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FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 (Page 121)

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 9:40pm | IP Logged
One more update plz.i just love this fic.shanak r so cute.kartik wrngtime main entry mara.now shaan wl plan smethng 4 both n weknd yay.plz cnt soon...

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 9:45pm | IP Logged
thx saazy ... luvly updateClap

the whole convo was cute starting frm asking to leave that shagun ka roop., bahu each and every single line makes me smile... u've written it so beautifully juz as normal life conv goes

the best part
 

Shaan: (points to the bathroom):  where the hell did I put the keys??

Suddenly, the sound of running water stops..and its Khanak's voice that can be heard loudly from inside..

Khanak:  Arrey suniye..dhoondiye mat..mil gayee..blouse mei hi thee..

ROFLROFLLMAO... i couldn't read till the next 2 minutes i was laughing my heat out and i keep on taking pauses after each line ... super cute yaar

Pure H7 ko pata chal gaya k blouse main kya hai ... lol LOL

the romantic ritual... gud nite and gud morning... awww luved it

plz yaar continue soon weekend hai update to banta hai.

oops i forgot to add... YE PUNE TO NAI GAYE Wink

dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika Dancing

ab kuch cute shanak moments aajein... waisey they are super cute but i mean romantic momentsDay Dreaming



Edited by IF_rida - 11 June 2011 at 9:49pm

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 9:56pm | IP Logged
here it is..awkwardly...at your request ...for dare i say no..


dude...its a crazy weekend. but i was able to cath the last two updates. and man.i was compelled to comment.  i seriously have no words for you. the last update had me feeling melancholy and sad and anxious and all things in one go. 

 for one that song is phenomenal. and the way you wrote it. the last update. i could almost see the scenes playing. like a movie. not a show. a movie. their emotions were so raw and so present. the sense of understanding and space between these two that you've created is phenomenal. i know i was the one who once said im surprised at her calm given all the circumstances. but man was i wrong. the way you bring out emotions in them is unreal. and so very true. we react in the most calmest ways to the most volatile or biggest things. and when its small things we freak out all the more. food is like their solace of everything.

the friends are seriously a great bunch. but these two. are unreal. it was a shot in the dark. and risk bigger than any risk they might've ever considered taking. but at the end of the day. ironically the tragedy was the best thing to happen to them. for otherwise they wouldn't have found each other.

i know this is all fictional and all. but the beauty of a great story lies in the writers ability to make the characters come to life and make the readers feel as if they are in the story. and man are they real.

thank you thank you. for giving this needed emotion to the weekend.

hope you have a great one!

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 10:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saaaz

[QUOTE=lghosh]Saazy right from the morning there is an innocent query hovering in my mind but can't ask!! If l do these girls again here will slander me!!! Angry 
The angelic, chaste, pristine me have to go through all these defamation!! Disapprove
LOL
 Aaaye Haaye !!
Innocence ki epitome...
Puch le tu ...Yehi puchna hoga ki screw blouse me kaise atka??LOLLOLLOLLOL Ofcourse in all innocence you will askLOL

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 10:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lghosh

Originally posted by Casa.Addict

Tum sab log yaha ho!

Lana!

Aap ka innocence to bahut tapak raha hai! LOL 

Pehle "in n around him", abhi "saree ke neeche" ROFL

Badhiya hai! Tongue
 
 
Chal hat...aaj se main kuch nahi likhoongi!! Tum log sab ke sab mujh par ungliyaan utha rahe ho!! I say everything so innocently & u all take it the round about way!! Big smile
Ab tu jaake Deepa ka post par & u will be confused too!! Saari...neeche dekho!! ROFL And I am like 'haan yeh kya ho gaya, did I miss anything?'!!! LOL Ab iss mein meri kya galti bol??
Tu, aur tere dost namoona, dono mujhe badnaam kar rahe hai!! LOL Me bechari 'bhali-bhali si ek surat, bhala sa ek naam...'!!! LOL

