OS : You Are Alwaz On Mah Mind Part02 24Aug11

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Posted: 12 years ago
From da Archives of a 8GB Hard Disk
*OS :  You Are Alwaz On Mah Mind*

Part 01


Da smoking gun alwaz leaves a residue
Sumfink dat is taught on da first day of class.


It was an average day in da market square.
A formally dressed nervous dude watched 3 teenangers dabble in a game of basketball. 
He had proposed to his longtime girlfriend for marriage on phone jus dis morning.
If she was oka wid it, she was to meet him today.
He kept looking at his watch every few seconds between puffs of smoke.

A few yards away, A happy go lucky toddler walked hand in hand wid his dad,
He was da happiest kid in da world at da moment, licking his fav Purple icecream waffle cone.
Der pet dog, Apptly named, Fluffy, followed dem lazily snooping here n der.

Standing in da shadow of da tall lamp post in da vicinity.
2 smart alec dudes tried desperately to get a skinny jean clad girls contact details
"Wots ur Twitter handle ??"

A  lazy kid wid dramatic acting talent and A shark sharp kid wid killer looks debated vocally About wot color shud da Bridesmaid wear at a Sparkling Stars wedding. *Wedding Entourage*, da popular Bride station in town, was brimming wid summer brides getting ready for *DA day in der life* celebrations.

Da 3 Golden Girls sat at da open sidewalk bistro wid Caramel Machiato, Biscotti n Chai latte.
It was der 25 reUnion today. Dis year de had decided *Bombay* as der Meet Destination.
Lotsa finks to talk n share. Animatedly chattering like toddlers on first day of school, I bet  no one cud guess der years on dis planet.

Behind dem One wise teacher groaned loudly, reading da term paper *Thesis* her students had submitted yesterday on *Write in 5 lines how Tv shows affect ur routine*.
A few of her students had assumed, one line = 1 fullscape page.
One of dem had *Sheepishly* written at da start of da paper,  in bold ink, *I shall not fall for another Indian TV couple again*. while one of dem had drawn heart doodles all along da edge of dis paper, jus to express how phamous tv couples affected her life. Sighhh da teacher had a Head-Desk moment thinkering about da future of such students.
Any guesses who da students wer ??

A set of drooling teenage girls had plastered der faces to da Windexed clean glass of da huge Sony store , wer each displayed  tv was playing a local drama of a bodyguard who double dutied as a lover for his employee... In living HD color. Lucky gals, de wer able to watch da ReRuns of dat show, unlike us !!

yuP an average day. Sun shining down lazily.
Soft breeze dancing to da upbeat tune dat was belting out loudly from da popular all MEN joint strategically placed in da square. Local barber, while creating his masterpiece creation replicating Hrithik Roshan's flamboyant stylish hairstyle, was playing da latest hit song *D K Bose* to full hilt. Da ironic lyrics soothing his harrased soul.
Perharps he shud play dis song to his wife, who was da cause of his miserable existence...

Da DHL mailman stopped his van and got off.
He was a full *3* min early for his scheduled pickup according to da clock on da building wall. Nearing da postal bin, He gazed at his watch, it wasna working. Damn his cheapskate wifey. Who had gifted him da replica of a popular branded watch jus last weekend at der wedding anniversary. He frowned and removed da watch from his wrist, to give it a sharp rap, Hoping dat wud kikad start it again. Being on time was a Mailman's Top Priority.

Sitting in his brand new Red Dodge pickup truck, jus outside Bombay National Bank, Sumone removed a brand new Iphone from his pocket. His newly made friends in town had gifted him da new instrument jus yesterday on his birthday. He noted dat his friends wer 57 min late. Last nite totally tooned at da local bar, while departing, Did de not insist on meeting in da town square again at 5pm ?? He better call da number given to him to contact da gang. Dropping a popular Bollywood based magazine on da passenger seat, his finger grazed da onscreen slide icon activating da Hi-Tech phone

Mah twitter handle is "Suicidal" da skinny jean clad grinned wickedly at da 2 dudes
making dem gawk n den squirm in surprise. Talk about falling from pan into fire !!

Dialing 1-800-FRIENDS... Tring Tring... Tring Tring... Tring Tring
Da call connected to a distinct, "Hello ??"

BoooooooooooM !!



