Dilwale dulhe le jayenge-(FF) Last part updated - Page 3

Posted: 12 years ago
Part 6

Contd...

A very long and serious confrontation b/w dakshna

Naina's office 

Naina is explaning atul and seema about some work.Just then Daksh comes there ek dum gusslewali mood pe.😡Looking at daksh naina understands the situation and entrusts atul and seema some work which needs to be out of office.They both leave

Daksh furiously looks at naina, closes the door with force and comes to her

Daksh; naina..woh sab kya tha? kya kehrehti thi MRjoshi se..Wedding arrangements? kis shaadi ki?😲
Naina; daksh tum bhi na ..tumhari aur meri...after few seconds..mazaaq kar rhathi..tumhari aur sonakshi ki..aur kiski?
Daksh; Meri aur sonakshi ki? tumhara dimaag to teek hain na? tum jaante bhi ho ki tum kya kehrahi ho?😡😲
Naina; mera dimaag bilkul teek hain aur mein achi se jaante hoon mein kya kehrahi hoon
Daksh; acha..tho tum mujhe samjhati kyu nahi? bolo aur mein sonakshi se shaadi kyu karunga?
Naina; kyunki sonakshi tumse pyar karti hein aur 4 din mein shaadi hain?
Daksh ; aur hamara pyar ..uska kya?
Naina; ye baat itni zaroori nahi hey, jab ayi ne mana kar diya tho....

Daksh ki dimmag ki batti jal jati hain, and he remembers he never told naina what his ayi said. aur uske ander ka lawyer jaag jaata hain

Daksh; tumhe kaise pata ayi ne mana kar diya? mein ne tho tumhe nahi bataya?

Naina realises her mistake and covers up by saying; Isme kaunsi badi  baat hein , agar ayi maan gayi hothi tho tum aisa utara hua chehra le kar ghoomte kya? aur mein ne tumhe pehle se kehdiya ki ayi ki aashirvaad ke bina hum ek nahi ho sakthe.
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Daksh right now is not in a condition to analyse facts..so he gives up

Daksh; Ayi ne nahi mana kiya iss ka matlab ye nahi ki mein sonakshi se shaadi karlunga aur hum dondo alag ho jayenge,
..He cools up lil
Daksh comes near naina and says; Mein tumhe kisi bhi kheemat par khona nahi chahta..kisi bhi kheemat par nahi.. Mein itni aasani se hamare pyar ko haarne nai dunga❤️
. Maine ayi se sirf ek baar baat kiya..iss baare hum dono saath mein jayenge aur ayi ko manalenge..ayi zaroor manegi..chalo abhi chalte haina

He holds naina's hand and starts moving..but naina doesnt move.Daksh stops and turns at her.Naina already know what ayi's answer would be but she doesn't want to make daksh feel that its ayi who is villian in love story so she decides to take blame on her self

Daksh; naina , kya soch rahi ho ? chalo
Naina; nahi daksh. ayi se baat karna ka koi fayida nahi..agar ayi ne maan bhi liya ,hum ek nahi ho sakte
Daksh; aisa kyu keh rahi ho?
Naina turns her back to daksh and after few moments she says; kyunki main tumse shaadi nahi karna chahti...

daksh is shocked(obviously)

Daksh; kya kaha tumne..phir se kaho
Naina; mein tumse shaadi nhai karna chahthi

Daksh ki ander ki dard aur gussa combine ho jaate hain and he holds naina with two hands and says' kyu nahi karna chahti?

Naina; kal raat jagde ke baad mujhe ehsaas hua ki hum dondo saath mein khush nahi rehsakte..hamesha  jagda hota rahega,Mein ek peaceful life chahthi hoon  aur

Daksh; cuts the sentence in between and says aur.( sarcastic way). lagta hain bahut jaldi ehsaas hua tumhe iss baat ka ,aur uss pal ka kya jab hum ek doosre saath khush the..unn ki koi value nahi aur mein nahi maanta ki kal ki jagde ki wajah se tum ye keh rahi ho

 daksh; Naina..iss se jayada serious jagade hue hein hamare beech mein aur maine tumse maafi bhi maanga..phir problem kya hain..kyu aisi keh rahi ho? kyu.??.