Awww, aise bhi kya ruth rahe ho LOL

Humne to aapko innocent hi bola hai

Aap hi explanation de rahi hai ROFLROFL Humne to manga bhi nahi Wink

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by saaaz

Originally posted by lghosh

Saazy right from the morning there is an innocent query hovering in my mind but can't ask!! If l do these girls again here will slander me!!! Angry 
The angelic, chaste, pristine me have to go through all these defamation!! Disapprove
LOL
if query is truly innocent..kissiki majaal key defame karen..ask away...Big smile

Oh u should definitely ask

Hum aapke saath hai Big smile




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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 10:32pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by togepe30

Originally posted by saaaz

[QUOTE=lghosh]Saazy right from the morning there is an innocent query hovering in my mind but can't ask!! If l do these girls again here will slander me!!! Angry 
The angelic, chaste, pristine me have to go through all these defamation!! Disapprove
LOL
 Aaaye Haaye !!
Innocence ki epitome...
Puch le tu ...Yehi puchna hoga ki screw blouse me kaise atka??LOL Ofcourse in all innocence you will askLOL

ROFLROFLROFL

Ye baat sahi kahi Vandoo tune

Baat saari ke neeche se hoke blouse tak to pohochni hi thi ROFLROFL

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Posted: 11 June 2011 at 10:33pm | IP Logged
Oh Ya...I had reserved a post kal for the second last update but yaha powercut ho gaya so by wi-fi got dc..
Yehi I will comment...-
 
I loveddd the song used - "Jaane kyaaa baat hai..."
 
But you know after reading the part I was sooo reminded of another classic that at 2 in the night I downloaded the song and heard it ...
 
The silence...those glances...that pain...Reliving all those moments and your excellent writing took the part to another level...
 
The song is -
 
Ehsaan tera hoga mujh par
Dil chahta hai woh kehne do
Mujhe tumse mohabbat ho gayi hai
Mujhe palko ki chaav mein rehne do
Ehsaan tera hoga mujh par

Tumne mujhko hasna sikhaaya ho
Rone kahoge ro lenge ab
Aansoo ka hamaare gham na karo
Woh behte hai to behne do
Mujhe tumse mohabbat ho gayi hai
Mujhe palko ki chaav mein rehne do
Ehsaan tera hoga mujh par

Chaahe banaa do chaahe mitaa do hoo aaa
Mar bhi gaye to denge duvaayen
Udd udd ke kahegi khaak sanam
Yeh dard-e-mohabbat sehne do
Mujhe tumse mohabbat ho gayi hai
Mujhe palko ki chaav mein rehne do
Ehsaan tera hoga mujh par
Dil chahta hai woh kehne do
Mujhe tumse mohabbat ho gayi hai
Mujhe palko ki chaav mein rehne do

(P.S - Highlighted the words that match with the story)
 
I loved it ...And Ya...Karthik ki bike pe seat khaali hai kya?? Hehehe !! Dude...hez sooo cutee and harshad too - Amit Gaata hai? Chal uski khilli udaate hain...Pehle buffet khatam phir Amit ko khatam...Hahahaha...
 
Now how many times have I said that line - Chal uski khilli udaate hain...And I have done that very thing till the concerned people have begged me to let them live in peace...*wicked grin*...
 
I LOVE THE FF !!! AND I LOVE YOU FOR WRITING IT !!!
 
As for the last part -
 
Hayeee...Screw...*hi-5's karthik*...!!
 
Arey those people didnt find the duppatta...Kyaa yaar...
 
I soo wanted their version of -
 
Ghungat ki aad se dilbar kaaa...
Deedaar adhooraaa...Rehta hai...
Jab tak na pade aahiq ki nazar..
Shringaar adhoora rehta hai...
 
Hahahahaha !! They wudve sung sumthing as wicked...!
 
Aur agar abhi Harshad bhi aaya hota toh they wudve done a hip hop version on -
 
Choli ke peeche kya hai...
Choli me screw hai ...
 
Hahahahahha!!
 
CONTINUE SOON !!
 
Luv,
Vandu

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