cont soon
thanks 4 the pm
Hi Reva πOriginally posted by: Dreamy_Mystique
hello madhu...
wow what an amazing update...
i just wonder how u write such scenes...
conceptualizing such scenes is different...and writing the same and make it look interesting and readable is much difficult...but u do it so effortlessly and i simply love ur way of writing and ur themes...
so finally she has discovered her supernatural powers...and the entire romantic sequence was sensuous and aesthetically portrayed...well dne gurl
the precap is interesting...will be waiting for it
keep writing
love u and ur ffs
reva
Thank U so much for that wonderful appreciation π
Hope u don't bash me after the next part π π
i m here to give my comments and u disappeared.. no problem.. because the mistake is mine as i did not give my comments for the previous update... schoo solly...π
now coming to the comments...
Abhay and Pia too romantic... yaar what have done... all those things before marriage chi chi babaπ
just kidding dear
now coming to our maaneet... the pic of manneet in kitchen is superb... Geet looking chooo cute in that pic...
MSK and cute... what dear??? what will happen to his ego??
ohh this abhay he had romantic day but disturbing our MG so bad... u have to do something with him...
Mishty:matlab..kal jab ap office jayenge to mujhe apka intezaar hi karna hoga na?
choo cute u made this update very cute dear... with cute dialogues
wow hamare ghar??? choo nice...
Thats wat love does to u! Even the air around suffocates you if you are away from your loved ones!
how do u sweety??π any experianceππ ok kidding.
Maan sighed in relief.
Maan: to phir tum ro kyu rhe ho?
Mishty: wo log apka laptop,locker se paise aur kaafi kuch leke gaye! Mere samne..aur..aur me kuch nhe kar payi! Chilla ke logo ko bhi nhe bhulaya
Maan: its ok mishty.tumne jaan puchkar to nhe kiya na.U couldn't do anything.
Mishty: lekin..mene apsey promise kiya tha ki apka ghar sambhalungi aur dekhiye kitna loss ho gaya apka..
Maan: its ok Mishty bas ab tum rona bandh karo.Aur rhe baat loss ki,to they can't get away that easy after stealing from Maan Singh Khurana.I vl alert my private security team and rest they vl take care of!
Mishty:lekin mera waada to pura nhe hua na!
good dialogues dear..π
FOR THE PM & CUTE CUTE UPDATE...
Hiii dear
I am here only π³
Abhiya are a hot couple. So why not make good use of them??? π π
the pic of manneet in kitchen is superb... Geet looking chooo cute in that pic... : YEs she looks really cuteee π
Thats wat love does to u! Even the air around suffocates you if you are away from your loved ones!
how do u sweety?? any experiance ok kidding. : βΊοΈ So far no xperience... Still waiting for my perfect MAAN π³ π
Thank U so much dear for making such detailed comments. I enjoy reading it a lottt...
LUV UUU...π€π€π€
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