2 pour boiling tea on Creepwa's face lifted straight from stove wen he was creepily starin Kh drinkin tea!
Nalaayak kahin ka!

I don't know wat 2 tell about the Epi n ur post!

Both were beautiful n mind blowing n Awesum n wat not!
Edited by cindrella255 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes I could tell you his favorite color's green
He loves to argue oh and it kills me
His sisters beautiful he has his father's eyes
And if you asked me if I love him
If you asked me if I love him
I'd lie

dont hit me😛
much has been already said that i dont need to ruin it😳
K thinks that chunri girne ke liyye devi maiyya ki kripa hona chchiye and it falls right on her head!! coincidence much?😉
i am suprised this boli baali gaun waali ladki has actually convinced a bimbo about marriage!!😲
personally i like much is tum theek ho?😳 it reveals he does care when he says 'chot choti cheezon mein pareshaani math lo'...
fabulous writing geetu⭐️

Edited by DaShIng_GiRl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I agree...sabraka pal meeta hota he...😍
waiting ya...😃
Posted: 12 years ago
Reserved!!!! Can't wait!!!!

damn girl!!! u write so well!!! i nearly died and went to heaven when they collided and it reminded me of that song by train:

i knew when we collided
ur the one, i have decided
whose one of my kind!!


ooo ahhh!!! cant wait for Monday and meaningful eyelock between our two love birds!!!!
Edited by minimuffin86 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you geet writing for Khusi ..you are an amazing writer its a treat to read your post and i missed it  past few days..

loved the epi..

ARHI ❤️❤️

Begining a new relationship bringing them close to each other it's  love love love ..  can't wait for Monday .Loved La's new avatar..Khusi has convinced la for marriage and she will ask ASR to marry her but i think he won't say yes..he'll probably look at khusi and be like i will say no to her ..but will you marry me with his expressive eyes ..his eyes would the talking again lol..

HEr soft skin, inches from my hand
his strong hand, inches from my skin
This was surely not a new hate-less beginning?
Then, why did the man I hated, made my heart sing for a moment?

AWESOME poetry loved every single word you have written..👏



Edited by pranatim - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
okay read karo!
updated
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Posted: 12 years ago
Brilliant Geetu but for me la overshadowed arhi today