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Fanfic: second chance chap16,17lastchap pg 32,33 (Page 32)

shivanirajput Goldie

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 4:53am | IP Logged
oh god that was an amazing update
i knew that sameer will going to create trouble
feeling so bad for misha and jai
i hope soon everything will be alright
update soon

tamannamalik Goldie

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 5:06am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shivanirajput

oh god that was an amazing updatethank u sooo muchSmile
i knew that sameer will going to create trouble sameer cant see piya with abhay
feeling so bad for misha and jaijeh will be fineSmile
i hope soon everything will be alright everything will be fine in the next chaptersSmile
update soon

tamannamalik Goldie

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged
chapter 16
We decided that Rohan should be able to visit jeh.
"Ok, honey. Uncle jeh is sleeping, but he can hear you. You can talk to him as if he was awake, but you have to be careful with him." I explained. Rohan nodded and entered the room with a serious face.
"Hey Uncle jeh, its me... Rohan." he said and walked slowly to the bed.
"Mum said that you are sleeping, but you can hear me..." Rohan crawled on the bed and talked to jeh like he was awake, he told him about home and about the kindergarden. I saw that misha was really thankful that we had allowed Rohan to come here. It was good for jeh to feel the innocence of his nephew.
"Rohan, its time to go." I said and put my hands on his shoulders.
"Ok Mum. One more thing... Uncle jeh, I want to give you my football-teddy. You know, the one I got from dad to my birthday." he said and put the little teddy into jehs arm.
"That is so kind of you, honey." I said proud.
"Lets go. I think jeh needs rest." said abhay and we headed all for the door, suddenly misha stopped and put her hand on her heart, then she turned to jeh... his eyes were open.
Oh my got, jeh!" misha ran back to the bed and hugged him tight.
I stood there, not able to move, it was like I wasnt inside my body, like I watched this scene from another level.abhay  also stood at the bed, tears falling from his eyes.
"How are you man?" jeh looked at him and winked.
"I feel like a car has knocked me down." he whispered.
The doctor came in with a few nurses.
"Please, step aside, we have to check on him." They did the check up. misha and abhay stood in one corner of the room, Rohan and me in the other one.
"Mrs. khurana." the doctor walked over to her.
"How is he?" asked misha excited.
"Well, I dont know what happened, but he seems to be alright so far. It was very important that he wakes up. You can stay a few minutes, but he needs to rest, ok?" I felt like a stone fell from my heart, but it was just too much at that moment. I lend down to Rohan.
"Honey, please go to Dad. You can drive home with him, Ill come home later." I said to him. He nodded and walked to abhay who was still crying.
I took a walk through the park, where abhay and me had met a few months ago.
It felt like all this have been years ago, not months. So much had happened in this time. Rohans illness, meeting chand Uncle, Sameer,abhay, mishas pregnancy... My head spun and I had to sit down, I took a seat under our tree and suddenly the tears began to flow. All the tears I had held back in the last few weeks sprung from my eyes, my body was shaking and I just couldnt stop crying. I had the feeling that a part of the heavy weight that was on my shoulders had vanished. I adducted my legs, lay my head on my knees and closed my eyes for a moment to calm myself down.

