SURROGATE RELATIONS # 4, PART 33 ON 13/10 - Page 11

Posted: 12 years ago
Excellently penned down "Geet's plight, Maan's perseverance, a beautiful bonding between them". Loved the convo, loved the way Maan teases Geet regarding the gender of the child and take the opportunity to kiss her cheeks in spite of a tense atmosphere.
Loved the lines

"I would never have sex with u,I would make love to you. May be you wouldn't know the difference if I told you that, not now anyway! But I assure you I will make you see the difference. I'll prove it to you that love between man and woman can be beautiful and with the right partner it can become magical. I will be the one to introduce you to that magic, my sweet Geet."
that is the beauty of the relation between a true couple.
Posted: 12 years ago
absolutely fantastic...what a way to pacify her at the moment...great work mr. msk...slowly he will convince her otherwise...it is cute that they have already started arguing about being boy/girl...
 
have a question though...what is your other ff - forbidden??
Posted: 12 years ago
very beautifull dear update oon
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome fabulous...
plz continue soon
Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
i was actually reading before u send me pm 😆
awesome update
Posted: 12 years ago
Poor girl,brij had destroyed her innocence n lefft an huge impact on her
maan will make her believe in herself n their luv.awsome prt
Posted: 12 years ago
absolutely loved this update.. The gentle yet firm way Maan guided her to accepting his proposal(well soon enough she will ,after Daadi presses for it), how innocently she voiced her concern, her flaw (as she looks at it).. and the way she fought to NOt ruin his life.. too touching.

and very well written. 
Lovedd it.

Do continue soon.😳


yayy!! cant wait to see how they are after marriage.. How she slowly learns to deal with her past and her demons.. with Maan. This is going to be sooper!

Posted: 12 years ago
ur story is so touching that
each update is special
loved it
Posted: 12 years ago
CONGRATS on the new thread...🥳

awesome part...

geet let him know what she is fearing...what was in her mind...

n in turn maan in his mind made sure she will never feel like that again...he will love her,...n make love to her...

continue soon,...

thnx for PM...

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