Da loud sound shattered all da Displayed Tv sets in da store in one blast.
Was it da end of a dream ?? was it a premonition for finks to come ??
Da girls screamed n sidestepped outta da way jus in time, as a few seconds later da entire showroom glass wall collapsed streaming da remnants on da sidewalk in a sparkling mess.

Da pickup Dodge truck roze in air  jus like Johhny Sokko's best friend Giant Robot did
wen he was about to speed fly on a mission to save da planet !!
Falling on its side it splintered into a million micro parts.
A few parts shot off as tangents wid bullet speed towards da basketball loop area...
Red color splattered across da cemented floor faster den da talented painters creative 3 min paintings dat get highlighted every weekend on da popular Color show *India Got Talent*

Da DHL postal bin ripped apart like a kid tearing Kellogs corn flex box in search of his fav toy *Tigger* miniature figurine inside. A watch lay nearby face up... True to its marketing promo, Alive n ticking !! Da *Made In China* emblemed bak cover lay a few inch away.

Da lil toddler kid stood silently, thumb in mouth, holding his now melting cone in da other hand,
watching his dad on da floor gasping for breath. "Son... Son... Dial 100... Hurr---- Hurry take dis"
Da kid had learnt how to use a cell phone. He use to watch *Dora* every morning !!

Dat stopped da vocally enhanced debate taking place a few feet away regarding da Purple bridesmaid dresses. Purple talk was gonna be replaced by da evidently RED color now displayed in various spots on da unfortunate square.

As a white police sedan pulled over wid tire skid marks expressing da emergency,
Da youngest golden girl lay in a shallow pool of blood.
"Dun u dare... U hear dat... Dun u dare leave us now... Stop ur nautanki.
Look at me... Keep ur eyes open... " one of da golden girls yelled at her angrily.
"Help... Sumone help..." da other surviving golden girl was heard among da chaos around.

Behind dem, Da teacher sat numb, scared to even move an inch.
Wot if DAT triggered another blast ??

Da door opened, and two feet stepped out. Starched trousers encased long legs.
Shoulder holster held a firearm dat was licenced to kill. HIS professionally emblazoned blazer lay on da bakseat wer he had tossed it thru da open window wen de had heard da operator asking for any nearby squad cars in da given vicinity to report to da 1-0-0 call emergency. Taking in da scene, he looked over da roof of der Red lighted car waiting to give instructions to his partner. His head stood a good foot n half taller den da roof level of da car.

Reporting der arrival on location, n cutting da call,
SHE pulled herself outta da car in one quick movement.
Sleek black trousers, sky blue formal shirt tucked in
A black blazer, showcasing her strength, she flicked da blazer aside,
And pulled da gun tucked in her waistband from behind.
Her Badge shone brightly tucked in at her belt.
ID: 6626477466 was clearly visible.

"Ready??" HE asked. An eyebrow lift seen above his Aviators
She noded affirmative. Her eyes hidden behind her Rayban.
She walked to his side in quick stride.
Both of dem representating da *Bombay Police Force* efficiently.
Hearing da operator call on da internal radio transmission,
de wer da first to respond to da crime scene.
De had 10 min before da bakup arrived.

Working in sync together for da last 1 yr wid him,
she had learned da drill he worked on religiously
*Save at any cost. Fire only to defend*
She looked around at da diff spots of chaos in dat market square.

Taking in da scene, He ran towards da DHL pickup zone.
Perharps he cud help a dying soul.

Selecting one such spot, she ran towards da basketball zone.
But as she approached, she knew it was too late.
A suit clad dude lay flat on his bak looking up at da open sky
folding hands at his chest n chanting thanxxX to da upper gods for saving his life.
A bleeding collared dog lay at his feet...
Removing da Raybans she lowered her head n offered a silent prayer for da pet.
She had been trained for such situations.
Der was no time to dwell. She had a job to do.

Pushing aside da heavy bin dat had trapped da mailman's leg underneath, He pulled da unconcious worker outta da rumbled mess. Unconscious but breathing alive. Lifting him on his shoulders, he brought da injured mailman near der car n rested him against da side door. No time to stop, he had other folks to take care of.