Naina; main koi explanation nahi dena chahti...saying this  she starts leaving , daksh holds her hand tightly and stops her

Daksh; Tumhe mere sawalo ka jawaab dena padega.naina.Tum iss tarah apne pyar mein mujhe paagal banakar, beech mein nahi chodsakthi.
Naina; ye meri zinadagi hain aur mein jo chahti hoon kar sakti hoon

Daksh; acha..tumhari zindagi..tumhari nahi damnit.. ye.hamari zindagi ka sawaal hai naina..uss pal jab humne apna pyar confess kiya.uss waqt se tum aur mein " hum bangaye hain aur hamari zaindagi faisle tum akele le sakthi..ye baat ache se samajhlo
Naina is speechless and keeps looking at daksh with blank expression..Daksh cools down a bit

Daksh; naina , mein tumse bahut pyar karta hoon aur tumhare bina jeene ke baare mein tho mein soch bhi nahi sakta ,I luv u naina

Both get lost, dakshu fully emotional ho jaat hain aur aankhon mein se asu nikalte hain
Naina comes into this world and takes daksh hands off her and says

Naina; kya daksh? itne saare film ke dialogues( u idiot, sry cdnt control)..aur kisi ke bina marjaana..ye sab sirf kehne ke liye,Waise bhi mere aane se pehle bhi tumhari khud ki zinadgi thi...tab kaise jeete the

Daksh; puts hands on naina( Aadat hein)...and says..' haan tum teek kehrahi ho.Tumhari aane se pehle bhi meri ek zindagi thi..lekin uss waqt..bas meri zindagi jaa rahithi.kuch bhi khass nahi tha...kuch bhi nahi..Leki tumhare aane se meri zinadagi badalgayi..poori tarah se

Arey mujhe ye bhi pata nahi tha ki mein bhi kisis se pyar karsakta hoon, mera dil bhi kisi ke liye dhadak sakta hain..

Jab mein peeche mudh kar dekhta hoon tho mujhe aisa lagta hain meri zinadagi uss waqt se shuru huyi jab hum pehli baar mille the aur uss waqt poora hua jab tum meri pyar bani..mujhe tumhari aadat pad gayi ya phir ye kahu ki I am addicted to u...tumhara bina nahi rehsakta...

Iss adhoore daksh ko tumne pooraa kiya naina ..tumne..tumhara pyar ne,ab isse phir se adhoora mat banavo..seh nahi pavunga..dil tooth jayega mera..aur ye kisi film ke dialogues nahi..mere dil ka hein

( I always have a feeling that the love daksh puts in his words in SSBN for naina is verymuch less compared to what is expressed in his eyes..Just thought of bringing it out...)

both eyes are filled with tears rolling down...😭...

Naina wipes her tears; daksh..pls mujhe akela chod dho aur gar ek pal ke kiye bhi tumne mujhse sacha pyar kiya tho mujhse se kuch bhi mat poocho, lekin hum ek nahi hosakte..saying this she turns her back to daksh..Slowly the song is played in back ground

Tadap tadap ke iss dil se aah nikalthi rahi..mujhko saja di pyar ki,aisa kya guna kiya..tho looth gaye hum teri mohobaat mein😭

Daksh  looks at her for some time with pain and starts going from there, slowly peeche mud ke dekhta hain naina ko.and when he turns, naina looks at him...Daksh leaves from there closing office doors.. with heavy hr8 walking like lost, goes into his room closes the door
( jism mujhe deke mitti ka seeshe sa dil kyu banaya)..song 
...
Naina bhi asu baha rahi hein, suddenly door opens she turns back and gets shocked...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice and intense confrontation scene 👏 Agree with u  in SSBN that the love daksh puts in his words for naina is very much less compared to what is expressed in his eyes... It might be bcos Gaurav is too good with expressions... 😃 and the cv's can't express in that way...

Amazing dialogues... Daksh ka poora dil ka haal kholeke raha diya hai... 👏

If I am not wrong is Naina shocked to see Aai ?...😲
Edited by DakshnaFan - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
heck yar...iss bar tune muje rula diya😭...
yar ur rite, daksh ka sara pyaar s always evident in his eyes..
and ha, evn i thnk its ayi who's @ d dr nw...
Posted: 12 years ago
Wrong guess guys..its not ayi...😆

Part 7..contd...

Guess who is standing there?? pretty simple..hamari pyari akruthi😉

Aku worriedly comes near naina, seeing aku naina wipes her tears and tries to act cool
Aku; naina kya hua? tum teek tho ho? kya baat hain?