piya!" I heard abhay calling me. When I opened my eyes I saw him running towards me.
"Oh my god piya are you ok?" He asked concerned when he reached me.
"abhay? Whats up?!" I asked confused.
"I was searching for you, you didnt come home for hours. I thought something happened to you." he explained in panic.
"No, Im fine abhay, I just..." When I looked around I saw that it was already dusk.
"Im so sorry, abhay. I must have fallen asleep." I looked apologising at him, he only nodded and hugged me tight.
"Its ok, piya. Just dont do that ever again, ok?" I nodded, the tears began to well up in my eyes again.
"Why did you leave? jeh asked for you." abhay kissed my forhead.
"Im sorry, I just couldnt face him. Not when Im..." but abhay cut me off.
"When you what. I hope you dont think that this all is your fault." I looked up at him, his face showed an expression I had never seen before on him.
"Yes I do,abhay. If I wouldnt have gone out with Sameer..." abhay took my face in his hands and looked intensively at me.
"Dont think that piya Its not your fault, ok? Its not your fault. I should have prevented that Sameer attacked you. It should have been me that was hurt, not jeh" I was shocked by what he said. Slowly I moved my hand up and stroke soft his cheek.
"abhay.. I whispered. Now I saw that he had misty eyes. His eyes showed so much pain that I almost couldnt bare it.
"Im a living desaster. I make all the people around me unlucky and hurt them." he suddenly got up and hit the tree with his fist, it began to bleed.
I got up and hugged him from the back.
"abhay, you are the best that could happen to me. Im only lucky when you are with me. Rohan adores you, you are his Dad and you mean the world to him... And forjeh , he was hurt because he wanted to protect not only me, but also you. You are his best friend and I know how much he suffered in the last years werent in talking termes." I turned him around and looked deep into his eyes.
"abhay, we need you. Each of us does, you are a lover, friend, son, brother and father. And no matter what happened in the past, I just cant imagine a better father for Rohan than you." He looked at me like a little boy, then he hugged me tight.
"Thank you, piya. I love you." I held him as tight as I could.
"I love you, too. I love you more than you will ever know." I whispered.

We stood like this for awhile till both of us had calmed down.
"Lets go back, misha will wonder where we are." I said soft and wanted to leave, but abhay pulled me back into his arms and gave me a kiss that made my knees weak. I looked suprised at him, a smile playing on my lips.
"Just to show you how much I love you." he grinned at me.
We reached the house when it was already dark.
"Thank god you found her. Where have you been?" called jeh when she saw us."
"Im so sorry, misha. I just..." She hugged me tight.
"All that matters is that you are back and ok." she said, I stroke her back.
"Im sorry, misha." she nodded.
"I hope you talked about all your stupid self-reproaches and found out that it was nobodys fault, not yours and not abhays." she said now.
I shot her a suprised look.
"Im your sister, piya. Do you think I dont know why you wanted to be alone? It was too much to bear for you and you didnt want to meet jeh  like that. Right?" I looked confused at her.
"Dont look at me like that? jeh asks you to visit him tomorrow." she said giggling.
I joined her and soon the three of us laughed loud and freely.

I woke up very early the next day and decided to go to the hospital alone. I left a note on the kitchen table and left.
"miss piyai. What are you doing here at this time?" asked Dr. Smith suprised, when he saw me.
"Good morning, Dr. Smith. How are you?" I smiled at him and shook his hand.
"Im fine thank you. And you? I heard about that incident. How is your brother-in-law?"
"Ok, thats about patient confidentially." I giggled, Dr. Smith shrugged his shoulders.
"You should know by now, that Im not so straight about that." he winked at me.
"Are you here to visit him?" he asked now, I nodded.
"Yes, he woke up yesterday and asked for me."
"But you were here when he woke up, I saw you..." he looked confused at me, I looked out of the window.
"Yes, I was, but I couldnt face him at this moment. Hes in this condition because of my former boyfriend." I told him.
"Yes, chand told me what has happened... May I tell you something?" he asked unsure, I only looked at him.
"I think that you are really a special and strong person. The way you handled Rohans illness was great and even now with Mrs. khurana. You give all your strenth to your sister. Thats not often that somebody reacts like that to such situations." I smiled soft at Dr. Smith.
"Thank you very much, Dr. Smith. But Im not very special or strong, I only try to live my life and I want my family to be happy."
He nodded smiling.
"Ill go now. It was nice to meet you. And Ill come to the check up with Rohan next week." I shook his head and left.
"miss piya?" he called after me. I turned to him.
"I forgot to add modest." he said giggling and walked into the other direction.
I only shook my head and went to jehs room.

