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FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 (Page 2)

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 10:28pm | IP Logged
Saazzzyyy ... Yaaayy !!!!!
You writing another One ????
 
Yaaay ... That Itself Has made me SUPERHAPPY !!!!
 
 
IITians eh ?
5 Point Someone ?? LOL !!!!!
 
*warning*
Khanak and Shaan TOGETHER FOREVER .. Remember THAT !!!
LOL !!!!
 
 
 

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
awesome preview saazHug

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Itna bada part likha hai LOL
IITians n all.."nerd ka taj" ROFL

This sounds good plus its from you toh it has to be goodApprove
Enough of maska, update!

P.S. I lurveee this songEmbarrassed


Edited by vatsalya - 26 May 2011 at 10:32pm

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 10:38pm | IP Logged

@ Vandoo meri bandhoo…thanks re..guess who gets the girl..

@Purvi..thanks sweetie

@Sneha—thank you my dear

@Shal- Thanks re…yeh le first part..

@Bona..haila..you came? Will you be reading this regularly?? Tell..tell..

@Vat- thank you..it is my all time favorite song..

Here you go guys..First part…enjoy and don't forget to comment..


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Part 1

Suraj enters Hostel 7, waves to the chowkidaar, walks up the stairs to his room, it is 10:15pm. He opens the door and as he is about to sit down at his desk, Shaan comes out of the bathroom. 

Shaan: Arrey how come? Back so early?? Mrs Mehta ke saath jhagda hua kya?

Suraj: Arrey Nahin..phone engaged tha..

Shaan: WHAT? (animated shock and knifing his heart) How come yaar? Probably calling off the wedding..nahin tho, pichle 4 saalon mein, this is the first time your 10'0 clock call was adhoora..

Suraj: Tu chup baithega..she probably is talking to her Bai about wedding plans and stuff..She leaves for Dhulwaadi tomorrow so there must be some last minute stuff..

Shaan:  Dude, I don't want to know..but yeah..tell me one thing, what the hell do you talk about everynight for one hour?? I mean it is a bloddy STD booth..action tho hone se raha..

Suraj: (rolling his eyes and shaking his head): We just talk..

Shaan: Talk WHAT and that too for the past 4 years??..

Suraj: We have known each other since she was 4 years old..

Shaan: That's downright obnoxious..aur ab tum dono ki shaadi..tu tho kissi aur ladki ki taraf dekhta bhi nahin hai..yeh kaise chipki tere saath? ..yeh alag bath hai, yahan pe there are no girls..just non males..the hot ones are either outside the institute and tu tho kabhi bahar niklaa hi nahi..and the other set of hot babes are..

Suraj: Pata hai yaar,..prof's wives!!..tu chup rehne ka kitna lega?? Yeh bol, have you booked tickets? Most of the boys are arriving next Wednesday.  Wedding is Thursday. When the heck are you coming?

Shaan: Okay, dude.. the problem is Akshay Bhaiya has finally got me time with the director of marketing at Karft Foods India, need to talk to him about the vending machine idea. I am taking the first flight in. Tu phikar mat kar I will be there in time..

Suraj: In time for what???

Shaan: (grinning): Oh HO.. kyun be..fikar not..in time for Honeymoon..acha sunn, tomorrow night bachelor's party. Tujhe pata tho chale..hot babes hoti kya hai?? Kya pata..teri shaadi tu khud cancel kar de..

Suraj: Bakwaas chod..(turns and buries himself into another chapter of Bioleaching of silica from Indian Pyrolusite, dolomite and chromite ores)

Shaan: (smiles and turns back to his seat): Listen yaar, if you need anything..anything!

Suraj: I know..


Thursday Morning..

Shaan steps out of the airport, rushing with his duffel bag to get an auto or a taxi..he knows he is late..and Suraj shall murder him, if the heat does not get him before that..As he is just about to sit in the auto..his phone rings..

Shaan: Kartik..I am there..almost there..

Kartik: (agitated): Shaan..listen it is all [email protected]#$%^up here..

Shaan: Arrey tell Suraj I am out of the airport and getting there in fifteen minutes..

Kartik: Dude..you are not getting it..Suraj met with an accident last night..

Shaan: What????!!!!

Kartik: You better get here..things are out of control.

Shaan: How is Mehta doing? And whats her name..how is she doing?

Kartik: Just get the [email protected]#$% here..

 

Thursday night..on a train back to Bombay..

Karthik: Samman check kar liya na..

Harshad: Yep..char suitcases hai..and  that..

Murli: Where is Shaan?

Karthik: Where is Bhabee?

Harshad: She is sitting in the first class compartment..

Murli: Dekate!!..just check for Shaan yaar..the train is leaving the station

(Harshad sways in the alley of the moving train..finds Shaan at the door..staring outside)

Harshad: Shaan..Yaar..I think you should go to her..

Shaan: to who?

Harshad: Shaan..

Shaan: Hmm..

Harshad: Jaa yaar..

Shaan: Is she all alone?

Harshad: Karthik uske saath baitha hai..

Shaan: (shrugs): So it's okay..right!

Harshad: Come on yaar..you are her husband now..

Shaan is silent and looks into the darkness of the night that stares back at the moving train. The TC walks by..

TC: Ho..suno, yahan pe standing allowed nahin hai..

Shaan walks slowly back to the first class compartment..

Karthik steps out of the first class dabba..he pats Shaan on his shoulder..Shaan enters..

Shaan:  Do you want something? I mean..Kuch chahiye??

She stares back with her big brown eyes..she shakes her head with a NO..steps out..goes to the small sink right near the spot where Shaan was standing a minute ago..and throws up..washes up..

Khanak stands at the door and stares outside the moving train..

Shaan: Tum theek tho ho?

Khanak: Jee Haan.. aur aap?

Shaan: Of course..chalo andar chalo..I don't think we are allowed..I mean..yahan khada mana hai

Khanak: (with a small smile): Oh .. (and continues staring into the night)

It takes her more than a minute to realize that right there ..among all the smells and sounds from inside and outside the moving train..was Shaan standing next to her..staring into the night from the moving train..

 

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Zindagee Hai..Behne Do..

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 10:56pm | IP Logged
OMG . WHAT ?
 
Suraj Met with an Accident ???????
WHAAAT ?
That too a Day before the Weddding ??????
 
OMG ... and Shaan Marries Khanak ... OH MY !!!
I cant wait for the Love to Blossom !!!!!!
 
Yaaayyy ... I am already Imagining things .. . LOL !!!!!

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Khanak enters...
N suraj accident...

its a wow ff...!!!

wuitin eagerly 4 the next part...

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Posted: 26 May 2011 at 11:01pm | IP Logged
Saazzz awsome part 1...loved convo of shaan-suraj...yayayyay shanak married..and wow suraj met with accident...LOL... Zindagi bada acha hai..cute shanak convo tooo...wats next with shanak saaz...update part 2 soon... Big smile

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