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MG[SS]-Just a Dream or Two Behind You [IMP Note - Pg1 & Pg71] - Page 4

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: jazzerette


You guys are the bestest sakhis🤗🤗

And don't worry...I will be updating pretty quickly ...and then run away and hide before anyone catches me😆



PLease don't run away the next time - you really have a way with words...so please update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: ninand

love the rain in almost as unintentionally-dramatic a way as you Geet. . with an unswerving fascination and utmost devotion..


loved the description.. eager to read more.


You know the rain brings out the ultimate element = water - water has always connected Maneet.

Jazzz...I dunno if it was intentional or not - but You've brought that out in your Story! Nice going
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sangi1588

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First of all Jazz.,need to thank you posting it here.. You are such an amazing writer that i feel everyone should enjoy your way of thinking and expressing certain views and feelings..emotions..everything...I feel embarrassed after reading your stories..i am such a pathteic writer...guess i should stick to Psychology only...

Coming to your SS...why dnt you try and continue this as a FF..i am sure many would want to read more and you would enjoy too..
It was exceptionally awesome Jazz...i just love your style of writing..to really tell you the truth i have no words to describe how i felt reading ur SS..please do continue.. love u loads...muaahhh🤗


Love you too sakhi🤗

Plz sangs...don't say that...I  love your deewana Maan!!!😃

FF😲 I can never hold a thought for that long...I already find this exhausting😆. Plus, from the anticipated 3-4 parts it seems it will go about 5-6 and thats more than I can handle.


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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: mrk_1

wow nice start yaar...loved it ,.,

do add me to ur pm list


Thank you...will do😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: deejayaqueel

 
Abhi zyaada ho gaya 😆😆... i know it will be a great job... but please update regularly and frequently... i am still suffering at the hands of some of our friends who ditched us mid way


Jee Ustaad!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
@mechantefille ...thanx for the appreciation.😊

And yeah...the water symbolism was unintentional...but it will remain strong throughout the story I guess.
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Posted: 12 years ago

ChapterTwo 

A door left shut. A ray that crept in.


2022/2/9 - IMPORTANT - SS moved to 

https://archiveofourown.org/works/36072373/chapters/89923987

jazzerette | Archive of Our Own






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Chapter Three - Stirred and Awakened.

Edited by jazzerette - 2 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

The typical collide fall meeting but it gave me goosebumps coz the reaction from both was like😳... Maan only knows her name but is fida onher... geet is yet to notice him actually😆 come on i am expecting more from you!😆😆

Edited by Preethi-Premi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: --Shika--

am not talking to someone as someone forgot me..havent even said a hi par dekkho talking to their fianc. Mein toh kehti hun..biwi aaye sab ko bhul jate hain sister ko bhi *sob sob*

How can youthink that i forgot you... you have exiled yourself i miss you so much😭
jazzerette thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Preethi-Premi

The typical collide fall meeting but it gave me goosebumps coz the reaction from both was like😳... Maan only knows her name but is fida onher... geet is yet to notice him actually😆 come on i am expecting more from you!😆😆


Well I wouldn't have it any other way😆 How can Maaneet NOT collide and meet🤣🤣

And you are yet to read her reaction...next time sahi...I got tired itne mein hee😆