I knocked carefully and opened the door.
"Are you awake?" I whispered, my head popping through the door. jeh moved his head and smiled at me.
"Hey." He pulled out his hand to me, slowly I walked over to him and took his hand.
"How do you feel?" I asked, stroking soft his head.
"Like a truck has knocked me down." he joked, but I couldnt laugh.
"What did the doctor say?" I asked serious.
"Well, Im havent fully recovered till now, but its only a question of time." he answered while I fought the tears that were welling up in my eyes.
"But how are you? Did he..." I shook violently my head.
"No, he didnt do anything to me, you safed my life." I had to turn away.
"Do you need anything? Something to drink, shall I call a nurse? Because if you need something I could..." jeh still held my hand.
"piya, look at me...please." he said serious, but I just couldnt. I tried to walk over to the window, but jeh still held my hand.
"Please." he said again. I sighed and turned to him, the tears streamed down my face.
"I knew that I would look bad in this condition, but I never thought that I would look so bad that you have to cry." he joked.
"jeh, thats not funny." I whispered. He let go of my hand and tapped his bed.
"Take a seat." I sat down.
"piya, I want you to know that you are not only a friend or a sister-in-law to me, you are so much more. You are family, you are like a little sister to me and I really love you. And Rohan is like my own son, no matter if Im going to be a father soon, or not. Rohan will always be like a son for me. And Im really happy that I was able to protect you from that ill man. Even if I would be happier, if I could have done more..." I put my finger on his mouth to "shh" him.
"jeh, you did so much for me and also for Rohan. You were the father he never had. And you are such a great father, not only for him I know you will be as a good father for your child. And for me... you are my best friend, my brother and you were always there for me. You quitt the friendship with your best friend for me, you built me up when I was down and you safed my life. I will never be able to thank you enough for everything you did for us." He wiped my tears away.
"Ok, lets say were quitts. You bring joy to me and misha because you and Rohan live with us and I safed your life." He winked at me, I had to giggle.
"And now stop crying, Im not dead!" I hugged him carefully.

jehs convalescense was hard and long but he did better with every day, while ,ishas belly became bigger and bigger.
One night I was woken by her.
"piya piya. Wake up." she said and shook me.
"Huh... whats up?" I asked sleepy and took a look at the clock.
"misha, its half past three in the morning." I rubbed my eyes.
"piya, I think its time to drive to the hospital." said misha a bit scared.
I was within a second out of bed, grabbed our stuff, woke Rohan up and drove with them to the hospital.
"piya do you come with me into the operating room? Im a bit scared." asked misha with fear in her eyes.
"Of course I will." I just have to call abhay to come and take care of Rohan, ok?" I answered.
We arrived and mishawas rushed in.
"Ill be right with you, I only wait for abhay!" I called, misha nodded.
About ten minutes later arrived abhay
"Where is she? Is she ok?!" he called when he saw us.
"Good you are here. Shes fine, but I promised her to be with her, you have to look for Rohan, ok?" He nodded and lifted Rohan up.
"Well go and tell jeh the news." I gave both a small kiss on the cheek and rushed to misha.
A few exhausting hours later she was the mother of a beautiful baby.
"Congratulations, Mrs. khurana. Its a girl." said the doctor and handed misha the baby that looked with big eyes at her mum.
"Oh my god, misha. Shes so beautiful." I said overwhelmed, a tear rolling down my cheek.
"Do you want to hold her?" I nodded and took her carefully from misha.
"Hey, baby. Im your aunt." I kissed her little hand.
"Im so proud of you, misha." We shared a long look.
Suddenly the door flew open and abhay and Rohan rolled jeh in a wheelchair in.
"Where is my baby?" he called proud.
"Here she is, jeh" I said and handed the little girl to her father. jeh held her as careful as she would be breakable.
"Shes perfect, misha." he whispered and looked at his wife with misty eyes. I drove Nikhiljeh over to the bed and stepped back as I didnt want to disturb the lucky family. abhay put his arm around me and kissed my forhead.
"Mum, shes so tiny!" called Rohan taking a good look at his new cousin.
"Yes she is, honey. You were also so small when you were born." I said smiling. abhay shot me a sad look, but I only smiled at him.
"What do you want to call her?" I asked now.
"We decided to call her Pooja." answered jeh beaming.

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tamannamalik Goldie

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
chapter 17
"where are they piya" asked misha
its the day of jehs release and abhay and Rohan went to fetch him from the hospital.

