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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
chapter 5
 
PRESENT:
"I dont know why he is here, perhaps only for work." tried misha to calm me down.
"Yes, I think you are right."
"When will Sameer fetch you?" she asked now to change the topic.
"At seven." I looked at my watch and jumped.
"Shit, Im late. Sorry misha, I have to get ready." I called and left the house.

"Wow, you look amazing, piya said Sameer as I opened the door.
"Thank you, but you look also good." I smiled.
"These are for you." he handed me chocolates.
"I couldnt take flowers, as you are working in a flowershop."
"Thank you so much." I put them inside and grabbed my bag.
"Ok, lets go."
We went to a lovely little restaurant and I really had fun with Sameer. He was so charming, funny and just a great accompany.
"So, may I ask you for another date?" he asked as he walked me home.
"This date isnt even finished and you ask for another one?" I asked suprised.
"Sure, I mean befor anybody else askes you to got out..." I giggled.
"And? What about another date?" he asked with a puppy look on his face.
"This would be great." I answered turning red.
"Great!" he called, at this moment my mobile went off.
"Hello?" I asked
"piya? Thank god. misha here. Rohan had an accident, were at the hospital, come fast!" called misha and hung up.
"What has happened, piya. You are so pale." asked Sameer concerned.
"Rohan is at the hospital, I have to go there immediately." I said in shock.
"I just parked around the corner, Ill drive you. But who is Rohan?" He offered a bit confused.
"Thank you, Sameer." We ran to his car and drove off.
In the car I could think about nothing but Rohan, misha had sounded really desperate.
"Please god, safe him." I whispered over and over again.
"Calm down, piya. Im sure hes ok, but who is Rohan?" he asked again.
I looked at him and thought if I should tell him or not, but then I decided to be honest.
"Rohan is my 4 year old son."
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
Oh God Abhay married 2 another woman๐Ÿ˜ฒ thts bad but y he did tht?๐Ÿ˜•Oh I feel bad 4 Pia.Poor gal.I guess there must b some reason 4 Abhay doing this crap.Plzz revel & show us Abhay's present point of view too๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
res again๐Ÿ˜†
edited----actually i am swayed by ur story๐Ÿ˜†so no words r coming ๐Ÿ˜†
Edited by ilove99 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
I wanna see Abhay's POV... Shocker... Dan Dan DAn camera focusses on Sameer's face thrice in a row ekta style lols.. PM me... !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
nice part dear but I guess tumne yeh story already kahin likhi huyi hai coz in FF u forgot 2 change Abhay's name waha robbie likha tha but now I really wnt 2 read Abhay's point of view.Y the hell he did tht 2 pia?๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
Haww...Abhay married to some other women..
Rohan's accident..i want to read Abhay's POV too...
update soon..and thanxx for the Pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
awesome update. But want to know why abhay got married to someone else. Wonder when abhay and piya will meet again?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
wonderful updates...๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
loved every bit of it...
OMG!! ๐Ÿ˜ฒ
abhay's mom is such a ruthless woman...she has no concern for his son's love... ๐Ÿ˜ก
awww...abhiya flashbacks were dreamy & passionate .. ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
i also want to know abhay's story..i'm sure .. he didnt hurt piya on purpose! ๐Ÿ˜Š
i like sameer ... but i really want to see abhiya together.. ๐Ÿ˜‰
i hope..rohan is fine!! ๐Ÿ˜•
thanks for the pm..dear ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
continue soon
tc
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Loved ur updates.. Poor Pia.. Really hurt so much... Seriously is Abhay married to other gal? I hope it should be all misunderstanding. What was Sameer's reaction? Was he able to accept it? When will Abhay and Pia meet again?

Thanks for the PM dear. Continue soon.. 
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
[QUOTE=cuteshrishti]Oh God Abhay married 2 another woman๐Ÿ˜ฒ thts bad but y he did tht?๐Ÿ˜• Oh I feel bad 4 Pia.Poor gal.I guess there must b some reason 4 Abhay doing this crap. Plzz revel & show us Abhay's present point of view too๐Ÿ˜ณ[ yeah he had his reasons... abhay will soon enter piya's lyf... thank u for reading๐Ÿ˜Š/QUOTE]