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ArHi SS/FF - With Or Without You- Chp 61/Pg114-Last Chp - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Begum thanks and the room service did come but not as you had anticipate..huh! πŸ˜›

@princess - yeah..she did not..but she got to wear him..and this is still the day one..they have a week..so.sab hoga...meri jaan!

@ tina - my faithful ardent reader thank you so much for all the encouragement..i love it the way you always ask for an update..it keeps me going...

@my behudaness - i am not that romantic myself..but i went to my behudaness i guess...i shall be chucked out of her faster than you can say hubba hubba! πŸ˜‰

@Petit Toi - now i had read what you had written... before you edited..so this is for you 😈 πŸ€—


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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Pri - thanks hun for coming and commenting its precious for me!!

@pranatim - thanks my friend

@rachel.. - you are at a loss...not done..i need more from you!!

@ raunika darling..thanks so much
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ mariam - my dear child... i am so glad you are enjoying this..and i know you are probably one person who makes me write for i know you dont go to sleep and wait for me to update..

i hope you realise how much i appreciate that..

isiliye phir marathon updates ho jaata hai..hai na?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: lovtv

wow!!

RES for later once i catch my breath!




haila are you alright its more than ten hours..since you wrote this!πŸ˜†

abhi tak saans wapis nahi aayee kya..

i am waiting for my comments.. my friend!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mahi0809

Hiya Vru.. read your entire chaps in the last thread and the ones in this one... and OMG GIRL!!!... Vru..yaar you're such a chichori!!.. *meaning it in a very hot and sexy way☺️😳* lol...  It was mindblowingly romantic... GOD!!.. My eyes widened at almost every chapter, with ME getting breathless dozens of times just reading about these brazen encounters of ArHi.
 
I blushed infinitely!!.
.. lol...

Plus Vru, I hope you don't mind me asking... did you get hitched??.. Everything seemed right from experience... too detailed, if ya know what I mean?? or was it your devilish mind😈

Too hot to handle!!... Sorry babes couldn't read earlier, and kept piling your PMs... am busy due to school!!



Chichori toh mein hoon πŸ˜‰

I have been hitched for last five years darling...but being married has nothing to do with this πŸ˜›

it is purely my devilish mind at work..😈

that is fine Kauser (i got that right na?)

take your time..sometimes when i dont see a like or a comment i stop sending pms so that i dont bother you if you are really not interested..so i may have missed sending you a few..
but now that i know that you do read..i shall be regular with each one..yeah and you will get a spurt of them.. for i write..in a sporadic manner!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: M_n_h

read all the parts its really nice



thank you so much!

appreciate you taking the effort to write a line!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: romantic.chick

UFF!!!

Missed the last two at night :(

And am now trying to read jaldi jaldi in office πŸ˜‰

Like the way you're hotting it up babes ... slowly but surely!!!

LOVING IT TOTALLY ❀️



Thank you jaan e mann

i am waiting for yours now!!


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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updates
cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

OMG 5 updates... wow... am i dreaming... Vrush that was sooo hot... awesome... loved all the updates... muahs to u for making my Monday morning so good...




Thanks Gouri darling..

i am glad i could get those monday morning blues.. away!!

yep..see na... jab likhti hoon toh rukti nahi hoon

jab ruk gayee..toh u know what happens...then i cant write...

there are some who will say TMBA ka kya kiya!!

and you know uska kya haal hai..

so i want to finish this before i get over it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: FebruaryFlower

Vru!!!

Chapter 46 and 47 were...☺️
You've written the whole scene so well hun!! The air was filled with passion and emotion!
Shukar hai ke main behosh nahin hui...saans zaroor attak gayi lekin!!!
The parathas were a nice touch.
Thanks for the PMs my angel and I look forward to the next part!!
😊



Thanks my Phool!

yeah.. you liked that?

i am glad.. something ordinary yet..loving..kyon..

shayad zindagi mein aisa hi hota hai... it is the oh so ordinary looking moments..

ab hamare upar dupatta toh girne se raha...

or even getting stuck and the guy getting all mushy over the dupatta

or..even..slip and catch...hum toh shayad girenge..aur aajoo bajoo log hanseinge
so yeah..its the paratha moments in life that one should remember...!!

saath saath khana... and all!!