"relax misha"
"Yes, but Im so nervous! I think Im just lucky to have him back." I hugged her.
"I know. Im also happy to have him back." I said soft. Right then we heard the car honk outside.
"They are here!" called misha and ran outside and directly into jehs arm, who just got out of the car. I watched the scene smiling from the door. It has taken jeh  a few months to recover, but now he was back.
"Mum, Mum! That was sooo cool. I was allowed to drive Uncle jehs wheelchair." called Rohan and jumped on my arm.
"Uff, you are really heavy young man. But thats great that you drove Uncle jehs wheelchair. Im sure you did a great job." I kissed his cheek.
"Yes, he did. He is the perfect driver, and we only knocked down one of the nurses!" called jeh grinning and winked at Rohan who giggled.
"Im so happy that Uncle jeh is back, now we can play soccer again, together with dad!" he called smiling.
"Yes honey. Im also happy that hes back." I answered serious and watched jeh walking up to me.
"Believe me, me also." he said and hugged me.
"Good to have you back." I whispered. He kissed my forhead and walked inside.
"Where is my daughter?" he asked and misha led him into their room, where Pooja slept. Me, abhay  and Rohan stayed in the living room.
"Are you ok?" I asked abhay as I had seen that there was something on his mind.
"Yes, Im fine." he kissed my forhead and smiled.
We settled in the livingroom together and talked. After a while jeh  decided to rest a bit as he was tired.
"misha, Ill take care of Pooja for a bit, so you can be with jeh. Ok?" I aske and she nodded.
"That would be great. Thank you."
It was so great to have jeh back. We just became a normal family again. chand Uncle dropped by from time to time and he was absolutely in love with Pooja. He always talked about his grandchildren when he spoke of Rohan and her. I felt so lucky to know that all my beloved ones are happy but I saw that abhay wasnt ok. He was really calm and very often in a world of his own.

"abhay? What is with you?" I asked one day when I saw him standing at Poojas bed, watching her sleep. He jumped a bit, as he hadnt heard me entering the room and shot me a sad look.
"Nothing, Im fine." But I knew he was lying, so I took his hand and let him into my room.
"abhay, I can see that you are sad about something. Please talk to me." I looked begging at him, but he only smiled and brushed my hair behind my ear.
"piya, my sweet piya. How much I love you." He looked at me if he I wasnt there, as if he looked through me.
"I love you too, abhay. But what is with you? Please tell me. No matter what it is, Im sure we can get this together." He turned around and walked over to the table where Rohans baby photos stood. He took one of it and looked sad at it.
"Im so sorry for not being with you when Rohan was born." he suddenly said.
"How could you? You didnt even know that he existed." I answered calm.
"I know, but I... since Pooja was born and since I see how happy jeh  is to be a dad, Im even more sorry for not being there for my son in his first years. I havent heard his first scream, havent seen his first smile or his first steps. He never said "Dad" to anybody..." I turned abhay to me and stroke his cheek.
"But now he calls you "Dad" and now you can see him growing up every day. Im sorry for not having told you about him." He took my hand and kissed it.
"piya, I have thought a lot in the last weeks and one thing is for sure. I love you more than my life and I want to spend the rest of this life with you... and I want sisters and brothers for Rohan..." I blushed and looked at the ground.
"abhay but..." I began, but he put his finger under my chin and forced me so to look at him.
"I know piya. Im fast, normally theres firstly the marriage and then the children. Ok..." I looked shocked at him when he went down on his knee in front of me.
"I wanted to ask you this since I met you... piya jaiswal..." The tears welled up in my eyes and my heart was about to burst with all the love I felt for abhay at that moment.
"I know weve been through quiet a lot, but we got over it and most of all, we found each other again. I love you, piya and I dont want to miss you for just one day for the rest of my life. So..." I watched him crying and even before he could ask me I nodded and whispered "YES".
abhay shot me a suprised look and got up.
"Yes?" he asked unsure.
"Yes." I nodded and smiled at him.
"YES!" he called, lifted me up and whirled me around. I laughed hysterical.

