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SURROGATE RELATIONS # 4, PART 33 ON 13/10 (Page 21)

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 7:44am | IP Logged
when i read this part in my mobile i was then on the way of my home...now i m in homw with my lappy in ur ff page again only to comment for this part...after geet revalation maans mologue...just superb...so simple thought but too much sweet...really loved it...i dont know how maan will win her heart...but i know those steps will b sweet also...

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 7:47am | IP Logged
Muaahh...muahhh...

Simply superb

Amazing...
I just loved it...

Aww...Maan you are mindblowing...
N this time Geet you better say yes...


Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 7:50am | IP Logged
excellent update...
wonderful convo  between maaneet...loved it
eagerly waiting for the next part...

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:02am | IP Logged
Awesome, Amazing. The lines that Maan spoke, "I will not have sex with u, but will make love to u", was too good. Now what will b Sameera's reactions.

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:10am | IP Logged
what an emotional one, bindu..at first i was like sob sob, hearing geet's reasoning, but then our munda maan knows how to convince her, doesn't he ;-) oh one more thing. Love how you don't make us wait for too long in between updates..

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:20am | IP Logged
I loved the update

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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:22am | IP Logged
Originally posted by anupamachem

Excellently penned down "Geet's plight, Maan's perseverance, a beautiful bonding between them". Loved the convo, loved the way Maan teases Geet regarding the gender of the child and take the opportunity to kiss her cheeks in spite of a tense atmosphere.
Loved the lines

"I would never have sex with u,I would make love to you. May be you wouldn't know the difference if I told you that, not now anyway! But I assure you I will make you see the difference. I'll prove it to you that love between man and woman can be beautiful and with the right partner it can become magical. I will be the one to introduce you to that magic, my sweet Geet."
that is the beauty of the relation between a true couple.

 
thank u...
Maan is such a mature person...and now he understands geet better...he knows what she has been thru' and will do everything in his power to help her out of his insecurity...
 understanding ur partner and the willingness to adjust urself for ur spouse is what makes life beautiful


actually, i don't think the difference that maan puts b/w lovemaking and sex is really my own creationEmbarrassed...i remember to have read something to such essence in a romance ... sometimes the impact of what u have read remains with u...


Edited by bangalores - 19 September 2011 at 9:40am
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Posted: 19 September 2011 at 8:25am | IP Logged
congrats on the new thread
amazing update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm

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