Kya yahin pyar hai LAST PRT P. 180/ 183!!

hi guys. im starting a fan-fic for the first time. I hope u guys like it and plzz giv me sum encouragement. I decided to make it different from the original. so i just hope u guys like it.

Characters:

Kripa: she is the most popular girl at her college and is prithvi's gf.

Prithvi: he is also the most popular guy at his college and loves kripa a lot.

Angad: Prithvi childhood friend and  they havent met for over 10 yrs

Kripa's family: same as original

prithvi's family: same

angad's family: same as original

i will post the first part later.

i hope u guys r excited to know more

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Edited by desiigirl19 - 17 years ago

oh yes i am excited to know more plz continue

o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0lalalalalalalalalalal i wanna read it

i am excited but y p-k bf and gf it should be a-k bf gf

u guys might be wondering y i paired p-k up but its just part of the story. butits not abt them. dont worry..it is about A-K

Scene 1:
kripa -k
prithvi - p

The scene starts with two guys teasing a new girl in college. Then u see another girl walking towards them. u cant see the girl but first u see her legs, then her eyes, n then u see her face. It is none other that our own beautiful KRIPA! She tries to save the new girl.

K- Josh yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?
J- kripa? sorry woh mein..
K- maine tum se kaha tha na. tum ladkiyon ko chedna bandh kyu nahi karte.
J- kripa im really sorry. mujhe plzz maaf kar do. mein aur phir kissi bhi ladki ko nahi chedunga. Im really sorry.
k- u better be. samjhe? now just get lost.
New girl- thank u very much. agar aap nahin aati to pata nahi kya hota.
K- its ok. aayinda se tumhe koi takleef nahi hogi. ok?
new girl- thnx very much. lekin woh aapki baath itni jaldi kaise maan gaye?
K- is college me sab meri baat mante hain. sab darte he mujhse kyunki main is college ki class president jo hun.

They talk for a few more mins and then the new girl thnx kripa again nd leaves

Then u see kripa busy reading something wen someone grabs her from behind. she turns around to see...

K- Prthvi? Tum. Tumne to mujhe darahi diya tha.
P- Maine? tum mujse kabse sarne lagi?
Then P hugs her nd she sees his watch...

K- oh god! its already 1 o'clock. mom aur dad hamara lunch par wait kar rahe hain. chalo prithvi hume chalna chahiye.
P- itni bhi kya jaldi hai? first give me a kiss.
K- prithvi plzz. chodo mujhe. mujhe late ho raha he.
P- just one ( he gets very close to her and she pushes him aside)
K- prithvi woh mein.. I..
P- me samajhta hun kripa. im sorry mujhe zabardasti nahin karna chahiye tha. im sorry
He is about to leave wen she holds him wrist.
K- Naraz ho na mujhse? im sorry
P- nahin kripa. mein tumse naraz kabhi nahin ho sakta. u know i luv u too much. now lets leave.

K holds prithvi's hand nd they leave. everyone in the college is staring at them.Then u see the new girl again.

new girl - ng
Anita ( K's frnd) - an

an - wow. they look so cute naa. i wish mere paas bhi prithvi ki tara koi hota.
ng - yeh prithvi kaun hai?
an - tum prithvi ko nahin janti? shayad tum yaha nayi ho. rite?
ng- ha
an: arre P and K yaha ke hottest couple hain. they have known each other for 3 yrs and have been bf/gf for 2. they r made for each other. hain na?
ng: ha. they make a pretty good couple.

Scene 2
K and P arrive at K's house in P's car. K is abt to get out of the car wen p get a hold of her wrist.

