Dakshna FF(Fan fiction) - Page 20

i was thinking of moving my old FF's here, is it a gud idea you think.

LOL at main tumhe sone nahi doonga, great FF as usual, had any ideas about photo gift

Frends i m writing for first time FF so pls kuch galat likh du to sorry.

@Lucky hai hai 😳 kya sahi dialogues hai dakshu ke 😳 😉 ... And him calling Naina Mrs Patwardhan bahut accha lagta hai... Jate jate u gave a one more wonderful scene... Thanks yaar...

@ storyteller.. Which other ff are u saying... Trfed them over here... Accha Hoga Sab ek Saat honge to padne mein majja aayega...
Aur who photo ka u were saying can I suggest something what if instead of photo frame Naina gifts him an album where she has collection of all their memories starting their first meeting... Like at shriti's marriage, then at PH holi day, gudi padwa function, Aai baba anniversary, her office opening ceremony, she had al those photos remember... if she makes an album and then gifts it to him with empty spaces so that they can keep adding more photos to the album everytime... What say... 😛

@ muniras great scene... Like the birthday concept... Dakshu ka cake khilaneka idea too romantic yaar.. 😳 Kaash aaisa kuch ho par kuch nahi Hoga atleast imagine karne main koi burai nahi hai 😉
Aur Naina ko green net saree with red border kaise lagega?... What say?...
It doesn't look like ur first attempt... Keep writing more... Accha lagta hai... 😊

Thanks. and saree which u mentioned  will look very pretty and beautiful on naina.

Purple color saree... Edited by sousousou - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan

@Lucky hai hai 😳 kya sahi dialogues hai dakshu ke 😳 😉 ... And him calling Naina Mrs Patwardhan bahut accha lagta hai... Jate jate u gave a one more wonderful scene... Thanks yaar...

@ storyteller.. Which other ff are u saying... Trfed them over here... Accha Hoga Sab ek Saat honge to padne mein majja aayega...
Aur who photo ka u were saying can I suggest something what if instead of photo frame Naina gifts him an album where she has collection of all their memories starting their first meeting... Like at shriti's marriage, then at PH holi day, gudi padwa function, Aai baba anniversary, her office opening ceremony, she had al those photos remember... if she makes an album and then gifts it to him with empty spaces so that they can keep adding more photos to the album everytime... What say... 😛

I was thinking  asimilar thing, I was thinking digital photoframe or old-style projection (she could add words), are u familiar with it, it shows a continous slideshow of whatever pics you put on it. But i thought they don't have a lot of pictures so didn't put the idea down. Edited by storytellerSSBN - 12 years ago

Originally posted by: muniras

Frends i m writing for first time FF so pls kuch galat likh du to sorry.

This is the scene after DAKSHNA mrg.

Its naina's b'day and all family members are out of town for the function.only dakshna are alone in house.Daksh pretend that he forget her birthday and naina is upset for this.Morning in the hall.

 

Daksh;Naina aaj mujhe off me thoda late ho jayega.tum khana kha k so jana.and he goes to office

 

Naina see him angrily or sochti hai ki daksh kaise mera b'day bhul gaya.uske baad wo bhi apne off chali jati hai. In afternoon daksh  comes home frm window bcoz house is lock.He has a  romantic plan to celebrate naina's b'day.aur daksh apne plan ko kamyaab banane me lag jata hai.

 

In evening naina come back and opens the door and she is surprise to see daksh.he wish her in a very romantic way with kiss on her lips.

 

Naina;Daksh tumhe yaad tha mera b'day.

Daksh;tumhe kya laga k me bhul gaya.nahi meri

jaan me ye din kaise bhul sakta hu.ye din ke liye to maine kitne sapne sajaye the jo mujhe pure karne hai.

 

gr8 dialogue

 

Naina;To tumne muje pehle kyu nahi bataya kitni udaas thi me kitna gussa aaya tha mujhe tumpe.atleast batana to tha k tumhe mera b'day yad hai.

 

Daksh;Agar me bata deta to surprise kaisa rehta and he hugs naina tightly. daksh usko card,flowers,chocolates aur saree gift karta hai which is very sexy(u know what i mean ) 

I know what you mean

 

with matching jewellery (guys select ur fav colour for saree in which color u want to see naina).

I like her in every colour like Daksh

 

and tells naina to wear saree. naina goes in room to wear saree.After sometime she comes and daksh admires her in lots of pyaar in his eyes.naina feels very shy and then naina cuts the cake aur daksh naina ko cake khilata hai in a very romantic style.

 

He puts cake in his mouth and tell naina to bite just lips to lips

U all understand what i m trying to write.

I know exactly what you are trying to write, maybe she could get some cream on her lips or nose.

 

Daksh;Naina aaj tum itni khubsurat lag rahi ho ki meri nazar tum pe atak gayi hai.man to karta hai ki tumhari is khubsurti main kho jaaon aur itna pyar karu tumse k kabhi pyar khatam hi na ho.

 

gr8 dialogue

 

Naina;Daksh tumko roka kisne hai and naina kiss him on his cheeks, lips, neck,chin etc etc.aur iske baad  song bajta hai (BAHON K DARMIYAN DO PYAR MIL RAHE HAI).aur dakshna kho jate hai ek dusre  k pyar me. real life me bhi aisa hona chahiye.

 

sach me kuch romantic romantic scene dikhane chahiye SSBN me.

 

Frends, if u hv this song then just listen and imagine dakshna in the song.u will enjoy.not only this song but all romantic songs.its just relaxation from the current track.again sorry if there is a mistakes.

i can think and imagine but writing no way. ye to sab ka read karke mujhe laga ki thoda tuta phuta bhi likh du jo me imagine karti hu.

 

I love the concept that Daksh pretends to 4get Naina's bday, this should happen in SSBN.