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ArHi SS/FF - With Or Without You- Chp 61/Pg114-Last Chp (Page 83)

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 4:18pm | IP Logged
@ Phool! I shall wait for the detailed comments...Silly

@Behudaness - thanks my darling! i try Embarrassed

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
awesomeee update bless ya loved it bless ya long update as always lolz but i read it lyk i always do loved ever bit bless ya thanks

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 4:45pm | IP Logged
thanks minnie

bless you for liking my ff
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Gradually my senses are returning. No promises though. If I begin to waffle, its all your fault (and partially because I have a dreadful cold!)!!!
I loved it, to say the least!
What is it about your writing that has my eyes moving faster than my brain can respond! You are my genius Vru!!!
 
The feeling and passions seemed to be at their peak in this one. However, I found Arnav to be more calculating in his actions this time. The suite scene left me speechless. It was perfectly written!!
 
There was a great sense of security on his arrival for both Arnav and Khushi.
 
Looking forward to the next deary. Thanks for the PM.
 
Lets see if he manages to tell her what he needs to or gives into his urge to have her again!! 

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 4:54pm | IP Logged

Vru!!

I am...speechless!! 

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 5:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by FebruaryFlower

Gradually my senses are returning. No promises though. If I begin to waffle, its all your fault (and partially because I have a dreadful cold!)!!!
I loved it, to say the least!
What is it about your writing that has my eyes moving faster than my brain can respond! You are my genius Vru!!!
 
The feeling and passions seemed to be at their peak in this one. However, I found Arnav to be more calculating in his actions this time. The suite scene left me speechless. It was perfectly written!!
 
There was a great sense of security on his arrival for both Arnav and Khushi.
 
Looking forward to the next deary. Thanks for the PM.
 
Lets see if he manages to tell her what he needs to or gives into his urge to have her again!! 


Phool

I am glad i am your genius... ah... l liked the way you said your state... of mind... for it tells me that whatever i write..must move you..to that extent... i wish i could read my work to enjoy and not correct it..!!

may be after it is complete...i can read it..start to finish!!

He is calculating..for he needs to tell her and how is the question..every time he tries..something or other happens...he probably wants to tell her so that they can move forward...i think he wants to say more than just the aspect related to Tanirika but unless he tells that there is always going to be a portion which will create a rift n'est-ce pas? (means isnt it?) just felt like a bit of french!!


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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 5:27pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by incandescent

Vru!!

I am...speechless!! 



Fari

come on ... give me more than just two words...itni mehnat se likha hai..woh bhi..when i was totally off mood...

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Posted: 29 September 2011 at 5:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -RushTrip-

Originally posted by incandescent

Vru!!

I am...speechless!! 



Fari

come on ... give me more than just two words...itni mehnat se likha hai..woh bhi..when i was totally off mood...

Confused

okay give me a minute to regain my senses...

You transported me to another planet!! i was not expecting all that ...at all!! 

actually i was thinking you would make Arnav arrival short and cute, not go into the details... start with the next day and write more about the wedding preparations. but it turns out you're the master of details!!

off mood mein haan!! mood aa jayega to kya karengi aap? Smile


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