He carried me downstairs and outside into the garden where misha and chand Uncle sat and jeh and Rohan played soccer.
"Hey everybody! She said YES!" called abhay happy.
"abhay, let me down!" I called laughing.
"Oh my god, really? Im sooo happy!" called misha and hugged me tight after abhay had let me down.
"You knew what he was up to, am I right?" I asked her grinning, she only laughed and nodded.
"We all knew it." said chand Uncle smiling, I looked a bit unsure at him.
"Im so happy for you. And I cant ask for a better daughter-in-law." he answered sensing my doubts.
I bent down to touch his feet, but he pulled me up and hugged me.
"Dad!" Rohan ran to abhay and he lifted him up.
"Hey, champ. Your Mum and me are finally getting married, what do you think about that?" he asked. Rohan giggled and nodded.
"It was time for you to ask her." abhay shot him a suprised look, but then laughed freely.
"Uhm...Dad. I have a question. Do I get a little brother? I mean, sure Pooja is sweet, but shes a girl and they cant play soccer." He made a face.
I blushed and didnt know what to say, but chand Uncle answered laughing for us.
"Sure you will. Im sure about that."
i was so nervous that I was afraid to faint anytime. My heart was racing and my body was shaking like a leaf, I felt sick and my knees were weak.
"piya, please you need to eat somthing, otherwise you will..." misha wanted to persuade me to have something to eat, but I shook violently my head.
"No, misha. I cant if I eat something, Ill have to throw up." misha looked sympathic at me and put her hand on my arm.
"God, I never thought you could be that nervous." I had to smile.
"misha, today is the most important day in my life. How can I not be nervous?"
Today, finally was my wedding.abhay and me hadnt taken too much time to plan everything, we just wanted to get married as soon as possible. We decided to invite just the nearest friends and relatives and to have a small ceremony at chand Uncles house. Thank god misha and Sonya were there to help me with everything, otherwise I would have become desperate.
Especially Sonya was a great help. abhay and me had met her and Mohan in our favourite caf and got along very well, so we decided to invite them to the wedding. I was the luckiest woman on earth right now, but I was still scared that there will happen something bad.
"Hellooo?! Earth to piya? Can you hear me?" misha smapped her finger in front of my face.
"Huh... sorry, what did you say?" I asked coming back to reality.
"In wich world have you been? I called about 5 times your name." she complained.
"Im sorry, I was just in thoughts." I sad serious.
"You are afraid that something bad will happen, right?" Sonya came into the room and looked knowingly at me. I shot her a look.
"Im right. piya, relax. Everything will be wonderful, belive me." she took my hand and smiled warm at me.
"How will I ever be able to thank you both. You, misha for being my sister and being there no matter what... And you, Sonya for helping me to get back together with abhay." I now also grabbed mishas hand and smiled with misty eyes at both of them.
"You dont have to thank us, piya. I think I also speak for Sonya when I say that we are really happy that abhay and you made it and that you really deserve it." Sonya nodded.
"Thank you." whispered piya
"Ok, enough of these emotions! Today is your wedding and you are supposed to be happy. No tear anymore." said Sonya grinning and wiped her tears away.

"Girls, are you ready?" Emily stood at the door and watched me proud,
"Oh my god, piya. You are so beautiful." She walked over to me and took my face in her hands.
"How long did I wait to see you shine like that?" she whispered and kissed my forehead.
"Come on. Lets go. There is somebody eagerly waiting for you." She took my hand and led me. I could see from the top of the stairs that all my friends and family where there, even panchi and danish stood there, looking smiling at me. I sighed, straightened my shoulders and walked slowly down.
Everybody was smiling at me, many had tears in their eyes and then I saw abhay. He sat with the priest and stared at me. We only had eyes for each other. Everything around me vanished, I only saw the man I loved so much and my heart nearly burst so full of love it was.
The ceremony was simple but beautiful...

