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Posted: 12 years ago
awesooome...
superb...
fab...
rocking...
wonderful...CS...
loved it to the core...
do cont. soon...
thanx for the pm...
take care...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Great intro and part...
Thanksf or the PM..
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Durga...saw u updated bt y no pm? Do pm wen u update. Read part one...awesome. Poor Geet in a dilemma...but realised Swastik's true colours. Update soon n pm wen u do!
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Posted: 12 years ago
please PM me for your next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats !!!! 4 d new one ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

interesting concept ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thank you so much for the warm welcome guys !!!!
am so so pleased !!! 
am coming up with the concept and background story now ... 
hope you guys ll like it !!!!! 

am so happy that many of you left your comments ...
but i got very less "likes" this time compared to the comments received ...
is the like button not working ??? 
if so do leave a mess while commenting ...

i ll try to update by tuesday ,,,, 
its three days continuous holiday here due to independence day ... 
my sister is  coming home from bangalore  today,  most probably in an hour .. 
so i wont be free after that ... this and that works ... 
i  ll try to update with in this three days ,, 
if not please excuse ... 

sorry if i had missed anyone while sending "pm" .. i done it so very fast that i might have missed some ... 
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till then enjoy with my other ff : forever in love ... (only for those who havent read it !! because i dint update that also 😆 ) 


                           
 
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Posted: 12 years ago
congrats on new ff...
interesting character sketch...
thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
part 1
Geet is in love with some Swatik...
and she refused her dad...
oh no her dad hope he is fine now...
looks like her parents knew that the guy is bad...
glad Geet came to know about him before twas late...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratz for ur new FF
Wonderful concept... 👏

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Posted: 12 years ago
 

Thank you so much for the warm welcome guys !!!!
 





now coming to part 2 !!! 

IN delhi

An old elegant lady was sitting in the dining table and slicing the fruits . she called "nakul" , the butler of the mansion . he is a middle aged man working for the khuranas since a long time .

Nakul : haan dadima .apne bulaya ???

Dadi : haan nakul . how is your grandson now ??

Nakul  : bilkul teek hai dadima . with all your blessings !!!

Dadi smiled at his comment : teek hai .yeh sab chod dho . where is maan ??

Just then a young man came down the stairs . his aura filled the place with confidence . 

Maan : good morning dadima .

Dadi : good morning bte . come have your break fast .

Maan : sorry dadi . muje bahut kaam hai . I have a important meeting @ 9 .

Dadi : teek hai beta , atleast have some juice.

Maan gave a faint smile at her concern and drank some juice.

He bet good bye and left for his office .

AT CHENNAI

Vaubhav was still in hospital '

Chitra was able to see the difference in geet  '.remorse and regret in her . They were waiting for vaibhav to gain his conscious.

Doctor cam for his regular check up and asked everyone to wait  outside .

After wat seemed like eternity , Dr came outside '

Geet : dr , appa is okay na now ??

DR  :  yea he is fine and conscious  now ' he had come across the critical stage and is stable ..

Chitra could not thank god enough and left to see her husband .  

Dr ( to geet )   :  ok miss , I need to say something important . though your dad is stable now , his heart is still week . don't give him any stress or tensions . this is quite a strong attack . we cannot say if his body could manage another one . so be careful . follow the medicines carefully and come for regular check ups ..

Geet noded : thank you  dr . I ll take care now .

With that geet  entered the room and saw her mom  preparing the juice for dad.

She quietly made her way towards her dad and sat beside him . vaibhav just turned his face slightly .

Geet : appa  , am sorry .

Varbhav : chitra ,  ask her to leave .

Geet ( with tears )  : appa please listen to me once . I ll leave after that ..

Vaibhav : what do you want to say ??? is there anything left ?

Chitra  consoled him and requested him to listen once .

Geet : appa , am ready to marry who ever you say . go ahead with the arrangements .

Vaibhav gave a questioning look to chitra and then geet : why wat happened now ?? you go behind that swathik itself . I don't care about you anymore .

Geet : appa , from now onwards only you and our family matters  to me . I don't need anyone else . am sorry for everything appa . I should not have spoken to you like that ..

Geet broke down completely and started sobbing '

Her parents could not see her in such a state '..

Vaibhav just hugged her : its okay geet ' shhh' don't cry '. I understand this all happens at this age ' leave it .. now that you realized who is important in your life now ..

Chitra : geet calm down . see dr told not to give any  stress to your dad isn't it ?? why are making him stress ??

This was enough to make geet stop her crying ' she just hugged her dad and stayed there for sometime ..

Her parents were atlast happy that she realized abt her life ..

One week after , vaibhav was discharged from hospital and came home .

He is all fit and fine now .. most of all happy to get his daughter back ..

But geet was only one suffering from the heart break .. she could not bear that she was cheated in the name of love '.

It was Sunday and every one were sitting in the dinning room and having their lunch '

Vaibhav  attending some business calls now and then .

Just then he received a call from office . he could not stand and speak near  the landline so he put it on speaker  : hello ..

Office employee : hello sir . this is  ravi .

Vaibhav : hello ravi . whats the matter ?

Ravi : sir , the project which we finalized with one of the company in delhi wants to have meeting with you tomorrow .

Vaibhav : but I cant travel now .. you know the reason . ..

Ravi : yes sir , I let them know about your condition but they want to meet atleast any delegates from out side to finalise the designs .

Vaibhav : okay then ask them to send me the designs I ll verify and fax them .

Ravi : sir, this project had been handled by their MD personally , so they want the meeting to be in conduct .

Vaibhav : but I can neither attend it nor send any delegates there . you are needed here to manage the affairs in my absence .

Geet interrupted both and said in a low voice : appa , can I attend it ??

Vaibhav was startled : geet you ??? how can you attend it ??? I mean you need to go for office right ??

Geet said in a feeble voice : I resigned my job appa ..

Vaibhav could not speak ( in phone ) : ravi I ll talk to you in some time .

With that he cut the phone and concentrated towards geet .

Vaishav started in a calm voice : geet I have no objection in you resigning the job . even you don't need to go one . but why did you resign it so suddenly ??

Geet : I don't want any memories in relation to him dad.. I want to start everything a fresh .

Vaibhav : I don't know what happened with you two . but I hope everything is for good . ..

Geet : appa I want to help you in business '.

Vaibhav smiled : no problem geet . infact you had been successful till now . I ll be more honoured with you in my company '

Geet  : thanks appa . I thought you wont feel good .

Vasibhav : why would I ?? you are the top candiadate in architecture ..remember it ?? so its decided that you ll be the in my post till I return .

Geet was dumbstuck : but dad , how can I be in you seat ??? I don't habe that much experience '

Vaibhav : every one deserves another chance . I believe that you wont let me down .. more over you had working for the past 4 yrs '

Geet : okay dad , as you wish but it ll be only till you coma back ..

Vaibhav : kk .. now you gonna attend the meeting in delhi tomorrow.

Geet : okay ..

Vaibhav : I ll give you the files after lunch ..you go through and prepare for the meeting ..

Geet : hmmm'

The whole family was happy with the change in environment .. vaibhav and chitra could not thank god enough '. While geet hoping to forget everything from her past and lead a happy life '.

Geet dosent realize that her one visit to delhi gonna change her life forever ''''''''''..


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                                 precap :::  geet in delhi  and meet with dadi 

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