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SURROGATE RELATIONS # 4, PART 33 ON 13/10 (Page 27)

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 6:58pm | IP Logged
very nice update... very nice...

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by bansipatel

Awesome update..!!
loved it loadz...!!
loved the way he kissed her cheek...he took the advantage...LOL
update soon..!!



he never misses a chance...geet was so shocked that maan was reading on pregnancy and knew that now the baby cud hear what was happening on the outside world that she cudn't even argue when he called the baby as a girl again!!
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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 7:53pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Remya_Pillai

she s not in the state of understanding pure luv and sex...
bt maan vl make her understand the difference..description of plight of geet is really awsum...congrats...


i feel that once a woman is violated it wud be difficult for her to accept physical love. even if love exist in her heart the horror and pain will linger...i guess she wud need not just love but counseling too...
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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 7:57pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by simm28

BINDU so nice update
I  just love this maan
love their conversation
that is the best part always
I just love ur ff. always  waiting
4 the update. hope geet will
say yes.just can't wait 4 
ur next update now.


i do tend to take the story forward  thru conversations and  thoughts... coz i'm bad in descriptionsEmbarrassed...
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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zahra15

it was awesome...i loved their conversation...n i guess maan is right...the marriage of convenience might do the trick...this was the best part for me:

you are wrong sweet heart, he thought, so wrong about it. I would never have sex with u'I would make love to you. May be you wouldn't know the difference if I told you that, not now anyway! But I assure you I will make you see the difference. I'll prove it to you that love between man and woman can be beautiful and with the right partner it can become magical. I will be the one to introduce you to that magic, my sweet Geet.



love ur emoticon Smile

marriage of convenience has opened immense possiblity for Maan ...it gives him the chance to be more closer to Get without her feeling awkward about it...after all a husband can hold her hand, caress her and kiss her Wink

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by eiya22

errr i just feel like tearing that brij apartAngry literely...hw culd that bCensored do such a  thing to geet..
"you are wrong sweet heart, he thought, so wrong about it. I would never have sex with u...I would make love to you. May be you wouldn't know the difference if I told you that, not now anyway! But I assure you I will make you see the difference. I'll prove it to you that love between man and woman can be beautiful and with the right partner it can become magical. I will be the one to introduce you to that magic, my sweet Geet." Day Dreamingi loved tis..maaan...chechi a big hug 4 u...do continue soon


thank u for the hug...
it is so sad na that men like Brij really exist and sometimes is never punishedCry

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:08pm | IP Logged
awesome update I'm loving your story...

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by tanya_vi

Oh I loved it!!Such a sweet update..
 My poor lil' Geet..so young..so insecure..Maan will have to have lot of patience..but something's in his favor..she loves him..hope toh  hai Maan babu!!Smile


their mutual love and counseling will help geet overcome this... she  accepts maan's comforting touch already...he will just intensify it to caresses and occasional kisses... Wink

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