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12 years ago
Thank u members for ur comments and replies...It's surely adds boost to all writers out there...So this is the 3rd part...Hope u've completed part 1 & part 2. So here comes next part...
PART 3 : Ahems confusion
Someone has leaned over the wall and he had tears in his eyes. Ahem stared at a distance and turned to look at the curly figure draped over in sari sitting in sofa in his room. gopi was thinking about kokila and wat she had said. she is wiping her tears but the flow, it seems, never cease..
Ahem turned again and walked..He walked down the stairs and went to the hall. Koki was sitting there with a serious face. Ahem walked past her. At that moment he had a vague vision of someone crying over there behind sofa in the hall taking marriage vows back...He just shake his head and walked through the door.
He was in car. He is driving. But more than that someone else was driving him mad inside. He want to shut it. Close all the emotions. But he couldn't control them. One thing Mr.Ahem modi hadn't ever controlled- Emotions. He just want to ignore them. But he is getting so many visions...
He is seeing a marriage..seeing a girl who had said to him she is an illiterate..He saw the man's slap..No he couldn't see it..He mustn't see it... Come on ahem ,take control...
He is again seeing a hall where a girl is taking all her marriage vows for the sake of her husband, his happiness..Wat r u saying,Ahem modi?? she had done it simply bcoz mum told her to do so...yes, its not ur fault...
He saw himself talking to mum about throwing someone out of the house.He again saw himself going to take that someone in to the house for nani's sake...Wat is this ahem??
He stopped the car. He had come to a mountainside (or hillside) .He got out of his car. It was beautiful here, Ahem thought. He had always been there..Whenever he had some troubles, he always came here and say it out loud to the trees and hills to hear..He never got solution but he had always got a relief...Now he want to explore his mind.Want to understand why Mr.Ahemmodi's eyes turned watery hearing a gawar's story?? Want to know why I, Ahem modi is seeing her and her visions?? Why he couldn't control it?? How can a gawar stay in his thought??
He rewinded the moments in his life...Mom, first girl in his life, for whom he will do anything..just say and he will do that..Then anita...His love, first and last ,Gopi- uneducated gawar who has no brains at all...But he saw her reciting gita, her memory power while she helped him in address noting , her pain when he got hurt, her sweetness during holi, her confidence in cricket match, her cuteness in dandiya, her...No no..no..Ahem ..you must not thought like that..She is a gawar..
But the fact that she knows how to play safe in dangerous circumstances, she helped me from snake, she helped hetal kaki from fire, she helped kanhajees idol from getting stolen..she helped..She had always helped..And wat do i gave her?? Nothing..Just a promise to make her study..
Its also a help ,right...yes..Ahem modi u r right. she needed a companion and u gave her help only once. and she had always helped u ,cared for u, loved u...From childhood itself she was getting insults and threats. How horrible for her to live a life with me?? But she never complained..never..How can she do that?? Doesn't she need a life other than work ? Doesn't she crave for affection?? Doesn't she...
Ahem modi looked to distant and saw a mist..he wiped his eyes and realized there were tears by which he wasn't able to saw a thing...He was shocked...completely perplexed..Wat is happening to me?? He walked to the car and leaned over the door. He had heard wat mum said about rashi and mami..And wat all horrible pranks they'd played on gopi?? And wat was gopi's answer...She's her sister.Forgive her..How could u Gopi..??Is that why u never complained as am ur husband..??
Gopi, now u r hurting me..Ur thoughts are affecting me..i don't want that. I am not used to it..Ahem modi is invincible. A gawar can never enter his mind..never..He will not allow that..
He got inside the car and drove off...
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