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FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 (Page 27)

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:02pm | IP Logged
OMG saaz!
How...How in the world did i MISS THIS!?!?! i am super mad at myself for being so blind...but now that i have read it all in one sitting i just can't get enough...I am LOVING the progress that you are making with the plot..I can clearly picture each and every paragraph that you have written. ShaNak are painted with such brilliance on your canvas that i am still ina we with their characterization...their glances, talks at night as they stare in to the darkness...the overall feeling of being tied together yet completely unaware of what the person is or would be...What more can i say here that can added to your praise worthy writing style that others haven't...Please update soon!

P.S: The name is just SUPERB... the fluidity of the matter is hinted even in the title...so so so exquisite dear...i am glad to find my new obsession in "Katra Katra"...  

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saaaz

Originally posted by Souma.N

This is turning out so well...the comaradrie is growing...comfort zones are widening...
 
Saazy I will kill you if you leave this abruptly like the Rum and Raisin one...will deffo kill you.
 
 

 do you mean "i" will kill "you" if you stop reading this abruptly..becos haylo, i completed ek hi khwab..haan???...
 
No you ended that so abruptly...I mean koi ending as such nahin tha...There was no Shanka only yaar...and last mein kuch epilogue dal diya...
 
Ek baar take this to heights...stop mat karna...thats what I meant...Smile
 
 

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Souma.N

Originally posted by saaaz

Originally posted by Souma.N

This is turning out so well...the comaradrie is growing...comfort zones are widening...
 
Saazy I will kill you if you leave this abruptly like the Rum and Raisin one...will deffo kill you.
 
 

 do you mean "i" will kill "you" if you stop reading this abruptly..becos haylo, i completed ek hi khwab..haan???...
 
No you ended that so abruptly...I mean koi ending as such nahin tha...There was no Shanka only yaar...and last mein kuch epilogue dal diya...
 
Ek baar take this to heights...stop mat karna...thats what I meant...Smile
 
 

Hmmm...okay I shall do what you want...only if you comment on every update of this FF..and that too detailed comment...kya bolti tu???
I mean..you could have got an ending 'you' wanted had you commented on ek hi khwab...tsk! Tsk!!..mwahahahaha

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Part 5:

OMG Saazy...I loved it!!! the way Shanak behaved as friends and showed their irritation and then immediately Shaan doing the act of being attracted to her. I guess he does see her as physically attractive person and he is drawn to her some way and somehow she seems like a mystery to him. Loved the little touches such as the app part, kichidi part, listening to her part, bathroom mein bindi part...
So he is holding back coz she was to be Suraj's wife.
Loved the college talks and all...it was tooo good...

Part 6:

loved the whole bus scene and those eye-locks. It seems Shaan is slowly realizing he has a wife but it's not there yet.
Khanak toh is still in love with Suraj but she is being his friend. I guess this is how the story would go...

Im loving it!
loved the ending of this scene. it was too good!

Plz continue soon!

PS: i have freaking mexican neighbors and its memorial day tomorrow so they have a party going on! ugh! loud music! now i know what it is to have loud neighbors!

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:18pm | IP Logged
Ja ja ...
 
Ok done...I will comment on each and every part...provided you promise to continue this...
 
Abhi update karo!
 
 

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:19pm | IP Logged
@Part -5

Teri bindiya re...
Re aaye haye...teri bindiya re..
Sajan nindiyaa le legi..
Meri bindiya...
Re aaye haye...teri bindiya re..


Loved how he didnt make any tea and dropped the whole khichdi cup and plate of water ...

@Part -6

Beautiful...I soo loved how he sat next to her in the bus...Cuteee ! Like how he loves her singing...that bathroom door left open...shutting the tap scene was super cute...!

Tere mere beech me..
Kaisa hai ye bandhan anjaaanaaa
Maine nahi jaana...
Tune nahi jaanaa...
Tere mere beech me..
Kaisa hai ye bandhan anjaaanaaa



Your FF is like a beautiful song which has this rustic old charm to it...I am loving the feel of humming and listening to this "experience" !!


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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:25pm | IP Logged
Saaz ..the terrace at the top of hostels are very common hang outs at the IITs...write about them also...
 
Also IITB has an all famous Maggi shop...
 
Write more about the bachelors pad!
 
 

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Posted: 29 May 2011 at 11:27pm | IP Logged
 Hats Off 2 dese 2 ppl... one needs lots of courage to leave dere past behind & move on in life!!!!
but thought of dat one particular day is killing me... hope u v'll reveal it soon...

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