Hey Vini π
good to see another creations of urs π ... sorry 4 d late reply yaarπ... i completly 4gt to comment π
actually FB pe ek mail aa gaya tha π?.. so I gt lost in thtππ ?? n yahan comment karna hi bhool gyi π
but I just loved ur poem ??. Really awesome yaarππ
do write more
n I really loved these lines π
Naksh feels anger, they hurt each other, and then they contemplate,
They realize they were wrong, they regret, repent n den ask 4 forgiveness ...
Says the things they don't intend to,
And then feeling sorry about it, causing discomfort to me and you...
Edited by divi4u - 12 years ago
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