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                                  PART -4

                                                         

 

Samir: Armaan, 1 sec yaar'...looking awfully at Maan. Maan, iishka matlab uushka Coke tuh le aaya, aur tera Rum

Both Maan & Samir gape at each other & jointly yell out...'.OHHH  NOOO'.!!!

Armaan looks puzzled up.




"OHH YES''!!!  Geet shouts out. Dev gazes awfully at Geet as she starts behaving weird. Her voice continuously rises up, now it's almost like a scream which makes everyone around staring at them bizarrely. But she doesn't care at all &  continues.

Geet: Yes , yes , yes...Dev...aap bahut achhe insaan ho bahut achhe...aisa mere Daarji kahte hain, mere Papaji kahte hain, mere veerji kahte hain'..par kaya aap mere woh 'Sapno ke Rajkumaar ' ho'...ho kaya'!!! ...nahii'...   she starts laughing !!! pata hai kyun...kyunke maine padha hai jab kisiko apna Rajkumaar milta hai naa'...toh dil mein ggghantiyan bajti hai'...kuch kuch hone lagta hai , par mujhe toh aisa kuch naa huya...toh phir aap mere Sapno ke Rajkumaar kaise huye...batayo ...batayo naaa!!!!...



Dev looks very embarrassed as she says all these things very loudly. He tries to make her stop.

Dev: Geet , kaya kar rahi hai aap...log dekh rahe hain.

Geet: Dekh rahe hain , toh dekhne do...now she climbs up on her chair...ooye,kaya dekh rahe ho aap sab...iinhe dekho...yeh mere Sapno ka Raajkumaar nahi hai'..nahi hai !!!

Dev: Geet, niche utariye'main aapko ghar chod deta hun, lagta hai aapne sharab pee li hai.

Geet: Sharabbb!!! chi chi chi chi'..aisi gandi cheez e main naa peeti'...achha , mere baat ka jawab do pahle '...kaya aap mere Sapno kkke'..

Her voice gets jumbled up. Now, this is the limit, Dev couldn't take it any more. He grabs her by his arm & takes her onto his car, still she is continuing with her shouting. Maan & Samir are watching all these from distance& Maan feels very ashamed.

 Maan: Yeh sab meri wajahse ho gaya.

Samir: Teri wajahse'...tuhne kaya kiya'.!! Jhagda toh ushine suru ki thi naa.

Maan: Hain par mujhe uushe bahas nahi karni chahiye thi'...ush time agar hum naa ladte toh woh drinks bhi exchange naa huya hota'

Samir: Teri wajahse kuch nahi huya yaar, apne aap ko dosh mat de'

Maan: Par yaar, ladki achhi ghar ki lag rahi thi'...pata nahi iish sabki wajahse kuch problem mein naa padh jaaye woh.

Samir: Arre vaah'..!!! ek hi mulakaat mein tujhe uushki iitni fikr hone lagi'...kaya baat hai'.!!

Maan: Arre aisi koi baat nahi hai yaar'.,aur dhire bol, Pari ne sun liya naa'...toh meri khair nahi.

Both start laughing & again join in the party with the rest. Maan can't believe himself that why he has been worried for that strange girl. "It must be the effect of those drinks" '.he consoles himself.

 

 

Dev drives Geet back to her house in such a drunk condition. Everybody gets stunned watching Geet in such a state. Daarji gives a stern look to Geet, but she is not in a condition where she can actually realize what is going on. Rano takes her to the room. Dev  tries to calm down the situation.

Dev: Daarji 'woh Geet ne kuch nahi kiya'. uushne zarasi RUM...but Daarji doesn't want to even listen to him & leaves from there The whole family is shocked. Rano politely asks Dev to leave as the situation might go out of control after that. Dev departs.

 

 

Next day morning. Geet wakes up with a major hang-over of last night. She has got a huge headache. Rano brings some lemon-juice for her.

Geet: Maa, ''woh kal raat'

Rano: Beta yeh kaya kiya tumne'!!

Geet: Maa, maine jaan bujhke kuch nahi kiya, woh galti se maine soft drink ki wajaye sharab pee li.

 

GEET''!!!   Rano & Geet both have shivered away as Daarji's huge shout is coming from outside. Geet & Rano come out from the room & facing Daarji. He is looking very very angry. Geet's Papaji , Geet's uncle, aunty & Brij are also there.

Daarji: Ussh Dev ne tujhe sharab di peene ke liye , aur tuhne pee li...besharam ladki'

Geet: Lekin Daarji'

Brij: Geet , tujhe sharam nahi aayee, ek baar bhi hamari ijjat , hamare khandaan ki iijjat ka khayal naa aya tujhe.

