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SURROGATE RELATIONS # 4, PART 33 ON 13/10 - Page 16

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Posted: 12 years ago
when i read this part in my mobile i was then on the way of my home...now i m in homw with my lappy in ur ff page again only to comment for this part...after geet revalation maans mologue...just superb...so simple thought but too much sweet...really loved it...i dont know how maan will win her heart...but i know those steps will b sweet also...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Muaahh...muahhh...

Simply superb

Amazing...
I just loved it...

Aww...Maan you are mindblowing...
N this time Geet you better say yes...


Updt soon.
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
excellent update...
wonderful convo  between maaneet...loved it
eagerly waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome, Amazing. The lines that Maan spoke, "I will not have sex with u, but will make love to u", was too good. Now what will b Sameera's reactions.
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Posted: 12 years ago
what an emotional one, bindu..at first i was like sob sob, hearing geet's reasoning, but then our munda maan knows how to convince her, doesn't he ;-) oh one more thing. Love how you don't make us wait for too long in between updates..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: anupamachem

Excellently penned down "Geet's plight, Maan's perseverance, a beautiful bonding between them". Loved the convo, loved the way Maan teases Geet regarding the gender of the child and take the opportunity to kiss her cheeks in spite of a tense atmosphere.
Loved the lines

"I would never have sex with u,I would make love to you. May be you wouldn't know the difference if I told you that, not now anyway! But I assure you I will make you see the difference. I'll prove it to you that love between man and woman can be beautiful and with the right partner it can become magical. I will be the one to introduce you to that magic, my sweet Geet."
that is the beauty of the relation between a true couple.


 
thank u...
Maan is such a mature person...and now he understands geet better...he knows what she has been thru' and will do everything in his power to help her out of his insecurity...
 understanding ur partner and the willingness to adjust urself for ur spouse is what makes life beautiful


actually, i don't think the difference that maan puts b/w lovemaking and sex is really my own creation😳...i remember to have read something to such essence in a romance ... sometimes the impact of what u have read remains with u...
Edited by bangalores - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on the new thread
amazing update
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Mehek25

Wonderful update dear.

Man is so very caring and considerate. 
truly mushy but exceedingly sweet.
What a caring hubby he will make.
hope Sameera accepts his decision and does not create any problems. 
Pls continue soon. 
Loving it more day by day
Thanx for pm.



i do turn mushy time and after, na? 😊
i think i have not convinced u that Sam is really good...ok will do that in the next part😆




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Posted: 12 years ago
EXCELLENT

the only word to describe it

just waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: DilMaaneet

THAT WAS JUST TOOO GUD !!!👏

SPECIALLY THE TALK...😃
I JUST LOVED THE WAY MAAN MADE THE DIFFERENCE B/W MAKING LOVE N HAVING SEX...😳
THE SAME THING U USED IN "FORBIDDEN" ALSO, WEN MAAN THOUGHT HE DID SEX N GEET THOUGHT SHE MADE LOVE...
THE STORY IS PROGRESSING TOO WELL...😊
THANKS 4 PM...😛
CONTINUE SOON ...



yeah it does seem repetitive, na? but suited both the stories...nd this role reversal is what makes the delay in forbidden update😳