Naina; kuch nahi akruthi

Akruthi; dada aur tumhara jagada hua kya?
Naina; haan..tumhare dada ko mujhse jagade karne ke alawa aur koi kaam ho tab na..

Aku comforts naina. naina asks aku to leave her alone for sometime is she doesn't mind.Aku willingly agrees and asks naina to tk cr and leaves from there.

On her way to P-ZOO

Aku; Kuch tho baat zaroor hain, jo dada aur naina ke beech mein hua.warna naina iss halat mein? kis baat ki wajah se jagada hua hoga? kahi.???... she guesses what issue might be and says
Mujhe dada se baat karna padega and goes to meet her dada

Daksh's room

Ro ro ke,😭 asu bahake😭 daksh apna dard ko kam karne ki koshsis kar raha hein.💔..just then aku knocks the door

Aku; dada..darwaja kholona..mujhe aap se baat karna hain
Daksh; akruthi..pls abhi nahi..pls mujhe akela choddho..pls

Aku notices his tone aur woh confirm ho jaati hein ki baat itna simple nahi hain.She decides to leave him for sometima but with determination to speak with him later..Aku leaves

Evening...P-ZOO

Sare Zoo ke log assemble ho gaye..chai ki ghanti bajne par except daksh..Ayi wants to take tea to him.but aku offers to do so
.She tries to knock the door but finds it open..She goes inside aur daksh window par khada hain with his back  to aku

Aku; dada..
Daksh turns back, aku notices his swollen eyes and sloses the door,comes near him worriedly..and says

Aku; kya hua dada? pls mujhe batavo..pls
Daksh breaks down😭

Aku tells him that she knows that he and naina had a big fight and she can understand his pain and she also knows that he can't share his pain with anybody else , as no one knows their love except her...saying this she comforts him and offers him water and tea

After some time daksh becomes lil normal..and he tells aku about his conversation with ayi .Aku is double shocked😲 hearing this and she says

Aku; dada ye aap kya keh rahe ho? ayi ne mana kardiya, leki kyu,ayi tho naina ko bahut pasand karthi haina na..oh..tho iss ki wajah se ye jagada😲

Daksh; nahi akruthi..ayi ki wajah se nahi naina ki wajah se..and he tells her she refused to get married to him, inspite of his assurance that he will convince ayi

Aku is even more shocked and she says; nahi dada, naina aisa nhai kar sakthi..aur gar usne aisa kiya tho isske peeche koi tho wajah jaroor hogi( smartie aku)

Daksh; mein jaanta hoon ,lekin samaj mein nahi aa raha aakhir problem kya hain, kyu naina aise kar rahi he? ek taraf ,ayi jo shaadi rokhna nahi chahti aur doosre taraf naina jo shaadi nahi karna chahti😆.main kya karu akruti?😲

Aku; dada pls shaant ho javo..After some time she says; dada; sonakhshi tho apki aur naina ka rishta jaanthi hein..aur usne kaha tha woh mana bhi kardegi.aap usse baat karo😆

Daksh; kya sonakshi?😡 akruthi tumne bhi uske baaton par viswas kar liya sab ki tarah😡.woh aisa kuch nahi karegi..agar karnewali hote tho tab ka mana kardeti..woh bahut chalak hein😛.Sab log uski baaton mein aagaye, lekin mein nahi( I know u wont).Mujhe pata hain ki woh natak kar rahi hey

Aku; shayad aap teek keh rahe ho,and she tells daksh the incident hoe sonakshi caught her with the bandaged hand while she was about to fall down...

Daksh; remembers all the events( poison , haath ka fracture..etc etc)...iss ka matlab mera shak sahi tha...Akruthi acha hua ki tum mujhse baat karne ke liye aagayi..

Daksh gets up from bed and says...ab mujhe samaj mein aagaya ki mujhe kya karna aur kaise ?😛

AKU; Dada mein aapke saath hoon...saying this she is about to leave, daksh asks her about ayush and whether she is happy with marriage.Aku says she is not sure , but she will soon decide on something ...she leaves

Daksu 😳...mera sweet smartie lawyer ab tayar hein...dushmano ki waat lagane ke liye aur apna pyar ko paane ke liye..❤️..

