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SURROGATE RELATIONS # 4, PART 33 ON 13/10 - Page 79

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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent
awesome
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it ...awesome!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am confused...last ch we read he left for office and this upadte he is hurt...u ate up something or did i miss a ch in bw..🤔
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Posted: 12 years ago
like this intelligent Maan
he is making proof against Brij so he remains in jail
 
loved his replies in response to Geet's "why"
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

yesh😭

 
i was slleeeping😭
 
me will cry little😭😭😭
 
then sulk😳
 
then remeber that u had a bare chested maan in the update..😍
 
thoda drool karis😍v
 
waise hi precap ke baad haal bura hai😍
 
 then come back to comment...😆😆😆



haila...

i was wondering how to proceed after that scene...now i can break off to another part...but tlc for sure...😊 and another shot at bare chested maan😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
This content was originally posted by: mchopra

I am confused...last ch we read he left for office and this upadte he is hurt...u ate up something or did i miss a ch in bw..🤔



the marriage and the wake up scene r really a flash back...started with maan's thought once he packed brij off to jail...that is chapters 28 to the present chapter...
brij encounter happens in parts 26 nd 27...which is 2 days after maan's return from abroad...nd parts 28-31 happen during those days...😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
I really did not expect that you would update on a sunday!!!!! So i was totally thrilled when i saw the update!!!!!!!! Thanks a lottt for that...

The update was tooo goood... I totally loved it!!!!!!!!!!! I loved the way Maan was trying to comfort her and tell her the truth and make her understand... and daadi is a sweet heart... am totally loving the post marriage maaneet bonding,,,,,, 

Brilliant, awesome and sweet update... waiting for the remaining tom!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh ok...i shall read them again...thnks..
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Posted: 12 years ago

loved it

And thanx for that note
I was really confused at first
but now confusions cleared and I also know what papers Maan put in front of Brij
 
Awesome work dear
You actually weaved the story and all the parts so well
 
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved th teaser diii, ab jaldi se update bhi dedijiye 😉 and how come you gave an update on sunday... thanx for taking that risk...😊