SURROGATE RELATIONS # 4, PART 33 ON 13/10 - Page 24

Finished all chapters...once again.

Originally posted by: Water.

Finished all chapters...once again.

Bliss.

But m teary, sad, emotional..

me also teary after reading last part and knowing about what impact one incident has done to geet
maan is so caring

Edited by Water. - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Water.

Hey,

After re reading your FF, I went on an emotional ride and penned down a poem for ur FF.

The Imperfect Wife! (Geet's POV)

My life has been filled with an abyss of darkness so deep

That night herself loses her way to the emergence of dawn

My days remain burdened under the dark pool of sorrows

And my nights strive under the blanket of my fears and my terrorizing dreams

I come from a past from which there is no return

I do not know who I am or where I belong

Since I have no identity of my own 

Whatever I had was taken away from me

I have lost my heart, my body and my soul

I live in shame so deeply engraved that there is no indication of light

Because my body is tainted and ruined and can be never repaired

I have become small, as small as the smallest particle of an atom

As hollow, as the deepest hollow of a drum

My pain is as terrorizing as the life imagined in hell

Therefore, my each day is spent living in despair

I made the mistake of falling in love with you

Knowing you belong to someone else

You showed me with your utmost care and concern 

And I just could not stop myself from feeling for you.

I think about you day and night

I want to be held, touch, caressed and protected by you

Because you make me feel like a human again

You make me feel that I belong in this world

And that I am a woman who can be cared, loved and cherished

Yet, I am scared, scared to come close to you

Because I am not capable of loving you 

Because I know that I cannot make you happy 

I can never fulfill your desires if I become your wife

How can I take away your life, your dreams and your happiness?

When you are the best thing that ever happened to me

I love you more than what my heart desires

And therefore, I do not want to you make this mistake

For asking me to be by your side

When I know that all I can be is The Imperfect Wife!

you finally wrote a poem for my FF
wow!! feel my heart bursting with gratitude...you have expressed geet's feelings so well...
thank u so much for gracing my FF with your poem
can i use this in the story, if i manage to develop  a suitable situation?
Edited by bangalores - 12 years ago

Hey,

   Awesome update...I loved the way geet explained herself...I pity her..I loved maan...how he tried to convince her

Edited by harshdb - 12 years ago

hey...Beautiful update

very well written...

loved the way u described  geet's feeling...

wow.. what a love...☺️

@water, Edited by sulb - 12 years ago