Chandragupta Maurya

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update waiting for next part 
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow! Scott wonderful update. but wht suspense is this. can't wait. plz update soon!




Swetha
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Posted: 12 years ago
so good update bengal scott.
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Continued from last post...

A confused Radhika enters her room and closes the door. She goes towards her suitcase and looks for the old family album she always carries with her. But the album is not in there which makes Radhika more depressed and frustrated. She searches for the album throughout the room. But alas nothing is found. She shouts in pain, anger which can be heard from outside.

"Did you listen?" asks Charu.

"Yes I did", replies Dhanraj.

C:"So what you want to do? Your plans not working."

D:"I have still 46 hours left."

C:"Then? After that?"

D:"I'll leave if not successful."

C:"You said you love her...didn't you?"

D:"I only love you...and you know that."

C:"Which one to believe?"

D:"Now please. This is not the time to talk about it."

C:"Secrets will open to Radhika very soon.You have only 2 days time...make sure you succeed."

D:"You are talking just like Dr. Seth."

C:"Why shouldn't I talk like him?"

D:"Is there any obvious reason behind that?"

C:"Yes...you know that."

D:"Why are you talking like Dr. Suhel Seth? I know the answer?"

C:"Yes...you know it very well...after all daughters do have qualities of a father."

Dhanraj smiles, "Point taken Dr. Bharti Singh!"

Continued in next chapter: Believe
Edited by bengalscott - 12 years ago
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Baapre !! Couldn't Think About It At First !!!!! Charudi As Dr. Bharati Singh ????????πŸ‘πŸ‘  Edited by Radhikarani123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome charu my co atmaπŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow! awesome. Charu is Dr. Bharti Singh OMG didn't expect this twist. superb πŸ‘ continue soon.






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Posted: 12 years ago
charu and bharti r same??bapre...u r very good ad combining..at first bhargavi and peihu and now charu and bhartiπŸ˜†

but i am loving it
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Posted: 12 years ago
waiting for the next part upload soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you everybody for wonderful comments and replies. I love twists in the tale. I am a great fan of Agatha Christie's The Mousetrap, from where I learned how to use twists in certain point.

In this regard I'd like to say something about The Mousetrap. The Mousetrap is the longest running stage play in the whole world and its a record. It is running for 59 years now at St. Martin's Theatre (from 1974), debuted at West End of London in 1952.

The specialty of this play is the producers of the play requests audiences of each show end not to reveal the climax twist ending. It became a cult classic in UK and people still goes at St. Martin to watch this play at weekends. Still now, as per traditions, the performers of the play requests audiences not to reveal the twist ending. But due to the internet, the twist is no more a secret. Google for The Mousetrap for additional information.


Thanks and enjoy my next chapter coming tomorrow night. πŸ‘πŸ‘