P- kripa tumne pura time mujhse baat tak nahin kiya. tum mujhse naraz to nahin ho na?
K- nahin prithvi. main naraz nahin hu.
P- Kripa...do u luv me?
K- yeh kaisa sawal hai? u know how i feel abt u
P- phir bi. ek baar kaho. tum mujhsw kabhi kehti hi nahin ho.
K- ( not able to meet his eyes) I luv u prithvi.
Then she gets out of the car nd runs into her house

K- Mom..Dad.. kaha hein aap?
Mom:M
Dad:D

M: Kripa beta itni der kardi tum dono ne. arre prithvi kaha hain?
K: woh mom woh car park kar raha hai.
D: Lo prithvi bhi agaya.
P: hi aunty. hi uncle. sorry we r late.
M: acha tum dono haath dho lo. mein tab tak khana lagati hoon.
K - P : ok

kripa enters her room and prithvi is following her but she stops him at the door.
K- tum kaha ja rahe ho?
P: tumhare rrom me. mujhe bhi to haath dhone do.
K: P is ghar me bohot bathrooms hai. tumhe mere kamre mein aane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. waise bhi ab tak hamari shaadi nahin hui. acha nahin lagta na. bye
P: lekin kripa...

Kripa closes the door before he can say nething.

After a few mins kripa is combing her hair, P walks in from behind cuz she forgot to lock the door. he grabs her from behind and they fall on the bed.

K- prithvi? tum yaha? maine tumse kaha tha na. plz leave my room.
P- come on kripa. hamari shaadi hone wali he. its ok.
He tries to kiss her but she tries resisting.
K- Prithvi plz. stop it (she pushes him off her really hard.)
P- Kripa?
She storms out of the room in anger.

At the Dining Table:

M: yeh kripa aur prithvi kaha reh gaye? KRIPA?
K: haan mom im coming. chalo jaldi khana do mujhe bohot bhook lagi hain.
M: lekin prithvi ko to aane do.kahan he woh?
K: Mom woh...
P: main yaha hoon aunty
M: ok chalo mein khana laga deti hoon.

During lunch they start talking.

M: Acha prithvi. aaj kal damini kaha he.
P: aunty woh mom london gayi he. ek business deal ke liye.
M: Acha. nahi woh mein soch rahi thi ki tumhari aur kripa ki shaadi fix karna hai.

U see prithvi smile and kripa in shock.

M: arre kripa tumhe kya hua? tumhara mu itna latka hua kyun hai?
K: nahin mom. woh mein soch rahi thi ki itni jaldi kya hai shaadi ka. abhi college bhi khatam hone me 2 saal hai...
M: To kya hua. u have to eventuallly get married. so y not now? kyun prithvi?

Prithvi is abt to say yes but kripa hits him from under the table and hints him to say no.

p: (in a disappointing voice) woh aunty kripa theek keh rahi hai. me kuch banna chahta hoon shadi karne se pahle.
M: acha beta jaise tumhari marzi

After a while prithvi decides to go home.
k: main tumhe bahar tak chodne aati hoon.
they go outside to P's car.

K: ok then bye prithvi. i'll see u in college tomorrow.
P: Kripa.. tumne shaadi karne se mana kyon kiya?
K:(not knowing wat to say) woh prithvi...college..aur..
P: its ok kripa. main samajhta hoon. bye.
He leaves in his car.

As he leaves in his car 
k: [thinking] tumhe main kaise batau prithvi ki mujhe pata nahin ke me tumse shaadi karna chahti hoon bhi ya nahin...
P: [ thinking] kripa..mujhe hamesha aise kyon lagta hai ki tum mujhse pyar nahin karti...

OK guys. thts it for today. i hope u guys liked it. i know its kinda boring coz it too detailed. but i really want u guys to like it. plzz leave ur comments on it.

NEXT: something about angad...


Edited by desiigirl19 - 18 years ago

plz continue
i want angad 2 cum
cuz well i wanna c scenes btwn him n kripa
plz do quickly
im dyin 4 more of ur fanfic

continue soon its interesting so far

wow ur story is too good. amazing yaa. continue soon 😛 😛

thnx guys for the encouragement. i will rite more soon. plzz leave ne recommendations n wat u want me to include. im happy u guys liked it. it just gave a boost to my confidence.

😛 😛

ok guys ill continue with the 2nd part of the fan-fic.

PART 2


SCENE 1

Its morning and kripa is still sleeping
M: kripa's mom

M: Kripa beta utho. bohut der ho gayi. its already 8. prithvi abhi atha hi hoga. dont keep him waiting like always.
K: (in a sleepy voice) mom mujhe sone do na. kal raat der se sona pada.
M: nahin beta utto jaldi. come on.
she pulls off kripa's blanket. kripa wakes up and gets ready for prithvi to come and pick her up for college.
But he doesnt show up.

