WOW!!! Bravo Vrushali, you are one amazing story teller.
You are just so brilliant; you covered the story from every angle possible. Humor, passion, drama, romance, and suspense everything a reader wants in a story. Did you ever think about publishing your work? Not this one of course any other work, you are awesome. Maybe you have to think about it.
You know how to capture reader's attention; you are brilliant with character sketch and the scene description is just amazing.
Girl, you captured my attention from the beginning, its weekend husband is home but I can't just stop to think about your story and what happens next, when will I get chance to read the next chapter. You made my weekend very exciting.
The way you interlinked Arnav and Kushi's past is just so brilliant. And the way you made Arnav realize let past be past, we can never redo it but future is something we can look forward to, oh that was so beautiful. Every scene description was just perfect, But for me the best scene is Arnav's anguish, heart break and loss over Kushi's limp body when she fell from the stairs; I had tears while reading it, Hats off to your writing skills Vrushali (don't know why I feel something similar is going to happen in the serial for Arnav to open his heart and realize that he cannot live without Kushi Kumari Gupta)
Once again I say you are an excellent writer but you are an amazing story teller. Thanks for With or Without and now I wait for the next update.
Ps. Oh I am sorry I did not press the Like button on any of your chapters as I was reading it without logging in on the forum. But you know I LOVED it, oh there it is no Love button to press.
And I loved the banners made by Lekha & Arhilicious on the front page. It's so beautiful.
Oh mein boolgayi "Meri Rani" how can I forget that, Kya baat hai yaar I love this ASR man!!!! I get it serial mein Kushi is the one who gives nicknames to ASR and here it's the other way isn't it?
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