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FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 (Page 7)

Souma.N IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:12am | IP Logged
Sorry thought you were going the silsila way...
Now I will read again...the prev time it was spoilt cause of such thoughta.

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SachDJ Goldie

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:17am | IP Logged
Good one, I am here to haunt you. Chal update kar...Now I have one more place to go crazy.

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saaaz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:23am | IP Logged

@Shal..hope I can fulfill your imaginations..

@hotchpotch..thank you re..

@Sneha..yeh le 2nd part

@Lana..thank you re..

@ Vandoo…tu kabhi baaz nahin aayegee…hehehehe

@Neha..I hope so too

@Ramani…Suraj and Shaan were together in the institute..not Shanak..but now as you can see..they are..

@Roopa…YOU will??? THANK YOU jee…bahut aabhaar

@ Vat- thanks re..Arrey kahan bali ka bakra…pichle walle mei I gave him the classiest babe..Natasha…bhool gayee??..in this one twas important to show him dead…dramabaaz jo hai saaz

@Sonali..thanks so much..I hope you enjoy the next chapters too

@Kari…thank you my dear

@Deepali..thanks re…

@ Smitha…Hmm..Shaan;s initial reaction?? Maybe shall put it later like in a FB mode or a casual chat between them..

@Gaayu…did you read it ? or just  simply just…

@ Jyothi…did you mean Simi?? Becos I think you have read mine before??..now I am confused

@ Souma…kya re…rumors spread mat kar…

@DJ..haila…you are here too..thank you..hope you like it..

Next part coming up

All those who pressed like...AABHAAR

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saaaz IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:25am | IP Logged


Friday Afternoon..ITI Dean's office..

Sunil: Whatever may be the case, she is his wife now..

Dean Chowdhry: Mr. Khandelwal, we understand and that is why we suggest family housing..

Mad: FAMILY HOUSING??..Please, they are not a family..my son was impulsive'

Sunil: (holding Mad's hand to stop her from saying anything more):  Prof. Chowdhry, with all due respect, it is my family, and I would rather my son's wife stay with us..

Dean: I think so, but it was Mrs. Khandelwal who brought it up..

Mad: Who hamare ghar kyun rahegee? I mean, it's a new city for her..we are hardly ever home..she is better off here..GOD!!! I don't even know what the hell is going on..to think straight..WHAT were you thinking, Shantanu??? (looking at Shaan who is standing in a corner)

Shaan: Mom!! (then looks at the Dean): Sir, I need to live in my room..we are working on a huge project..I need all the time I have..I am not interested in moving into family housing which is quite a few kilometers from the department.

..Suddenly, Sunil spots his new daughter-in-law seated on the sofa looking straight ahead, something comes over him and..

Sunil: And Khanak..Mumbai mei tumhara koyee jaan pehchaan wala hai..

Khanak: (shakes her head): Main Suraj ke kamre mein rehna chahtee hoon..

Everyone looks at each other..waiting for the other to respond..Shaan steps outside the room..

Mad: Where are you going Shaan?

Shaan: (in a tone that has never been serious before): Mom, I need to get all the saaman into the room..

Sunil: Well, that settles it then..

Mad: Sunil??!!!

Sunil: (pleadingly): Madhavi..Ghar chalte hain..come on..

Prof. Chowdhry is relieved..but also worried..one of his brightest has met an early death and one of his smartest is yet to meet with the consequences of his deed..How shall this turn out? ..his wife shall know..

Hostel 7 lobby..a liitle later..

Karthik: It is too heavy yaar..

Murli: Come on..we should be able to get it..it is just one flight of stairs

Harshad: How the hell?

Shaan: What the heck is it anyway??

Karthik: It is a tanpura..

Murli: Genie's Ass..why the hell didn't you say so in the first place??..remove the damn thing from the huge casket and take it upstairs..

Harshad: Kya matlab..how the heck do you know so much?

Karthik: (grins and winks): Prof. Tripathi's wife sings na..dekha hoga..

Harshad: Freak!!!

Murli: (removes the tanpura from the huge case): WOW!

Shaan: (runs his fingers on the strings and mutters): Taanpura..how does she play it?

Murli: Dude..she does not play it..it is an accompaniment..your wife sings!!

There is a sudden silence among all the friends..the discomfort takes a minute to pass..and probably would have taken longer if they were not interrupted..

Khanak: Please sambhalke..

Karthik: Take it upstairs yaar..I will get the other stuff..

Shaan: I will take care of it..

Karthik: (looking at Khanak): Aapko bhook lagee hogee..

