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Posted: 12 years ago
Zainab...Uproarious Refresher...!!! πŸ‘πŸ˜†πŸ€£
🀣In today's total crap episode...the Chronicles made our evening!!!
Maza aagaya...😊
The burn with a single cup of hot tea...was tad exaggerated.Dimaag ki batti band...and lets see what more antics of Goatwa we have tomorrow...How faar can we go, just for a few moments of those dripping hooot eyes & drop dead gorgeous look.

( And yeah...Shayari,which u mentioned in the last post..I just appreciate few shaer's and ghazals and keep few couplets close to me.)

Edited by ashvez - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

🀣🀣🀣

This show is Hadke.Yahan goatwa will play cupid. Do not underestimate the power of Maa maa. πŸ˜Š

Edited by incandescent - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg!...u r sooo funny!...love this thread!...after Arnav n Khushi laxmi is my 3rd fav character on the show!...lOvely thread!...:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
@ Anu..Sk1991..vamp girl.Thanks guys..
 
@ cute girl..I am pissed hell...WTH in ASR's language..A goat taking the limelight..
anks
@ SK..aww thanks
 
 @ASH..stephyy and angell..thanks a lot.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: current

Chronicles of the goatwa

 

There was a goatwa on the wild blue yonder

Who  found his way to the mansion of the raizadas

Into nani's lap and hearth lay his fodder

Naniji found her mamta as he called her mah mah

Laxmi was found to be his favoured  name

Missed call was ala mami as a nick name

Bleating and Baaahing was his favourite game

Was the blue eyed bakri of the old dame

 

One day  wrenched by Blah for a walk and a ride

In her scheme to become the raizada bride

But however hard Ms Kashyap had tried

 A Goatwa lost meant a dent in nani's pride

 

Fate smiled as Khushi found the waylaid brat

Placed it tenderly into the old dame's lap

By accident became a part of the Psycho's trap

Whose intentions are a hard nut to crack

 

 

The leads side-lined by animals a clear trend

The trps on the  whims of a goat do depend

So dear friends the chronicles it seems will never end

Till Gautam hedge proves a missed call is a girl's best friend

PS .Am sick of the goatwa...and its goofy ways..so put in rhyme as I believe it will soon waylaid ARHI in  terms of airtime..Bah..

 
 
 Arrey Zainu dearπŸ€—, such exasperation, such anger!!!! That it made a poet out of you!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜›...am beginning to admire Laxmi more and more...if music be the food of love play on...and if verse be the sustenance for annoyance, rhyme away my friend...rhyme away.
 
 
By the way, just between ourselves, Laxmi did come knocking at heaven's doors this afternoon to tell me about the paeans that you have been inspired to write for her...she suggested that I should post this song as her answer ...🀣
 
 
[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mVuxB3GKBYY&t=59s[/YOUTUBE]
 
 
 
 
 
 
PS: Did I say, I am most impressed by your wordsmithy?πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘
 
 
 
 
 
 
  
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Posted: 12 years ago
Bow to the Queen!!!
 
   
 
 
Aapne ek bakri pe poori kavita likh di...Excellent Zain... There is no parallel...πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ You are the QUEEN!!
 
My most favorite lines:

The leads side-lined by animals a clear trend

The trps on the  whims of a goat do depend

So dear friends the chronicles it seems will never end

Till Gautam hedge proves a missed call is a girl's best friend  πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Too good ...man!!!
Edited by MsUniverse - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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zainab at her best!!im tired of it too..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Till Gautam hedge proves a missed call is a girl's best friend

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You know Zainab, GH's writing muse may be his own goat...so really iss pyaar ko kya naam doon is about a man and his goat *anu ducks to miss flying chappals*

But seriously, reading your poem makes me hungry for kebabs.  And speaking of kebabs, who knew that Lakshmi could be the kebab and haddi at the SAME TIME.  So over the goat.  
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Posted: 12 years ago
ZAINU

YOu are a star...

⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: current

The leads side-lined by animals a clear trend

The trps on the  whims of a goat do depend

So dear friends the chronicles it seems will never end

Till Gautam hedge proves a missed call is a girl's best friend

 



Zain, you cracked me up! 🀣

@above - best part ... Laxmi gets far more screen time than the leads do! 🀣

On a more serious note ... I really think they need a better screenplay writer ... far, FAR better! GH and his idea of comedy makes me puke! 🀒