Looking around, He ran towards da bistro. Helping da 2 ladies in moving der bleeding friend to safety, he returned to guide da shocked teacher away. As he helped her stand, da teacher looked bak at da thesis paper sets spread around. Da future of her students lay sprawled around on da messy floor. She hesitated to walk away leaving da papers in da rubble of dust. "Dun worry maam, i will come bak n collect dem for you, lets get you across to safety first" he soothed her wavering mind den he grinned. Da smile convinced da teacher, he wud honor his comittment. Dropping da teacher across, he rushed to collect da papers from da sidewalk outside da bistro.

Her job was not done yet. She saw da tangled fired up mess in fronto her.
Knowing da dude wid da iphone, Now lay in a coccoon of coal inside.
She approached da car slowly.

Dats wen da second bomb went off !!
In a shockin reflex, He turned to look for his partner hoping she was safe.
And yelled "Miniii watch out------" as her body hit da sidewalk behind da burned Dodge truck.

As Prithvi started to run towards her, a huge pile of old building plaster came down in chunks infronto da Bistro entrance, half burying him under it within seconds.
He felt sumfink hitting him wid force on his head as he tried to move.
A wooden plank lay near him, now smeared wid his blood...

Prithvi heard da ambulance n bakup squad cars approaching da scene
But da one on his mind was his partner Mini... He had lost her... 
Help had arrived in da stipulated 10 minutes, but at wot cost...
Da last thot as his world went dark was, *Watch out Mini...* Den he blanked out.
Not hearing da hurried footsteps nearby...

Da Chief jumped outta da car, shouting orders, giving instructions
His gaze searching for da best officers of his squad
Officer Prithvi and Officer Mini...
~~ To Be Continued ~~

Dis probably is a 3 part OS
Hope yall can Imagine dis OS as u read it'

Edit : Part 02 Coming Dis Week.
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Posted: 12 years ago
 Me first!! :P


Will read and unreserve soon.. pakka!

Maham

P.S: You like Prince Dastan too? ðŸ˜† *Hi 5* LOVED that character... For some reason him and the princess reminded me of PriDa wayy too much! ðŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
NO!  I HATE HATE HATE the reference .. Dont like it at all ... NOPES...

Baaki, the scene setup was perfect.


-- Mru
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Panna, very intertesting os. beautifully described the scene before blast n after blast. i was visualising it. hoping that prithvi n mini are alive. waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Shock value huh?...If I got the references kinda right...err...then I don't like them that much ..

There is hopefully a kabhi khushi part to this, 3 chapter OS.. *reminds self of the rain pic*

But of course liked the way the visual was described..detailed as always!.
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow panna aur kya kya hai 8gb ke space ... m getting very inquisitive 
hehe shark, sparkling star, lazy kid sab ko yaar karliye 😊
if first part is so full of action... wating for next part   
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Posted: 12 years ago
Pannaa   !!
 
 
Whyyy... Oh Whyy  sooo Tragic  ??    
 
I know the Bombay blasts have been on your mind ... you have been wanting to write about them... But  Gosh  !!    this was too  Sad    !! 
 
Brriillliant Writing as always ... No doubts about that ... and all the References ... OMG  !!   
 
 
 
Love
 
Amiya
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Posted: 12 years ago
From da Archives of a 8GB Hard Disk
*OS :  You Are Alwaz On Mah Mind*


Part 02

~~ Beep Beep Beep ~~
Da machine hummed in da white room.
Da patient slept silently amongst white walls flanked by white curtains
on a white bed in a cocooned white sheet. Well... For da time being atleast !!
In da daytime, he was watched constantly by da floor staff.
In da nite time, he watched da floor staff from half closed eyelids.

6 months ago, After a huge pile of plastered wall had collapsed as an aftermath of a bomb blast. hitting him on his head, patient number 6464 had been brought here in a critical condition.
He had survived da accident... But not his brain. For da hit had resulted in a partial paralysis restricting his movement widout medical assistance. A classic example of jus how da tall 6 ft hunk can become a mooshy child mentally refusing to communicate wid anyone was sadly seen in live technicolor. He jus didna wanna remember he had earlier been a revered and prominent dependable officer professionally for da Mumbai Police Force. All he remembered was one line, which he chanted thru out da day, "Mini...watch out..."...

