Originally posted by: shining_moon
I'll try to update soon dear...I didn't wanted to leave it at cliff hanger...sacchi...my younger bro snatched the key board😡
nyways yup adi is geet's bro...I'll give a character sketch soon😛
well story will be more clear in the next part, till then have the same old PATIENCE...😆
n yes thanks for liking it😳
Originally posted by: NoorFatima
wicked ff .. and a thriilling prologue..its a new concept yaar (atleast for me on IF)and maan as an under wrld don is sooo sooo WICKED..would really love to read how the underworld don and a simple naive girl would fall in love..and please dont make adi geet's bro.. it would be sooo sooo 🤬 of him to get his sis married to a don..eagerly waiting for the next part..Noor
Originally posted by: Fantasies
Sigh!😆gosh... u ppl have made me literarily fall in love with all types of criminals...ek taraf Reet and Sam and now u... gosh...
Originally posted by: SOLACEofEYES
Yeah new ff awesome yaar, inspired by which DON SRK's or AB.
Continue soon.
Thanks 4 pm.
Originally posted by: holyangel
waht?? dont tell me that "bhaiya" is Geet's bro.. !!!!!! no no no.. it cant b... or is it really a geet's bro working with Maan.. ohhh .. is it Narag.. geet's bro..??? 😕
plzzz update next part soon.. can't wait.. 😊
Originally posted by: shining_moon
Oh yeah as they good girls fall for bad guys😉
n that reminds me I have not read part4 of sam's gangster...I saw she has updated
just love all the dark maana😈
YES OVIOUSLY ANUPAM YOU CONTINUE THIS FF I LIKE THIS PART VERY MUCH. ADI IS GEET BROTHER WOW SO SWEET BUT WHO HE TALKING ABOUT WITH GEET I HOPE HE IS MY MAAN. CAN' CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT UPDATE.
Originally posted by: Fantasies
]um... go n read then.. its wonder ful...ok and well are u changing the topic... i m just stuck on one thing... and that is... update soon...!😉
Originally posted by: rupzloveu
plzzz give the character sketch...
n plzzz continue writing ...loved the prolong...
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