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FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 (Page 75)

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 12:41pm | IP Logged
Itna chhota chhota update de rahi hai aur badi badi review chahiye tujhe?? Oi du to liner beshi aar likhbo na!! Baro update chai!! Big smile
Btw teri bengali really masha allah hai! Too good! Clap
U r going fantastic here. All the emotions r showing its shades, attraction, appeal, camaraderie, concern, care, banters, closeness, jealousies, understanding...all beautifully portrayed in different occasions. They r getting close day by day & yet they r not fully aware of it. She has started noticing all the little things about him & he is looking forward to spending his time with her more. He likes talking to her, listen to her, see her around him, loves to look at her, likes her proximity & she now notices what he is wearing, what he eats, what he does, what he says to her, what he wants. Nice build up of emotions there. I won't still say Love, they have not realised it yet & still have time to get there.
The boys r as usual superb, what a wonderful foil to these 2 with their non-stop chatter & playful banters. They r caring, happy-go-lucky, studious, serious, goofy kinda bunch who brings a perfect backdrop to the storyline of these 2.
And again the subtle touches...I flip & die reading those every time. His anger & unhappiness because she does not call him by his name, loving the feel of her hair, their every night wishes before going off to sleep, her chatting away with him around without thinking much, his searching for the photo & getting devastated seeing it under her pillow, her buying him kurta & his happiness seeing that, her not liking when he is not around & feeling lonely in the empty room, her not thinking about Suraj so much now...all pile up to that fabulous layers of feelings & emotions that a couple goes through in marriage & these 2 r undergoing all these though married under a strenuous circumstance. It was not a happy marriage done voluntarily but yet these 2 r perfect for each other.
I am loving it. Jaldi se bara sa update karna pls. Thanks for this beautiful story. Hug
 
And Saazy waiting eagerly to read what will happen in this meeting with Tina & how will Khanak force him to leave from there & make him pick her up! Not that Khanak will tell him anything but just his conscience will pull him towards Khanak, that force from within, that undeclared attraction.
And 2ndly I can see him driving the jeep but the rear view mirror is placed at particular someone whose hair is flying in the wind forming a halo around her face & the chauffeur is mesmerised with it. His fingers had much rather be doing something else other than holding that rough & hard steering wheel! Big smile And finally she notices that & tries to covertly capture his stance whenever possible & finally one of the boys seeing it openly razzes them both!! Day Dreaming Tujhe yeh sab add karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai par mera hyperactive imagination always works overtime! LOL


Edited by lghosh - 07 June 2011 at 3:12pm

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 12:59pm | IP Logged
Saaz, really nice update again. Kyon taang kar rahi hai dono ko, inki kushi dekhi nahi jaati ke dono ko irritated kar diya?

Beechare inke rang mein bhang daal rahi hai. And I was thinking of that song too when I was writing that comment, love the movie and the song.

Poona trip hoga ke nahi?

It will be nice give them more opportunities to get to know each other. I love the discovery phase, always the most fun part. Keep writing and take care.

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 5:13pm | IP Logged
ok saaz ive read parts 1-7 will continuw tomorrow its awesome so far i love the slow build up and the realisticness of this ff

Part 1: wow u can really sense shaan and suraj's close friendship through their banter, especially as shaan teases suraj over his 10pm phone calls –(very cute by the way lol) so wow suraj is getting married to khanak, ok eagerly awaiting to see how this pans out

OMGGG what is going on suraj died, shaan married khanak, what, when, how???? Ok off to find out what an opening hats off saaz, wow still cant believe suraj is no more that was the shortest cameo appearance suraj has ever made lol.

