FF:-ENTWINED SOULS{maaneet)ch-18 page-37 Oct9/11 - Page 28

awesome!

maan's love for geet is unbelievable!

hats off to maan!

so rano knw who krithika is...

I am sure maan will be able to figure out the real motive behind krithika's entry!

continue soon!

Edited by sweet scorpio - 12 years ago

nice update...she came to kill geet😡

omg rano knows kritika

loved the update...

till part 18
wow awesome story...
Maan and Geet wow young protective and possessive lovers...
Maan so much possessive of Geet and always his gut feelings are right and so protective too...
Abhi and Dadi are so nice to Geet and have accepted her so openly with true feelings...
Rano is now tension free and happy with knowing Maan and Abhi and Dadi...
Brij and Handa are low lives...
this Kritika doesnt seem good at all...
and Maan too doesnt like her at all...
Rano seems to have recognized this Kritika and i think she has been sent those Brij and Handa...
why the heck did Abhi appoint this woman?
Maan when he saw the intentions of Kritika hurt himself to save Geet and also didnt even scream in pain why she cruelly pulled out the glass piece just to make Geet not know about his pain...
OMG hes really too determined and strong and caring about at this age itself...
cont soon dear...
add me to ur pm list...
sent the buddy invite...

R U GOIN TO UPDATE DIS???????????????????????

hey.. do cont. all your FF's.. All are very very good.. why u stopped writing..plz update  m waiting waiting

update karo na plzzz..its been really longgg...