A new member with a new story for all - Page 11

Originally posted by: Charu21

OMG!! fab update!!! 👏

Uff... how do u manage to keep ur story this interesting!!! 👍🏼

awesome!!! D supports R!!!!!! woahhh!! (after reading this update, most happiest person on earth would b my Radhi!!!!!!! 🤣) ummn.. should i believe D or not!!!!!! 😒 aah... damn rocking story... Cant wait for da next part!!!! 

Well I think I have something for you also in the store...that will be a surprise.

Just keep enjoying the story. Also the secret to keep the story interest alive is to think about it almost every time. That lets me to work out with the story. 😎

Originally posted by: radhikarani

wow fabulus , close close me and D wah. Yu ri8 charu! Huhaha!
I mean u d real charu! Nt d stry wala bhoot 1.
Ek gana
paas aao paas aao paas aao na
loli
neway dr. Bhargavi peihu kaun h?
Dono alag alag vyakti h. Ek sath kyu daala?

Bhargavi aur Peihu ko ek jagah lane ka ek reason to hain. I want both in my story so just a character name amalgamation came out. Dono hi khush!

Waise main Jhum ko bhi mera story mein ek part banwaunga. But maybe not this one. May the next one. Planning to write a rom-com story next. Keeping my fingers crossed for this one.

@All

I am very much enthusiastic about the climax. Its a climax I always dreamed of. It will take around 6-7 chapters more to hit the climax. So just support me for this story (as you people always do!) 👏

oh god! Shaitan kahika mere dhanu ko charu ko saup de rahe h. Charu to me pura karvi le lunga!

Originally posted by: radhikarani

oh god! Shaitan kahika mere dhanu ko charu ko saup de rahe h. Charu to me pura karvi le lunga!

Lagta hain sach ka doctor dikhani paregi tumhe! I didn't write a single word for the next chapter and you already made up an alternative plot...genius huh!
🤣

@bengalscott - iv got to read de last two chapters so cant comment but jst saw
my name glued with my buddy bhargavi..vry gd.. accha kiya bhargavi k saath daala
mera naam..coz hum dono do insaan ek dimaag hai..😆coz we think alike on most things!!

nd nd ur writing a rom com..wow so pls main characters ka naam Peihu aur Rushi rakhna😆
and now dont say "have you gone out of your mind"🤣
will read n comment soon😉

mera aur dhanu, karvi aur selu ka v. Ok?

haha good part...and han agar koi rom kom story likha to mere sath either digvijay or elder ambhik or selucas..the guy of my ff bas aise hi...sagar wala nhi...or alexandro the guy of my ff sagar wala nhi...samajh gaye na😉

@Bengalscott -- aahhh.. something in store for Charu's character... cool.. awww.. only 6 7 chapters more!!!! 😕 i sooo wanna know da mystery!!! but dont want ur excellent writing to end so soon!!! 😛

very nice part scott👏...very very interesting⭐️...loved it😃..and thanks for putting peihu and bhargavi - the 2 names 2gether...as peihu mentioned ...we think alike..our taste is same..etc etc😆...thanks dear😛

agar dhanu mujhe na mili to bengalscot ki profile me magadh sena bhej dungi