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Posted: 12 years ago

super duper update
loved it to the core

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aamirkhanfan

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Posted: 12 years ago

great part...i was thinking that maan wud do something like this only

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Posted: 12 years ago

Loved ur FF... Pls add me to ur PM list

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hey all friends!

Thanks 4 liking my FF so much.And if you want that I shall pm u every part so plz kindly send me buddy request.
4om Sliaan

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Posted: 12 years ago

Promo:
Maan gives Geet a bundle of files and says to complete them till evening.Then again calls him and says to complete the project in 1 hour.Geet is all tensed.Then both are coming 4om opposite sides and and bump into each other and geet falls in MSK arms.

Background voice:Will the hatred continue between 2 of them??? Or love will knock at their hearts!!!

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maansee

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice start... rude maan bubbly geet... continue soon ... pm mee too plz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: maansee

nice start... rude maan bubbly geet... continue soon ... pm mee too plz

Thank you maansee ok adding you in the pm list😃

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-NSKluvsSRK-

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Posted: 12 years ago

Part 4:


      Maan steps out of the car with black glasses on his face.All the security guards are standing behind him.
Maan walks towards the gate with Adi and security guards following him.He enters the office and takes off his glasses and sees towards Geet.
Geet is shocked to see him.
Geet thoughts:Babaji! help me please.I cant bare him.
Everyone welcomes him whole heartedly except Geet.Maan comes towards Geet and says
Maan:Would you not welcome me Miss...???
An office man:Miss Geet
Maan:Miss Geet(smiles)
Geet:Yes sir,No sir I mean ofcourse sir.
Maan:Where is my office?
Office man:There sir
Maan goes to his office.Adi follows him.Geet is not in her senses.Pinky comes to her.
Pinky:Are u ok Geet?
Geet:Yes I am ok Pinky.
Pinky smiles and goes away.Adi comes outside.
Adi:Excuse me Miss Geet.Sir is calling you.
Geet:ok I am coming
Geet is in a great tension.
Geet(to herself):Now what Geet?? You are all gone!
Geet knocks at door.
Maan:come in
Geet comes in and sees him sitting at his seat.
Geet:Yes sir You called me.
Maan:Geet I need full information of this office till 8 pm.
Geet:But sir..
Maan:I have not comleted yet
     And I need the cvs of each and everyone in this office.
Geet:Excuse me sir.This work is of secretary not an assistant manager.Why dont you say this to ur secretary?
Maan:You are right Geet.This work is of secretary.Ok then we shall give this work to you.
Geet:What do you mean?
Maan:From now on u are my personal secretary!!!
Geet:But sir...
Maan:Thats it!Now go and do your work.
Geet is going that she bangs herself with chair and is about to fall.
Maan:Geet!
Maan picks her up and now both are looking into each other eyes with mAHI BG.
Maan holds Geet tight and moves her more closer.Theyare very close.
Adi comes in.
Adi:Sir!
Maan and Geet are back in thier senses.Geet goes outside.
Maan thoughts:What was I doing???Why I was moving her more closer??Maan come into your senses.You HATE her!!!
Adi:Sir Now what??
Maan:Yes Adi first of all change the name of the company.Khurana constructions!!!
Adi:Ok sir
Adi goes away.Geet is sitting in her cabin all lost in her thoughts.Remembering Maan holding her.
Phone rings.Geet comes back from her thoughts.She picks up the phone.
Geet:Yes...Yes sir is in office.You can meet him at 6 pm.
Geet put off phone.
Geet:Why are you thinking about him???He is monster understood Geet!!!

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Posted: 12 years ago

part3 was gud yar...
N part was wonderful again...
Omg maan...kuch toh hua h kuch ho gya h lolz
Monster ???? Omg lolz... 🤣
Ab bara mazza aayaiga...
So update soon...

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ana56

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Posted: 12 years ago

hey nice ff buddy

i just come to read ur ff today

must say brilliant work

continue soon

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