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FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 (Page 80)

saaaz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 10:48am | IP Logged

Part 18

Thursday 10:30pm..Room 201

Khanak: Oh Ho..ab rice aur dal cook hone mei time lagega na..

Shaan: Kitna time? Mujhe bhook lagee hai..

Khanak: Aap nahake aane walle the na..so go..

Shaan: Nope..I am going to eat first..

Khanak: arrey tarka masala khatam ho gaya..need to buy some..

Shaan: Right now????

Khanak: No..baba..later..tomorrow..!

Shaan: Tomorrow dinner at Tripathi's house..you know that right..?

Khanak: Yes, Madam sent me an email..Shreela Madam also said she needs to talk to us tomorrow ..

Shaan:  Uff..what does she want..???

Khanak: Pata nahin..

Shaan: Anyway dinner better be good..Karthik tho upwaas kar raha hai do din se..

Khanak: (laughs): My friend Pooja thinks he is a riot..

Shaan: Can't believe how he was flirting with her..

Khanak: She is a married woman..and a good sport..

Shaan: His heart broke when she told him she was married..

Khanak: All drama..mujhe lagta hai..he already likes someone..

Shaan: Kaun Karthik?? Impossible..

Khanak: Ban gayee khichdee..Huh! Huh! Pehle haath dhoke aayiye..

Shaan: Uff..tum kitni strict ho yaar..

They sit at the table in the enclave..and eat from two saucers..with plastic spoons..

Friday 1:50am..Room 201

It is extremely dark in the room..except for the street light that casts a small light through the single window from the pantry enclave..it is dark and it is silent..the fan had stopped whirring for awhile now..the only sounds are the ones from outside the room..doors opening, boys complaining, someone yelling for watchman uncle, crickets chirping and frogs from the lake croaking..and inside the room..we can hear voices..

Her: Suniye..Suniye..

His: Hmm..

Her: light chalee gayee..hai na?

His: Yes..I noticed..

Her: (sits up and whines): it is so hot

His: Yep..noticed that too..

Her: (gets off the bed and bumps her foot): Ouch..

His: Ouch..me too..

Her: twas you..?

His: Yep..got up to open the door..get some air..

Her: Why is it so noisy?

His: You are way to close to my ear..

Her: Sorry..

His: Now..stay put..I am opening the door..

Her: (whispers): Ok..

She catches the light in the enclave..moves closer to it..He returns from the door..

Her: Ouch!

His: I said, stay put..

Her: (complaining):  You did not open the door..

His: No..all the guys are outside..making their way to the terrace..

Her: Oh..ok..are there candles around?

His: I think in that box over the table..

Her: Ok

His hand stretches..has breezed over her..he felt something soft..

His: I am sorry..

Her: Relax..twas my shoulder..

His: hmm..

Her: (runs her hands over the table despite having some light through the window): can't find them..where is the box?..

He spots her faintly through the light in the enclave..she shifting her hair behind her ear and her bangle makes a tingling sound when it hits the table while trying to figure out the location of the box..the sight lasts all of 40 seconds..because she turns..

Khanak: Shaantanu!!..suniye na..box kahan hai..??

Khanak: (whispered laugh): Now, that's my elbow..

Khanak: (softer): And..thats my neck..

He kisses her lightly..just near her lips..the kiss lasts for less than a minute..and he moves his lips away from the spot ..

Shaan (whispers into her mouth): Please tell me..that was neither your neck nor your elbow..

Khanak: (very softly..bending her head..his lips touching her hair..): Nor my shoulder..

The fan starts whirring again..there is a lot of yelping outside the room..Khanak pushes Shaan a bit..and goes and climbs on her bed..under the covers..Shaan smiles and gets back onto his bed..

Shaan: Good night, Khanak..

Khanak: (softly into the blanket): Jee..Good morning..

Shaan: (smiles..looks at her back): Hmm..


kal bhi to kuchh aisa hi huaa thaa
neend mein phir tum ne jo chhuaa thaa


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Edited by saaaz - 13 June 2011 at 9:52pm

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Anu80 Senior Member

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 11:04am | IP Logged
Beautiful... gosh I'm in love with this Shaantanu!! Guess the mechie mechie bonding!!

I owe you a big review on the earlier parts...

Haiii.. the powercut was perfect.. and the rejoice when the power is back reminded me of what we used to do as kids...

And  the way the kiss came into the picture.. seriously only you can bring out such a beautiful scene from such an situation!!

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togepe30 IF-Stunnerz

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Posts: 31409

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Pyaar ko...Ho jaane do..
Pyaar mein...Khoo jaane do..
Aitbaar..kiska hai...
Intezaar kiskaa hai...
Abhi na hua toh phir...
Kabhi nahi kabhi nahi !!
Pyaar ko...Ho jaane do..
It was Lovelyyy !!! Soo simple...Soo cuteee...!
There is soo much comfort level there...its sooo peaceful and easy...as if they have known each other for years and not just a week...Sooo few words...conveying soo much !!
The only word is B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L...
The first near kiss...Sooo subtly done...no drumming hearts...no quickening of breaths...but yet sooo cute...it sent a tingling sensation all over...It was sooo well timed and well written to take the story forward...Their satisfaction being soo evident and their acceptance of each other sooo marked...The first rush of Innocent Love !!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed The first time she took his nameEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed She deserved the reward...and he got his reward with her saying his name...
Its Amazing how you can speak right to my heart..
Without saying a word...U can light up the dark...
Try as I may...I can NEVER explain..
What I hear...when you dont say a thing...
The smile on your face..
Lets me know that you need me..
Therez a truth in your eyes...
Saying you'll never leave me...
The touch of your hand...
Says you'll catch me...
Wherever I fall...
You say it best...
When you say nothing at all...
Adorable tha re...! Need I say...I cant wait for the next part...I cant wait for them to go to Pune...Saaz ...plz re...Bike pe jaane de na...Jeep me wo baat kaha...Bike me baar baar break toh laga sakte hain na...Pllzz re...therez sumthing sooo romantic about long distance bike rides...kuch kar...Main baat karti hu PM se...Ek din ke liye highway pe bikes allow kar denge woLOLLOLLOL or let them go by the old routeEmbarrassedEmbarrassed Ya phir...let everyone else go by the jeep and SHANAK can come by the bike alone...coz jeep me itni jagah nahi thiLOLLOLLOLLOLLOLLOL Tu kar sakti hai maate...kuch kar !!LOL

Edited by togepe30 - 08 June 2011 at 11:37am

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mystory IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 11:12am | IP Logged

andhere mey romance.they kissed,how sexy.

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khwaish_245 Senior Member

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Posts: 845

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Wow lovly update
it was so shanaklicious
one thing i didnt get is what type of counciling sheela mam is giving to them

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k.krithika Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 11:14am | IP Logged
Wow Saaaz  Haaye what an awesome update really nice Blushing
Very sweet and lovely update Day Dreaming
Thanks for the lovely update loved it Heart

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RB81 IF-Rockerz

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Posts: 9074

Posted: 08 June 2011 at 11:20am | IP Logged
i'm smiling like an idiot..
smile plastered on my face..
tu ne maar dala..
saaz she addressed him "shantanu"..is that the reason for his KISS..is this the reactionEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed
will leave comments after i come alive saaz...
love u loads..
but chota update..

Edited by RB81 - 08 June 2011 at 11:25am

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Yasharanrocks IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 June 2011 at 11:21am | IP Logged
dead.awesmeee.want 2 die again.cont soon

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