K: yeh prithvi kaha reh gaya.
just then the phone rings and kripa picks it up.
K: hello
P: kripa,its me
K: prithvi? kahan ho tum. mein kitni der se tumhara intezaar kar rahi hoon. we r getting late for college.
P: im sorry kripa. aaj me tumhe pick nahi kar sakta. kuch emergency ke wajah se mujhe delhi jana pad raha he. kuch papers sign karne the.
K: (in an angry voice) Delhi? kamaal hai prithvi tumne mujhe bataya hi nahin aur mein tumhara kitni der se intezaar kar rahi thi.
P: really sorry jaan. i'll make it up to u wen i get back. okay? Ab tum college jao. mein badme phone karunga.
K:theek hai. bye. jaldi aajana.

Kripa hangs up but is really angry cuz P dint tell her about him going to Delhi.

Kripa leaves for college in her own car, looking absolutely gorgeous. When she reaches her college and gets out of her car, everyone is staring at her, esp. the boys. then Anita approaches her
Anita: an

an: kripa!!!
K: oh hi anita. wats up. woh spring concert ke preparations kaise chal rahe he?
an: woh sab to theek chal raha hai. lekin...prithvi kaha hai? aj pehli baar tum akeli aayi ho. kya hua?
K: kya hua? kuch bhi to nahin. mein prithvi ke sath hi au yeh zaroori to nahin. me kabhi bhi aur kahi bhi ja sakti hu prithvi ke bina. I dont depend on him. samjhi?
an: i'm sorry kripa. lekin itni bhadakneki bhi koi zaroorat nahin hai. i was just askin.
K: ( realizing that she was too rude) I'm sooo sorry anita. woh mein prithvi ka ghussa tumpe uttar rahi thi. I'm really sorry.
an: its ok. lekin plzz prithvi pe ghussa mat karna. he is sooo sweet and nice. woh tumse bohut pyar karta hain. theek hai then i'll leave. mujhe concert ki backstage preparations karne hain. ok bye

As anita leaves, kripa thinks to herself...
K (thinking): sab yehi samajte hain ki me aur prithvi is college ke hottest couple hain. par kissi ko yeh nahi pata ki actually baat kya hai.

then she also leaves to make prepearations for the spring concert. since she is the class president, she has to take care of all the preparations for the college annual springg concert. it's the biggest party of the year n everyone is eagerly waiting for this.

kripa is in the middle of making the preparations nd is really stressed out. right then she gets a call from prithvi and picks it up even if she is in a bad mood.

K:ha prithvi bolo..
P:hi kripa. how is everything?
K: prithvi plzz. mere paas zyada time nahin hain. concert 2 weeks mein hain. jaldi kahon kya baat hain?
P: oh sorry kripa. woh main bas yehin kehne ke liye phone kiya tha ke kal mera dost london se aa raha hain. tho kyon ki main usse pick karne ke liye airport nahin ja sakata.....kya tum jaogi? plzz
K: Wat? Mein? lekin Prithvi mujhe kal bohut kam hain aur waise bhi mein to usse janti tak nahin. mein usse identify kaise karoongi? kya mishty nahin ja sakti?
P: ja sakti hain lekin wo to khud london main he, mom ke sath.
K: prithvi plzz. mein....woh
P: oh come on kripa. kya tum mere liye itna bhi nahin kar sakti. maine hamesha tumhe khusi dene ki koshish ki. agar aaj mujhe kuch madat chahiye to tumne mana kar diya? plzz kripa..
K: (after a few seconds) okay prithvi mein jaoongi. lekin mein usse identify kaise karoongi?
P: simple.. tum uske naam ka board lekar jana aur me usse keh doonga ke tum uska intezar karogi. okay?
K: theek hai. uska naam kya hai?
P: uska naam hai..ANGAD KHANNA
K: Angad Khanna?


thats it for today. i hope u guys like it. plzz leave comments
😊 😛 😃


Edited by desiigirl19 - 18 years ago