"Mini...miniii... Watch out miniii..." Da twitching started again.
Why was she not moving. He yelled at her.
Did he not warn her to move away. Why did she ignore him ??
He shifted in bed.  Da needles in his arm wer hurting.
He tried removing da wires. But his hands wer tied to da bed railings. He cudna move.
He opened his eyes and started screaming... Howling.
Da floor nurse came in a hurry and tried to hold him from hurting himself more.
But wid eyes close and in a trance, da patient had more strength inspite of da restraints
Only one person cud control him now. He responded to only one touch.



~~ Damini Gujral, Dr on duty, paging Dr Damini Gujral ~~
Please report to floor 7. Patient 6464 Emergency.
Da speaker announcement was heard on all floors.

Da stainless steel lift door on da 7th floor opened smoothly and in slow motion as Damini slid her hand into her white coat, stethoscope dangling around her neck, pen in her mouth.
All her training had never really prepared her for da helpless sight dat greeted her in da room.
HE was watching da entrance, screaming loudly, trying to remove da restraints widout blinking.

Raising her hand to ward off da nurse, she slowly approached patient 6464 in da room.
Still in a trance, as he felt her presence he closed his eyes n stopped da howling.
Breathing heavily, his sugar levels had shot up.

Damini placed her soft hand on his n he grabbed it tightly
"Miniii... U der ?? Miniii..." his eyed wer closed shut tightly.
Damini didna yelp as his fingers dug into her skin.
Sumfink blazed up her arm. Heat ??. Was he running a fever tonite ??
So many questions dat crossed her mind in da few seconds.

"Prithvi... Its me Dr Damini. U are fine. Its oka. Mini is fine.
Look, open ur eyes. You know u haveto get well. Mini is waiting for you. Remember ??
Prithvi ?? Can u hear me ??
" she paused before prodding again "Prithvi ??

"Mini Oka?? She oka ??" he asked huskily eyes still close.
Damini, ran her open palm on his hair in a smooth gesture to calm him.
He opened his eyes and looked into hers.
Midnite black eyes bore into Chocolate brown ones.
No one blinked for 3 seconds.
She was da first to break contact. He kept staring at her.
A chinna thot entered her brainwaa, Perharps as an Officer he had da snarky attitude on his left shoulder dat said, *I Dare - Dun Cross Me*. A shudder ran down Damini's straight bak. No, she wudna have liked to cross paths wid dis Officer 6 months bak. His partner, Officer Mini was probably more daring den she had heard from da circulating floor gossip.
"Yes Prithvi. She wants to talk to you. To spend time wid you. But if u dun sleep, u canna get up on time for her... NO ??"

"Yes... Talk wid her... I wanna talk... Spend time wid mini... I sleep now... Sleep... Yes..."
his eyes closed and his breathing became regular.

Damini looked at him for a minute. He was fast asleep already
Walking towards da side table she picked up his *Patient History Char - PHC*.
she marked da date n wrote da comment :
*Slept widout medication dose tonite.
*Time to start PHASE 2
*Mental Stimulation.

Running a hand on her stressed out neck, Damini dropped her stethoscope on da table.
A good cup of piping hot Koffee was all dat her system needed tonite.
It had indeed been a long day at work.
Inspite of da hectic schedule doled out to her, she prided on her work.
Being da baby sister to 3 strong willed brothers, da only daughter to hardcore businessfolk parents, inspite of da insistence to join da family business and opposition to her current profession, Dr Damini Gujral was a dedicated Doctor.

Her senior doctors had suggested she take it easy n slow wid dis patient.
But Prithvi was given to her on Day One wen she had joined da hospital 6 months bak.
He was her first case to prove her dedication to a profession she had dreamed of since she had come across a siggy made by a GauchaLover -- A nickname used to express diehard loyalty for a popular TV Couple. And Dr Damini was making progress wid dis patient. Slow but it sure was worth celebrating over.



6 months bak, HE lay der silently in bed widout movement.
Refusing to let anyone near him wen awake.
Eventually, he started recognizing HER soothing presence in da room.
He wud curtly reply to her neverending prodding questions
all da time watching her movements wid brooding eyes.