PS'; Guys..Now no more emotional drama.in coming parts...jo kuch bhi hoga..dakshu ki style mein hoga...get ready...Hope u will like it

Edited by lucky.m - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
He He nice suspense of Aku 😊 Now really waiting how u are gonna trap Sohini 😊😍
Atleast in ur FF Dakshu bahut smart hai...😉
Posted: 12 years ago
I know u all want to see daksh like this and I promise in coming parts u will love him ...😉

I really want daksh to take the lead and prove his love and main reason y I choose daksh as lead in this FF is I am very sad with portyral of daksh in SSBN and I want to bring out an different angle of daksh...ek dumsuper smart, realiable and commited who fights for his love😃

Iss liye naina ko paasive state mein rakh diya😆 , anyways in SSBN naina is trying to do something..so I thought in FF let it be daksh...😉.

U will get an fair idea of how daksh  is going to trap sohini in part 8 & 9.😉..just wait..I will post it by todays end or most probably tomorrow morning...and  I want to  be faster than SSBN CV's in proving sohini's crime...😛

Lets see...
Posted: 12 years ago
nice.. pls do continue...
Posted: 12 years ago
Part -8

Contd...

❤️Dakshu on mission- meri jaan naina❤️

Night ; P-zoo

Sab ka dinner kahatm hogaya aur sab apne room mein hain.Dakshu comes out in his night wear and looks at naina's room..doors closed😕

In kitchen

Ayi is finshing her final kitchen work..just then naina comes there and tells ayi that she had fulfilled her promise and once all the wedding arrangements are done, she will leave for darjeeling and she doesn't want anyone to know this except her...

Ayi thanks naina..and says she can understand her pain..and she is sorry,she doesn't have anything against naina..but it was too late , but she dont have to leave for darjeeling..but naina says..she have to...😕

Naina leaves from there goes to her room,She finds the doors of daksh room open,she just peeps in and sees daksh is busy with some work and she leaves with sad and pain
Dakshu feels naina was there and turns back  but till then naina left

PLAN Implementation -step 1

Daksh calls up sonakshi.Sonakshi is damn excited to recieve his call( very rare he does that).Daksh asks her how she is now and asks her whether she told her parents about his love matter..Sonakshi as usual starts up her drama..and daksh starts up his drama saying she need not tell her parents as he and naina are not together anymore as he can't go against his family 's wish...😆

Sonakshi is dying with happiness😆 but expresses surprise how did this happen and daksh say its not important,,he just called to inform her wishes good night and disconnects call and keeps phone on table.

 Table par love globe hain...looking at it

daksh; Naina...mujhe pata nahi tumne aisa kyu kiya ..lekin mein aisa nahi hone dunga...tum mujhse kabhi alag nahi ho sakthi😍

P-Zoo( same night)

Rohini gets a call from sonakshi and she slowly goes to terrace to speak with her.Sonakshi gives her the good news and rohini also gets excited and she says she is very happy, atlast they could get rid of naina and sonakshi thanks her for her tips and help in changing lab report, in aku's falling issue and hot plate idea(though it was flop) 

 Rohini says..she knew that changing report would make things turn in sonakhsi's favour.and will win her daksh's confidence and aku's issue will gain her family's love and hatred for naina..they both share a hearty laugh celebrating there shortlived success( If only they knew what was coming there way)😆.and she is about to say something..she hears a sound/😲She gets panic dis connects the call saying she would speak later, turns back...She finds no one..she relaxes and leaves from terrace😆

Daksh room

Daksh comes into his room and finds ayi in his room.Ayi tries to comfort him...but daksh says she need not worry as he is ready for marriage

Ayi; sach chintu..tum sach much khush hain iss shaadi se
Daks; haan ayi...maine apna mann banaliya hein ki mujhe ye shaadi karni hain aur woh bhi aapki pasand ki ladki se😉( I know kaun hai woh..humsab ko pata hain)
Ayi becomes happy and leaves from there😆
Daksh; shaadi tho meri hogi..lekin..sonakshi se nahi...😉uss se jisse mein pyar karta hoon..meri..

U know the answer...right guys😉.Aage aage dekho dakshu kaise sonhin ki watt lagata hain and I promise all ur wishes will come true..😛

PS; What say guys? Kaisa hai?😲

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Edited by lucky.m - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by ntsindia


nice.. pls do continue... 


Yaar neetu..Inta formal comment.😕.I am lucky dear.😉.ek pal mein paraya kar diya😭..just kidding and pls..itna formal mat ho javo..💔 Ajeeb feel kar rahi  hoo

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