Geet: Veerji'maine jaan bujhke kuch nahi kiya'...maine Coke ka order diya tha',lekin pata nahi meri drink kaise badal gayee'

Daarji: Geet  jhoot mat bol'...Dev ne hi tujhe sharab pilaya hoga '..hai naa!!

Geet: Dev ne kuch nahi kiya  Daarji.  Rano wonders that Geet is defending Dev.

Geet's Papaji: Aajse shadi hone tak tumhara College jaana bandh'...bahut padh liya', College mein jaake yeh sab sikhke aayee hai tuh'.sharab pina, badose jubaan ladana.

Geet: Par  Papaji'

Rano signals Geet to be quiet.

Geet's Aunty: Hain', ghar mein baitho'...kahin jaane ki zarurat nahi..bas kuch din aur, ekbaar shadi ho jaaye bas'. phir  kuch bhi karna hum nahi aayenge bolne ke liye.

Daarji remains silent , Geet knows, his silence refers that he has agreed with Papaji's proposal. But does anyone know that Dev doesn't want to get married now. He is just want to do an ENGAGEMENT.

Geet: Daarji, Dev abhi shadi nahi karna chahte'..

Everyone gazes at her dreadfully.

Brij: Kaya!!! shadi nahi karna chahta...matlab !!

Geet: Jii, woh abhi Engagement, yaani sagaii karna chahte hain.

Papaji: Par aisa toh tay nahi huya tha. Brij, zara phone laga Mittal House mein.

Geet feels very much scared as she expects something is gonna be very awful this time.

Brij calls at Mittal house & passes the phone to Daarji. Daarji has a chat with Dev's Mom. They have fixed a meeting in the evening. Geet looks very tensed so as Rano.

 

In the evening, Dev & Dev's Mom reach there to meet Geet's family. Daarji is still looking very angry.

Daarji: Bahenji humein aapse yeh umeed nahi thi.

Dev's Mom: Bhai sahab, hamari puree baat toh suniye, humein bhi kahan pata tha key Dev abhi shadi nahi karna chahte, humein bhi abhi abhi pata chala hai.

Dev: Daarji, mujhe kuch mahino ke liye U.S jaana hoga, wapas aate hi hum dono shadi kar lenge.

Papaji: Par beta, sagaii kyun, shadi karke hi leke jaayo naa Geet ko apne saath !!

Dev: Papaji, sacch kahun, maine Geet se bhi kaha hai , main abhi shadi ke liye puree tarikhe se taiyaar nahi huin'..mujhe sochne ke liye kuch waqt chahiye, I am sure Geet ko bhi waqt  chahiye hoga'...looking at Geet'...uunhone bhi apni studies puree karni hai.

Brij: Nahi, Geet ne bahut padhahii kar li hai, aur padhne ki zarurat nahi.

Dev: Brij, yeh kaya kah rahe hain aap. Main nahi chahta meri biwi anpadh, gawar rahe' anpadh-gawar these words hurt Geet a lot, still she maintains the silence.

Dev: Please aap unhe padhne dijiye.

Dev Mom: Bhai Sahab, bachho ki marzi hai, hum aur kaya kar sakte hain, mujhe lagta hai humein agle week hi Engagement kar leni chahiye. Maine Panditji ko bhi bulaya hai , jaise hi date fixed hota hai ,main aapko bata dungi.

Daarji doesn't seem to be very happy with this decision. Geet again discovers a strange feature in Dev's character. Does he possess any respect for her, that too after last night!! Geet feels very much embarrassed as she couldn't remember anything about what she has done last night after she got drunk. She realizes that she should say 'sorry ' to Dev. She sends Raji-her cousin sister to Dev to tell him that if he likes to talk to her for a moment. Dev tells Daarji that he wants to have a chat with Geet. After getting the permission he reaches there in Geet's room. Geet stands there alone.

Dev: Geet , aapo mujhse kuch baat karni thi ?

Geet: Jii, mujhe aapko Thanks kahna tha'..aur Sorry bhi.

Dev: Thanks 'Sorry '...for what??

Geet: Woh Daarji ne meri padhayee toh chudwa deni thi'...aapki wajahse main banch gayee'...thank you so very much for that.

Dev: Ok ,Ok'. achha aur sorry kis liye kahna tha aapko? He teases Geet.

Geet: Woh'..actually  kal raat ke liye'pata nahi maine nashe mein aapko kaya kaya kah diya hoga'.