Da silver glittering watch on her left hand. A diamond ring on her right.
Da looped long dangling diamond earrings dat threw tiny specks of light on her rosy cheeks reflecting da sunlite or ceiling lite. Unlike da other nurse n doctors, She never wore makeup.
He wanted to tease her *MakeUpKaDibba* but didna see a reason to.
Her smile was not painted on. Lips dat lifted n cheered him every morning wer left bare
Other den da tini tiniest glossy rose scented balm on her lips...
He smelled it wenever she dipped over him to check his eyes...
Was dat why he alwaz frowned and kept his eyelids lower ?? so she can dip on him... ??



Standing at da Koffee station, Damini held da warm cup in her hands,
Heat seeped into her tired body.
Heat, dat one word dat reminded her of Prithvi !!
Today he had responded to her touch n slept widout medication.
Soon... He wud recover... He wud yes...
Den he wud learn about his Mini...



Prithvi opened his eyes n stared at da ceiling for a full 3 minutes.
Da nurse wud come in to help brush his teeth n give him his tablet n breakfast.
He sighed loudly, bored of da routine already, only to realise, his hands wer no longer tied down. He lifted dem freely, towards da beam of sunlite coming in a slant angle thru da window.
His palm felt warm. Dr Damini had a warm touch.
Da sensation making him smile slightly.

"You shud smile often, it will give many girls a reason to live"
Dr Damini Gujral walked in wid a parcel in hand and a bright cheerful smile on her lips.
He lowered his hand to da bed. Da eyelids lowered accordingly.

Keeping da parcel on his bed she opened da room curtains completely n took in a breath of fresh air. He mimicked da movement laying in bed. Breathing in da same air as her. Liking da feeling already.

"Why are mah hands free today ?? Wots in dat parcel ??
Why are you here instead of dat monster u all call a nurse??"

Prithvi bombarded da questions one after da other.

"Tasak Tasak Tadak, dat monster is ur saviour wen u are at ur mischivious best, Prithvi Saxena" Damini chided him as he jus stared at her blankly.

"Lemme help u change. Today we will go for a morning walk." Damini helped him sit up in bed.
"Will Mini be der ??" widout a thot, he immediately asked wid childlike curiosity.
Damini paused in her task. Looked up at him. Den nodded a negative response,
"Nay, not today. Soon. U can see her. But first we need to walk n get fit... NO ??."

He quietly took her help n got ready to sit in da wheelchair dat he noted was already in da corner of his room. Wid da wardboy's help Damini shifted him in da chair.
Dat day de both strolled da garden taking in da various species of flowers.
She mentally noted he especially liked Lavender coloured Impatience flowers.
Why Lavender ?? Did sumone he know like Lavender ?? Mini perharps if da gossip was to be believed... Damini waved off da last thot away as she pushed da wheelchair outta da room.



6 weeks later, Prithvi found himself waking up bright n early looking forward to der garden strolls. He asked too many questions all leading to one single focus, Mini. But Dr Damini alwaz twisted her replies to HIM. Gaining slight strength, Now he cud get off da bed on his own n walk towards da restroom holding da wall.

As he came outta da restroom, holding da 2 strings of his hospital pajama, Dr Damini walked in mouthing, "Goood morni---- wot happened?? why da sad face Prithvi ??" Prithvi frowned as he showed da tight knot he had tied, thus unable to change into Garden stroll clothes he generally wore nowadays. Hahaha, Damini laughed out loud, while asking him to hold up da shirt as she helped him untie da tangled knot. He watched her from under lowered eyelids. Da smile dat he gave her cud have melted her to pieces HAD he not been a patient for her...
It was time to ditch da wheelchair now.

Walking to da side table, she picked up his Patient History Chart n noted
PHASE 3 - Physical Exercise.



"Pool ?? Swimming pool ??"
Prithvi"s eyes gleamed wid glee as de entered da pool zone beyond da door marked,
*Doctors & Patients* instead of da routine garden stroll.
He walked wid her slowly, taking one step at a time, across da pool perimeter,  holding her hand. Leading him to steps dat lead into da shallow end, she asked him to enter da pool while she removed her shoes and got ready to join him for his physical training routine.

Da first fink  he did was lift his hand and drop his shirt to da already wet floor.
Standing der in green coloured hospital pajamas...
He looked a fine specimen of hard steel.
His hand went to da waistband of da pajamas in a telltale gesture...