After taking the vows there was a big noise in front of the house. Some men rushed outside to look what was going on, but the noise continued. Suddenly, I heard somebody scream my name... it was Sameer

Edited by tamannamalik - 25 September 2011 at 5:23am

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tamannamalik Goldie

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Posted: 25 September 2011 at 5:22am | IP Logged
chapter 18
last chapter
I froze and felt panic rise inside me.
What was he doing here? How did he escape? Why is he here?
All these questions came to my mind. And as if abhay had sensed my questions, he told me to stay where I was and walked outside.
I just couldnt stay there and wait, especially as I knew how dangerous Sameer was, so I followed abhay, but hid behind the door.
"piya piya i need to talk to you." He stood in front of the house, totally drunk. danish, jeh and a few more man stood before him and blocked him the way inside.
"What do you want?" asked abhay now.
"Ah, the lucky groom. Congratulations." called Sameer and took a bow which made him nearly fall over.

"Sameer. Its over. The police is on its way. Go." Tried abhay to make him leave, but he didnt move.
"No, I know Im not invited, but I want to congratulate the lucky bride. Thats not forbidden. PIYA!" I decided to show up and stepped outside.
"Go Sameer." I said in a cold voice. He looked up and me, a melancholic smile on his face.
"God, look at you. You are as beautiful as an angel. Come here and let me look at you." I even felt a bit sad for him at that moment, but I stayed where I was.
"No Sameer. Its over. Me and abhay are married. What do you want?" I felt the anger rising up in me.
"I know, I just wanted to tell you how sorry I am. What I did was wrong and I never wanted to hurt jeh..." he fell on his knees and began to sob.
"Why piya, why couldnt you love me the way I loved you? Then, now and forever. We could have been lucky." I looked at this man that did so much to me and made a fist.
"No Sameer. We could have never been lucky. You dont love me, you dont even know what it means to love. Leave it and I never want to see you again." he looked shocked at me.
"No, Sameer. You threatened me, you tried to kidnap my son, you attacked me and nearly killed my brother." he looked crying at me.
"But I did all this for you... for us. I wanted you to be free, free to live and love." My body trembled and I really had to hold myself back to not just walk up to him and slap him.
"Im sorry for hurting jeh, really... But he wanted to take you from me and I couldnt let this happen. So I came back today to take you with me and this time nobody will stop me." he looked at me, completely mad. Getting up was really difficult for him, but he managed to get back on his feet.
"Come piya. We go." he held out his hand to me and smiled.
"No Sameer, I will never go with you. Do you hear me? Never!" I called.
He only laughed and shook his head.
"I knew it. I knew that you dont love me and still I hoped you could feel more for me than friendship." suddenly he pulled a gun and aimed at me.
"NO!" screamed abhay shocked.
Sameer only shot him a look, then he aimed at himself and was about to shoot himself when the police finally arrived.
"Sameer. Dont do that!" I called and walked slowly nearer.
"Why? You dont love me, I nearly killed somebody and almost ruined your life!" he screamed.
"No Sameer. I love you, really. But just not the way you love me. You are a great friend. Do we want to be friends again?" I held out my hand to him, hoping he would give me the gun.
"piya, be careful." whispered abhay
"Do you think we can be friends again?" Sameer looked with big eyes at me, his hand was shaking.
"Sure we can be. Im sure about that. Please, dont do that. Give me the gun." I had almost reached him.
"You know that I love you, piya." he said crying.
"I know, Sameer. And I love you. Please, give me the gun." I had reached him and took carefully the gun out of his hand. Sameer only looked at me, not able to move.
As soon as I had the gun, the police arrested him.
I suddenly felt very powerless and nearly fainted. piya rushed to my side and catched me.

"Oh my god, piya. Are you ok?" he asked in panic and helped me to sit on the steps.
"Yes, I think Im ok."
"Miss jaiswal? Im very sorry, but Mr Patel escaped from jail last week and somehow came here." said officer Cornell.
"He somehow came here. He somehow came here?!" screamed abhay getting really mad.
"This man is dangerous, he nearly killed my best friend and he tried to kidnap my wife. I really hope for you that he will be arrested for the rest of his life in the last dark whole and never will see the sun again. If this man ever comes near my house, or my family again, Ill first kill him and then you for not being able to do your job." Officer Cornell looked at abhay like he was a little boy.
"Sss...sure Mr. raichand. Dont worry he will never do you any harm again... Ill go now." he nodded at me and turned to leave.
"Officer Cornell?" I said and looked at him.
"Yes?" he asked.
"Its Mrs raichand and not Ms jaiswal." I simply said. He shot me a puzzled look.
"Yes, sure. Im really sorry." he walked away.