Friday late evening..Hostel 7 mess (canteen):

Karthik: Shetty..2 plate Hakka..

Murli: (looks at Khanak): Aap kya khayengee?

Harshad: Shaan kahan hai?

Karthik: woh suitcases rakh raha hai..

(Shaan enters the mess to see the only seat available is the one next to his wife..Sooraj's girl..no.. his wife..runs his fingers through his hair ..waves to the boys and comes and sits next to her)

Murli: Will you have noodles?

Khanak: Jee..

Harshad: (nudges); I think only hindi..

Khanak: (with a small smile): Jee means 'yes' in Hindi..I will have noodles..

Harshad mutters a Sorry..Karthik smiles at Khanak..

Karthik: Good one Bhabhee..

Khanak laughs..Shaan suddenly looks at her..smiles.. and then his eyes fall on her mehendi filled hands..and he suddenly says..

Shaan: Murli..we need to sit down tomorrow and realign the lever measurements on the prototype..


Hostel 7, Room 201,,

Shaan: Maine samaan uss cupboard mei rakh diyaa hai..

Khanak: Thank you..

Shaan: Agar aap bathroom jaana..

Khanak: Jee I am okay..

The silence between them is eating up all the space in the room..until she walks towards the bed..his heart beats faster than normal and he is quite sure she can hear it..but he is not sure why it is so..

Shaan: Jee aapka bistra uss taraf..

Khanak: Oh! (walks away and sits on the other bed): Oh..

Shaan: (does not really want to watch this): Why don't you get settled..I will be back..

Khanak: Oh..OK..

Shaan leaves the room..gets down the stairs..this is why people smoke..he thinks..he sees quite a few of his hostel mates cigging away..it is almost 11 pm..she must be asleep..

Upstairs Khanak rubs her hands over her bed..his bed, she thinks..looks at the side table..runs her fingers on the night stand..opens the drawer..there is a book and a bunch of pens and an extra pair of glasses..She then gets up..walks to the desk..there is an open book with lots of diagrams..and a pencil with its end chewed up..she smiles in wonderment..there is a fancy watch on top of the desk..and a glass half filled with water..she picks it up and drinks it..

Shaan enters..

Shaan: Did you need something?

Khanak: Nahin tho..

Shaan: Aap mere desk pe baithe ho..


Pyaasi hoon Main..Pyaasi Rehne Do..


Review Mandatory


Next part- page 11

Edited by saaaz - 13 June 2011 at 9:38pm

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priya_cool_123 IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged

Wow ! New FF !

Congrats !

I read from phone this morning !

Ah Suraj factor again !

 IIT ! Oh La la la !

But kya re before i could comment... MEHTAJEE is dead !

I wanted to gush abt him for a change !

Anyways !

U r style has captured me again !

I loved the getting the new bride in the train ! There is something so appealing abt it to me !

And the friends accompanying ! Nice touch !

May be this Shaan is not all bratty ! Early to comment on it ! Lets see !

Loved Shaans ' To who '

OMG They are gonna live in a hostel !

Thats so cool ! For them ! He he !

I have friends who live with their wife in the same hostel as the singles !

Man i used to wonder how those girls would feel ! Mess food ! BTW what abt the washrooms ! We had attached ones ! I don know what IIT has !

And the way singles( girls and boys ) go mad in the hostel ! I was always curious to know what these girls wud feel !

Now more intiguing is that two strangers are gonna live together .. one grieving the death of love and the other of friendship !

They are not even in a family atmosphere ! How are things gonna lead from here !

As usual u have me wondering 'what how why ?'

Love the total backdrop of the story !

And what s khanak s plans in life !

Edited by priya_cool_123 - 27 May 2011 at 6:57am

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nk.mail Goldie

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:39am | IP Logged
Ye kya?!

Itne chote chote updates!

Padhne se pehle hi khatam ho jate hai

Story line is very unique btw

m likin it already! Wink

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SachDJ Goldie

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:43am | IP Logged
Saaz, very nice, your writing is different, I am not sure how to descibe it, I am not good at these things. it is like a grunge style, it has rough edges, in a nice way.  It is fast and lean. I like it. I am enjoying it. Keep going.
Smile I have a feeling gana bajana hone wala hai is FF mein. I like your pick of songs.

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hotchpotchRBO Goldie

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Posted: 27 May 2011 at 1:51am | IP Logged
Ho gaya... bas itna hi...!!!!
Aww... m imagining everything...

Nd m lovin it...

Waitin 4 the lovestory 2 begin...

And taanpura... ?Big smile

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