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My Only Mistake I'm A Female(MG) THREAD#3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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My Only Mistake! I'm A FEMALE
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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 42

 

Geet was dressed in a long ankle length skirt with a buttoned top and a long scarf, and Maan was in trousers and shirt that matched the color of her top, and Angle was also in same color frock, they looked like a perfect family

 

M: now as DM has packed the lunch I see there is no point in going to some restaurant, so where do you think we must go Angle?

G: Angle tell your papa that you have not seen any places out here so he may take you anywhere he feels like

M: ok, then let's go to Qutub Minar, and enjoy our picnic there

G: ok, say thank you papa

M: you are welcome beta

 

They went to Qutub Minar, Geet was so excited to see it, it was tall

G: it is even taller then I thought; it's amazing

Maan was very happy to see her delighted face and pledged that he will bring her frequently to show Delhi.

 

They walked for quite some time then settled on a spot in the garden, Maan spread the carpet and Geet placed the food basket on it, they had a hearty meal and then Geet turned around to feed Angle, Maan smiled and turned his back to the two girls. Soon Angle was sleeping. They talked and discussed many things including her college.

 

One photographer was wandering near them since they have come; Maan called him and asked his problem

 

P: sir, can I take your family photograph?

M; why?

P: sir, this is off season, only few tourist come, if you will please allow me to take few snaps, sir I will give you the developed copy with negatives in one hour

M: Geet what do you say?

G: ok, I don't mind

M: alright state your prize

 

And the two men talked for a while and then he took there photographs in different poses, three together and even solo. After an hour he gave them the snaps and also framed one photograph for them in which Maan and Geet were standing close to each other with both of them holding Angle.

 

In the evening they left for KM, and he without any second thought hanged the framed picture in his room. Later Nakul noticed the frame and told DM about it, DM was far too happy and wished some day they really were a family.

 

  Next day at the break fast table Maan instructed Nakul and Lata that as Geet had her classes from 9:30am to 4:30pm, and had a lunch hour at 1:00pm, Lata would go to the college with her lunch and Angle and there Geet will have lunch and see to Angle's needs, and this has to be continued till Angle was 6 months old.

Geet tried to object but Maan gave her no ears and said

 

M: Geet I have been lenient with you does not mean you will not listen to me, I have said and this is final

G: but Maan

M: enough, no one asked your opinion, and takes this book on needs of nursing mother who are working, and read it.

 

And he went without giving her a chance to speak


so it was all about the divorce case
now the trio is off for an outing

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Edited by smj1977.shruti - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

First Congratulations for the new thread

And secondly im confused...Geet was sad before but im not sure why?/

Why??

But overall awesome update...although i dont like suspenseful endings lol

But still i loved the picnic and i too like Dadima wish they were a family. 

Edited by cue1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats on the new thread, the update was awesome, like the photographer and dadi thinks they are the perfect family,love to see many more family movements of maan and geet with their angel.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yipppeee me second...
congo on ur new thread...
short n sweet update...
continue...
chao
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congrats 4r new thread. . .
Awesome update. . . . . Loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulations on the new thread


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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice part.
The outing was so sweet and well needed one for Geet.
Loved Maaneet convo through Angel.
Geet's foul mood automatically got better on seeing QM.
Maan too was enjoying her excitement.
The trio with matching outfits were dressed perfect for a pic
No wonder the photographer was wandering around
Hope the divorce case is resolved soon and Daadi's wishes come true.
Looks like super concerned Maan has instructed everybody to adjust according to Geet's college schedule.
He so beautifully arranged everything so that Geet didnt have to miss either nursing or college.
Geet had to oblige without an option
Waiting for the next part.
Edited by Ramhari - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulation for new thread
 awesome update.
loved it.
loved maaneet moments and with their daughter angel.
 continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Congratulation for new thread...
 
I am at work so will read update & leave comment later...