Part2: wow clearly everything happened in a rush as they still seem to be getting to grips with what has happened, sunil and madz although are clearly not happy anout the situation are still trying to work out what will be the best for the two of them, a little surprised at the fact khanak wants to stay in suraj's room but I guess this way she can still sense his presence in her life and theres something which she can associate herself to as shaan up until today was a mere stranger yet now he is her husband. So shaan is at least a gentlemen and his friends seem sweet as they help move her belongings in, their interaction is so polite, formal and a little awkward understandably cant wait to see this ice break slowly

Part 3: nice to see khanak taking the initiative to find out something about her husband be it just about his family, loved the whole scene in the deans office could clearly make out shaans distress and him avoiding suraj's death and its implications thus him being reluctant in discussing anything surrounding the matter. By not discussing  anything the two will never be able to fully openly interact that's why im glad the dean felt the need for them to talk to a specialist which quite handily turns out to be his wife. Shreela is sweet and im glad at least khanak was a little more open and glad to see her trying to move on will be great to see her as the teaching assistant.

Part 4: wow so shaan cant even discuss the hadsa with his friends I hope he opens up soon and that too with khanak not used to seeing khanak like this being more assertive and more open then shaan even though I know they are still only on polite terms with each other. Loved how u incorporated her traditional 10pm chats with suraj and how when it didn't ring she threw the phone, obviously she is still grieving and adjusting, and she knows there's still boundaries on topics of what she can and cant discuss with shaan. Aww he likes the sound of her singing I hope theres more of where that came from maybe her sangeet will compel him to open up

Part 5: wow loved khanaks ingenious way of keeping out the ants and how this later inspires him with his oen invention. I can see the two are getting more comfortable in each others presence but still not completely there, but as expected that will take time. Haha even in this khanak thinks shaan is a kamchor lmao. By the way I love the comaraderie you portray with the boys it feels so natural and real no pretense or filmy elemnt to it and I loved akki as the supportive older bro

Part 6: the bus scene was very cute they are noticing each other more and are even sharing eye locks haiii im liking where this is heading lol from the previous part and here you can see shaan is becoming attracted to her but first and foremost they are becoming friends.

I also like the way his mates try to involve khanak and make her feel at ease they are truly good friends and funny at time too lol

Part7: I like how shaan acts so disinterested in khanaks affair but secretly listens attentively to what she is up to.  I like murli and khartik theyre funny and sweet, at least khanak is more vocal infront of them. Omg who is shaan texting im sooo glad his friends are trying to knock sense into him afterall whether by choice or not he is married but shaan being shaan goes off in a huff.

Theyre convo's before they sleep are soo sweet and are getting longer lol

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 7:49pm | IP Logged
Awesome ... luved it... it really gudClap
 plz dun be sorry ... another gud morning wid ur update..Smile i do understand real life beckons
dunno shd be happy or sad that couldn't log in last nite

newayz the b/fast convo cute as usual

most cutest part

Shaan: Ande nahin khatee?..lekin ande walle ke paas tho baith saktee ho na..

Khanak: (smiles at him):  Of course..jab andewalle ke saath reh saktee hoon..tho baithne mei no problem..Blushing

aww they ar shoo shweet even dre small argument in the room make me smile

he think she'll luv his room... umm their roomWink

i fink they both shd stay togethet while everyone goes to poona... but as always u must 've decided the best

why does tina call him twice everyday... TWICE yaar Angry

glad he said that its not a date.LOL

em luvin it... continue soon.

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 8:15pm | IP Logged
great job Saaz loved it!

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 8:45pm | IP Logged
Any chance of an update soon???

~Cheers,
Dish

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 9:00pm | IP Logged
I am going to try my best..it seems like I have crazy internet issues too...don;t ask..give me a couple of hours puhleez..Big smile

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Posted: 07 June 2011 at 10:12pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saaaz

I am going to try my best..it seems like I have crazy internet issues too...don;t ask..give me a couple of hours puhleez..Big smile


I give you 10-12 (hours) ... enjoy!!!!

Will get back from work and read it ... if possible 2 updates then????

Chal take care and happy writing ...

~Cheers,
Dish




Edited by dishbhan - 07 June 2011 at 10:13pm

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