Dev starts laughing'

Dev: Aap bhi naa'...don't be sorry'...aisa hota hai, pahli baar agar koi pee le', toh aise hi, pagal o ki tarha hi baatein karta hai'

Geet looks shocked...'Pagal o ki tarha baatein''.!!! Hey Babajii, maine aisa kaya bol diya iinhe, key mujhe Pagal soch rahe hain, Geet murmurs.

Dev: Koi nashe mein hi aisi betukki baate karega, SAPNO KA RAJKUMAAR & all that '..Holy Crap!!!

Geet's face turns into pale. "Mera sapna iinke liye kuch maayne nahi rakhta'." she is humming.

Dev: Kuch  kaha aapne'?

Geet: Jii..kuch nahi'.

Dev: Thik hai toh main chalta hun'.Dev takes his leave.

Geet feels so confused by heart. This man is totally uncomprehending to be understood. Sometimes she feels he is so caring, very loving towards her, & sometimes his rude & reluctant behavior insist her to think otherwise. Sometimes he behaves as the wisest person she ever met; sometimes his words are so much hard-hitting that make her eyes teary. She can't understand this man. He is so much unpredictable, erratic. Geet keeps thinking, while Rano comes in.

Rano: Beta, kal sham ko taiyaar rahna, Dev ki Mom tumhe shopping pe le jana chahti hain.

Geet looks reluctant at her words, as she is still thinking about Dev & his strange nature.

 

 

 

 

PRECAPE: THE SHOPPING'..WILL THEY

 MEET AGAIN'..!!!!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜ƒ


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                                             PART-3

                          PART-5

Edited by 810Kankana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...Kankana.

Geet to talli ho gayi...Geet ne to Dev ke saamne keh diya ki woh uske sapno ka rajkumar nahin haiπŸ‘...woh to sach hai aisa ho bhi nahin sakta...Geet ke sapno ka rajkumar to Maan hi ho sakta hai..😍

Geet ke papaji,Darji,Brij...itni si baat ki itni badi saza...chalo yahan thoda Dev ne Geet ki help ki...but when Geet said thanks and sorry he is so rude.😑

Edited by tushti-kiran - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hiii diii...
wo keya hai na main if mein nayi hoon...mujhe thik tarah se comment karna nei ata...
but aapki story bohot hi achchi hai diii...maine aapse fb pe kahan hai na???πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸΌ
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ana90

hiii diii...
wo keya hai na main if mein nayi hoon...mujhe thik tarah se comment karna nei ata...
but aapki story bohot hi achchi hai diii...maine aapse fb pe kahan hai na???πŸ˜ŠπŸ‘πŸΌ

   
thnkss a lot sweetheart ..hope u will like all the parts...πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
bechari geet
i like the whole talli part
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome updates...πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ˜
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mujhe woh pari pasand nehi hai as maan's gf...maan k gf ho teah wf ho wo geet aur sirf geet hona chahiye...i dont knw magar humein lagta hai k dev jhoot bol raha hai...something is fishy abt him...chalo maan k mann mein geet k liye ehsaas to jagah...magar geet toh maan k dekhtehi gussa ho jati hai...as usual...i cant trust dev...

i pray k geet k mann mein maan k liye ehsaas jag uthe...magar sabse pehle yeah dev aur pari ko hatao...tooo much...

luving ur ff...hats off to u...πŸ€—πŸ₯³

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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry sorry..
Aaj zyada time nahi hai.. so comment wud be shorter..
Weekands pe long long comments pakka.. but working days.. nopt possible..
Ok so the update..
OMG.. geet talli.. hehehe
And how she said to dev that is he her sapnon ka rajkumar.. I was just laughing & laughing..
And the way maan was caring for geet.. haayeee.. mai marjawan..
And daarji ka gussa.. uff..
And the way dev said anpadh gawar.. it really hurt.. but ek tarah se acha hi hai.. uski wajah se geet can now complete her studies..
And dev found that sapnon ka rajkumar betuka.. chi chi.. kitna ganda hai.. aise tho mai bhi geet ki tarah pagal hui.. hehe
Yeh dev sachi me bahut ajeeb sa lag raha hai.. donno wat is he upto..
And shopping.. maaneet meeting.. yippeee.. is se acha aur kya ho sakta hai.. yeaahhh
Plz continue soon..
And dekho I said chota commnet dungi but likhte likhte long ho hi gaya.. hehe
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Posted: 12 years ago
hei kankana its going really nice... amar darun lagche... but precap me oh noo q hai?? jaldi se update do na😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
⭐️Fantastic sis, πŸ‘ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ tusi great ho...⭐️
sorry us time net me prob thi isliay cmmnt ni kr ska, but honestly superb.. fabulous πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