Maan and Geet Poetry Collection! - Page 7

Posted: 12 years ago
Yes Kiddo I remember...it was one heck of a time...πŸ˜†
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Newdime


Yes Kiddo I remember...it was one heck of a time...πŸ˜†
Hehe I know what a bad impression that was created of me😳
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by bangalores


hi Rachana thank u for the poem...i'm honored that u placed urself in my Geet's position,  felt her emotions and lend them expressions thru' ur words

U r welcome darling.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Jadee777


Excellent post ...love it thanks.

Thank you darling.😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Since that night
(Goldenball - Rakhi's FF - Shifting Sands)

One day on a lonely night
The stars shined and the moon smiled
You descended down the earth like an Angel
Your beauty sparkled like the pearls on the ocean bed
Your laughter created ripples on the silent sea
Your unconscious tug at my heart compelled me 
To get pulled towards you..

Since that night
All I can think of is you
All I can dream of is you
You are all I can see in front of me
You are all I can feel beside me

My world has turned upside down
My days are spent restlessly thinking about you
And my nights are spent sleeplessly dreaming about you
Everywhere I go, everywhere I turn
All I see is you, you and you.

An invisible thread pulls me towards you
And makes me question this lure towards you
Is it attraction or love?
I am not sure what is it that I feel towards you, but
All I want is to get to know you better
All I want is to hear you talk
All I want is to hear you laugh
All I want is to spend all my moments with you
And All I want is you, you and you!

I want to be close to you
I want to understand you
So please give me a chance, just one more time
I beg for your forgiveness from the ground
I want to make everything better
While I soothe you in my arms
My heart is restless 
Not knowing what you feel
Oh! dear Angel from the heaven..
Please give me a chance, just once chance
Because All I want is you, you and you
Since that night...

Edited by Water. - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
another one...great poem...but u didn't give the FF it is based on...but i have my guessπŸ˜‰
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by bangalores


another one...great poem...but u didn't give the FF it is based on...but i have my guessπŸ˜‰


It is Golden Ball's FF - shifting sands
Posted: 12 years ago
Scared to feel again

(For Rakhi's FF - Shifting Sands)

I am scared, scared to feel again
To feel the essence of love in me again
To feel myself being surrounded by your presence
To feel myself being engulfed in your arms
I am scared, scared to even think of love again

Every time when I am near you, I get affected
Every time when I am thinking of you, I get affected
Every time when you are not in front of me, I get affected
Every time you when you call my name, I get affected

What is it about you that affects me so much?
What is it about you that makes me lose my mind?
What is it about you that keeps me on my toes every moment?
What is it about you that makes me wonder about myself?

If I do not hear from you, I get worried
If you do not appear in front of me, I get anxious
Yet, when you are in front of me, I want to run from you
Only because you affect me, my mind, my body and my soul
Yes, I am scared, scared to feel again
Scared for the feeling that is growing in me once again
Yes, I am scared, scared to feel  for you.
To feel you in my heart once again.
Edited by Water. - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
awesome collection
each time i read your poems my mind went back to the time when i studied english litereature , my most favorite subject 😊
thanks to my loving teacher i understood the depth of words in poetry and got hooked to poetry
one should have an amazing talent for this art 😊 you have been gifted with that talent 
hats off to you dear ! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
i honestly want to thank you for refreshing my memories about learning litereature which i cherish deeply 😳
 
my favorites are the poems based on muskan di's FF s.i love others as well . the poems for shifting sands are the ones filled with huge range of emotions  for me as the FF carries a different flavor while dealing with harsh reality
 
keep up your awesome work dear 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by udeshi91


awesome collection
each time i read your poems my mind went back to the time when i studied english litereature , my most favorite subject 😊
thanks to my loving teacher i understood the depth of words in poetry and got hooked to poetry
one should have an amazing talent for this art 😊 you have been gifted with that talent 
hats off to you dear ! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘
i honestly want to thank you for refreshing my memories about learning litereature which i cherish deeply 😳
 
my favorites are the poems based on muskan di's FF s.i love others as well . the poems for shifting sands are the ones filled with huge range of emotions  for me as the FF carries a different flavor while dealing with harsh reality
 
keep up your awesome work dear 😊

Thank you darling.😳
U r very generous with ur comments and appreciation.❀️
I am glad u got connected again with learning literature...
Thank you once again.

Love
RachanaπŸ€—
Edited by Water. - 12 years ago

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