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Love and Fate (MG) FF Pt 3 pg 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
hello guys...
I am kalika. I am starting this FF called Love and Fate.
hope u all will enjoy it!




Love And Fate




A story of a Man who has lost everything.

A story of a Woman who leaves everything.

The only difference between Two is one does not want to grasp happiness and is living a meaning less life.

While on other hand one is adamant to give him his Lost happiness back.  


And between all this Fate plays an important part. 

And Love becomes soul of the story.


please tell me if only i should continue.

will update the first part in sometime.


please respond!


kaliks๐Ÿ˜›



Index

a small intro on pg1

chap1 pg 5

ch2 pg 7

ch 3 pg 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
please continue!
nice concept.
update part 1 ASAP!
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Posted: 12 years ago
fate !! seems to be a pleasent concept ...do update part 1 soon 
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Originally posted by: Fantasies

please continue!

nice concept.
update part 1 ASAP!


thanku...
updating in half an hour!๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mrk_1

fate !! seems to be a pleasent concept ...do update part 1 soon 


updating!๐Ÿ˜Š
thnku for the comment!
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey do cont..sounds interesting
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awesome concept cntinue soon
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Love And Fate


A small introduction to the plot!





Reporter1: Here comes the most eligible bachelor of  Town and the youngest and most successful entrepreneur The Maan Singh Khurana or MSK as he is famous among his employees.




Reporter2: And this time too he a twenty seven years old MSK conquered the best businessman of the year award!





Reporter3: Mr Maan what are your takes on marriage. As per talks of the town  you are dating Sameera your business associate. Is it true?  




MSK: Its too personal question. EXCUSE ME!



With that he went out side the venue where he was awarded the best business man of the year award. He again did it. He was satisfied. After all he proved himself.




"Kaka" Maan called his only living consanguine, his uncle Kailash Singh Khurana.




"arre beta mai toh yehi hoon." KSK said.




Maan turned towards him. looked here and there.

"aur Arushi kahan hai?" he asked getting tensed.




"arre abhi toh yehi thi..." KSK looked here and there.



"mai yahan hoon Chachu"  a little girl said peeping out of the car window. 




She looked at Maan with a smile and asked innocently," when are we going home?"




"foran" Maan came and sat instantly on the drivers' seat and KSK also seated beside Maan.




Maan ignited the engine. And zoomed towards his mansion. 




The way was really dark through forest and weather was not helping.the dark clouds were telling that it will rain heavily. the wind was blowing. and suddenly a white van was seen by trio coming from opposite the direction.Maan stopped the car as they saw some healthy men wearing oddly black jackets threw a girly-figure out side the van and stormed off!




Maan looked at KSK. who himself looked shocked and suddenly it started raining heavily.




Maan again ignited the car. KSK looked at him shocked. 




"ek baar dekh toh lo... shayad vo zinda ho. Mausam itna kharab hai... aise usse chod ke nahi ja sakte hum." KSK said and unlocked the car door and ran towards the body. And Arushi too followed her baba.





Maan too walked out. and went near KSK.




"ye toh behosh hai... aur isse kafi tez fever bhi hai..." KSKsaid panicking.




"toh aap kya chahte hain?" Maan asked unaffected.




"Maan this is not right time to act in women prejudice. we have to help her. at least jab tak ye theek nahi ho jati.. pick her up" KSK ordered Maan.




"kaka... mai nahi.." Arnav said as he looked away in frustration.




Then he looked at his equally stubborn kaka and picked up the girl.




It was then the first time he actually looked at her face. 




She indeed had a beautiful face. He thought. But it looked so pale. He was instantly filled with hatred for those people who threw her out in such a bad weather. He carried her to car followed by KSK and Arushi.




They brought her home. Maan laid her in guest room bed. And called a lady doctor with a nurse who could change her wet dress.




Dr. Rushy came and examined the girl. Her assistant changed her in a dry gown.




Dr. Rushy came down in hall where Maan and and KSK were sitting.




"who is she kailash ji? pehle toh nahi dekha isse yahan?" Dr. said.




"ji ye hume aaj hi mili. Ek chalti hui van se isse kuch logon ne bahar phek diya." kailash told her everything.




"aapko police complain krni chahiye thi. Hospital le aate... yahan ghar par... khair.. achha hua aap isse le aaye. kafi tez fever hai isse. par maine tablets de di hain subah tak hosh aa jayega. abb mai chalti hoon. meri assistant yehi hai. agar koi prob hui to aap log mujhe call kr lijiyega." she said  and also gave some instructions to her assistant and left.





"dekha... Dr. bhi keh rahi hai... kya musibat le aaye aap kaka..." Maan said as he moved towards his room.




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Edited by -kalika- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice concept...plz add me in..
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Great concept, please continue soon!!