Tarnished Innocence~removed

Edited by .Lena. - 12 years ago

nice start ...

Edited by sindu555 - 12 years ago

Edited by WhiteFantasy - 12 years ago

this neel is so disgusting how can do this to a 7-8 year girl good that this time maan was there but looking at ur tittle maan would not be able to save her from neel in future parts

Well written but bit disturbing :-(

woah!!! neel is disgusting, how can he do that to a little girl??? great topic 2 write a OS on though...can't wait 2 see how the story progresses but im hoping Maan is her saviour and won't let anything bad happen xxx

Ewww a pedophile cousin... This is very dark... You better put a age warning Lena.. I mean even this part is not mean for children less than 13 years old...😊

OMG why do I have a really bad feeling of what might happen in the next few chapters? :|

neel is such a disgusting chap...shameless kahin ka😡
well a nice attempt to capture the unique  theme of pedophile in ur OS...
simply awesome narration...
loved it

do cont soon

reva
Edited by Dreamy_Mystique - 12 years ago

disturbing, but something that happens more often than people would like to believe, and, with more people than we expect. Edited by ninand - 12 years ago