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SURROGATE RELATIONS # 4, PART 33 ON 13/10 (Page 28)

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 9:20pm | IP Logged
excellent.; loved this part too

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 10:04pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shalini01

this was a perfect update. how can maan be so perfect and understanding and caring and all those good things. guys like maan are very hard to find. thanks for the PM, do continue soon.


yes i think guys like these r found only in fantasies...LOL
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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 10:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by seemamary

This was surprising to me that geet does not want to marry maan because she hates sex but i cna understand her situation. Know that when maan is there nothing can go wrong. continue soon.


i feel it is difficult for a woman to accept physical love once she is violated...and  raped by her uncle and his friend was  Geet's first brush with sex...
since maan already loves her and is aware of her state of mind, he will build her confidence in marital love.
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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by rockin_gal

Yes it definitely did make me happy Smile but wat made me sad was tht next update will be on FRIDAYy [:0] nooo but atleast forbidden love will be update so its all good lol.. And ya it was a lovely and marvelous update lovedd it Big smile


actually i wanted to post Forbidden update before this update...but i found myself finishing this part rather than writing forbidden.Embarrassed...
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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 10:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by hinal_maaneet

wowww loved it di
im so in love with this maan
he is so patient n can go to any extent to convince her for the marriage 
n the best part he keeps on arguing that it is a girl baby


and i've still not decided whom i shud supportLOL


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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 10:20pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by krndr

Loved the update
 
Geet feeling she's not worthy of Maan and Maan trying to convince her by his proposal of convinience marriage was really potrayed in an excellent manner by you bindu.
 
In betwn their daughter and son argument was so cute
 
I am sure Geet will accept the proposal by evening and Maan will make sure that she does accept with Daadi's help.
 
Btwn what were the documents Maan showed Brij plz mention about them
 
Continue soon dear
Will be waiting


thank u...
the documents were the marriage certificate of Maan and geet...this part (28) is actually a flash back ...maan manipulated the documents to make it look like they were already married when Brij tried to grab Geet at KM. ...


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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 10:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ramhari

Super sweet part.
Maan was at his best.
He shooed away Brij and planned very well to make Geet his .
Geet too came out with the darkest and deepest of her feelings.
Her confession was too much.
Maan's strategy was superb.
He bought time which would eventually heal every wound.
Loved their confrontation.
Now waiting for their marriage.


time and Maan's soothing presence with heal her wounds... now he can have more freedom to woo her coz she will be officially his wife...and he does hint that building her confidence as a wife is his responsibility

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 10:26pm | IP Logged
Lovely update. Continue next part soon dear. Thanx for pm.

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