I got up and watched the police cars drive away.
"Its over." I whispered and sighed. abhay hugged me tight.
"Yes its over, finally." We walked back inside where the guests looked at us with shocked faces. chand Uncle stood on the first stepp of the stairs.
"Ok everybody! I hope that this event wont ruin this wonderful wedding and that we can celebrate now." he called and winked at me.
We celebrated till the early morning and I was lucky like never before in my life.
"God I love you Mrs. raichand said abhay, carrying me into our room.
"Oh, thats good, because I also love you, Mr. raichand." I giggled. He lay me down on the bed and began to kiss my neck.
"Didnt you say you were tired a few minutes before?" I asked teasingly.
"Sure, but I have to keep my promise." he grinned at me.
"Promise?" I asked a bit puzzled, he nodded.
"A little brother or sister for Rohan." I had to laugh.
"And we cant break this promise, right?" he nodded and gave me a kiss that made my knees weak...

A few months later, misha and jeh came over as  abhay and me lived in chand Uncles house now.
We settled in the garden as it was a nice and warm day. Rohan played soccer and Pooja sat on a little blanket in the gras, bubbling with a butterfly.
"Do you want to tell them or may I?" asked abhay so excited that I had to giggle.
"You may tell them." I said soft.
"Whats the matter, abhay? You act like a child." teased jeh
"No, I act like a dad." grinned abhay, but jeh shot him a puzzled look.
"Great, your son is more adult than you from time to time." Suddenly misha shot me a look.
"No, that cant be! You mean?" she called, I only nodded.
"Yes, piya is pregnant." said abhay proud and kissed my hand.
"Oh my god, that is so great!!! Congratulations." called misha and jeh and hugged the both of us.
"What will it be? A little brother or a little sister for Rohan?" asked jeh now.
"I want a little brother!" called Rohan running to us.
"Well, its both." beamed abhay
"What do you mean, both?" asked misha now with a stupid face.
"We get twins, a boy and a girl."
misha and jeh were speechless, but then a big grin spread over their faces.
"I would say you got the perfect happy end for you,piya." said jeh and kissed my forehead.
"Just like the both of you." I answered smiling. abhay grabbed me at my waist and pulled me closer to him.
"Its not the end, there is so much more to come..."

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--Siva-- IF-Rockerz

Joined: 21 March 2011
Posts: 5125

Posted: 25 September 2011 at 6:12am | IP Logged
Hey Tammana..!! No words to praise the ending!!
I'm late this time.. But caught all the 3 missed updated at one shot!! ANd god.. U ended it.. Confused..
But It was really happy ending.. Twins for Abhay-Pia.. So sweet..Dancing.
All the relationships in this FF was so beautiful and u described them so well.. Jeh-Pia, Misha-Pia.. Rohan-Jeh.. I seriously loved it..
Thanks for the PM.. But this time I cant say continue soon..Tongue But if you start any other FF please PM me!!
prerna26 Goldie

Joined: 04 July 2011
Posts: 1082

Posted: 25 September 2011 at 6:41am | IP Logged
Yayyy...I'm happy for Misha-Jeh &Abhiya! SmileFinally they(Abhiya) got married and Pia is expecting Twins too! Great!! Big smileThank you for  lovely FF! HeartPia and Jeh's convo in the hospital was sweet! SmileFinally their family is complete!End was Perfect!ClapHug

adnilover IF-Rockerz

Joined: 13 August 2011
Posts: 6471

Posted: 25 September 2011 at 6:42am | IP Logged
Lovely end to a beautiful FF. But you ended it soo soon. I loved your FF. Do work on a new FF soon. Till that time, i'll enjoy the other one'happily never after'

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