Dr Damini removed her shoes n dropped her trousers n shirt on da poolside lounge chair.
She was wearing a black tankini n biker shorts inside.
As she turned towards Prithvi, her world *Rocked* on its own axis.
Orange Mocha Frappochino n all finks Sinfully Tasty...
Great !! Prithvi had a body to die for now !!
"Oi Ve Prithvi... Wot... Wot are u doing ??"
"No pants in pool" He pointed out to da sign dat was boldly painted on da white wall in RED
His innocent gesture brought on a smile to her lips he wud never forget.

Prithvi lowered himself in da warm indoor pool.
His eyes never once leaving Dr Damini's gaze.
He moved his hands along da water creating ripples of waves.

"Well. Lets do sum slow walking, now shall we ??" Damini encouraged him.
"Walk slowly towards me. Be sure to take small steps Prithvi"
Damini instructed him as she got down in da pool on da other end.

Prithvi took da first step towards her
" Was dis how criminals had felt, wen he approached dem ?? Damini thot n gulped.
"Oh come off it. U r a certified doctor. Stop drooling on ur patient n start doing ur job !!"
she mentally scolded herself"

Crossing da midway mark Prithvi not realising da strain he was giving himself, stumbled.
Damini who was watching him rushed to his side, before he went under or panicked.
Steel met Warm fire surrounded by water !!
His biceps felt rock hard under her fingers.
He shifted his weight against her.
She stood her ground as his wet BARE upper torso blended against her black tankini.
Shoulder to shoulder. Waist to waist. His hand went around her back in reflex.
She moved away an inch making him accidently loose his balance once again
He reached out his hand for support, n mistakenly...Innocently...
landed on da curve her biker short dat... traveled in da down direction...

"Oopsa !! Mah bad. I didnaa------"
Before he cud complete da apology, his footing slipped
And he went under pulling her along wid a jerk.

Have u ever skuba dived ?? Wen u dunno swimming ??
Trusting da one person who has asked u to take dat risk ??
HAHAHA try dat sumday !! Wen u are drowning and da only fink keeping u from insanity...
Is da look de give you. da one dat says...  *I willna let u down*
U will move mountains. U will dive a million times more...
Jus to see dat look again. Trust me !!
-Pannalogy101

He looked at her, hair floating around in a brown halo.
Her lips looked kissable. Rose scented !! He remembered.
Widout thinkering he held her face close
His lips touched hers in a flickering second.
Den more steadier as She stared at him underwater eyes fully open.
1--2--3--4--5--6--7 seconds passed.
Her palm rested against his bare torso. His heart beating under her hand.
Da moment was engraved in der memory forever. She blinked under water.
He pulled apart immediately realising his folly n pulled both of dem up.
Spluttering she came outta da water.
Sheepishly grinning he looked at her.

"Dun apologise. Its oka. U lost balance !!"
Dr Damini growled as she excused herself outta da pool.
Jus wot had happened bak der...
A few more minutes underwater n she had been ready to jump his bones !!

Wot was dat !! Wer had da thot to kiss her come from  !!
Prithvi watched his doctor pull herself outta da pool dripping water all da way to da lounge chair wer she had dropped her clothes.
Sumfink stirred underwater n he quickly moved his hands on da water surface.
Da ripples hid his secret effectively...

Leaving  him alone in da pool, she picked up her work clothes
And went to change outta da wet suit
Mentally noting to write on his Patient History Chart
PHASE 4 Introduce Mini.



Hope yall can Imagine dis update as u read it'
To those who tear up everytime messa KILL one of dem in mah OS
Hope dis story is *Different* and to ur *Liking*
Bear wid me on dis one. For Kabhi Khushi Kabhi Ghum !!

Concluding Part Coming Soon
Dis update is da result of wanting to write sumfink happy
after a chaotic day at work today.
23 - Aug - 11

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Posted: 12 years ago
ummm.. wokay. I am still MAD at the first part, but this one is better.

I love the detailing and seems like something sinister is going on somewhere. and I read some R-rated detailing as well. tsk tsk tsk

Ab meri maataji, make the third one even better, and erase my memories of the first update.

-- Mru
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ohh lovely twist...thankfully...I was just wondering how Mini would be a nickname for Damini...actually it does seem like one...oh well...anyway..

New dynamic...and he is recovering ...good..

@the swimming pool scene...umm...haha...I'm forced to wonder in the direction of Mru's GLT compass...😆