Posted: 10 June 2011 at 1:26pm | IP Logged
Saaazzyyy...there he closed the door loudly & here there was a loud noise, I fell from my couch...THUD!!
Aaja tujhe iss update ke liye jhappi zor se!!
Love, love, loved it!! It was sweet & beautiful!! They have not only opened up nature wise to each other but they r opening up about their feelings for each other as well.
I loved how in a typical husband style he said 'I never get a minute with u, why did u go away when I came down for breakfast?'...that had full 'haq' & he had no inhibitions to show it to her. He didn't stop midway or change any words to end the sentence. This itself shows they r so intimate now.
Her indulgent smiles, her gently chiding him about having no patience & about his being a little rude to Amit also shows how she now has the 'haq' to admonish him if she wants to! And hahahaha Amit understood Shaan's jealousy & all the more he butted his comments in to rub it on Shaan!
And that scene of them sitting near the lake all hungry, do u know what it reminded me of? Their sitting there on a previous occasion where she went humming & he sat looking at her & their slippers lying side by side! I wanna know is it like that still or has it come to the stage where its lying all tangled up together??
The journey is halfway across the circle now. Saaz sach mein teri story is amazing. And meri Ma take it slow, I want to savour every details henceforth so take ur time in the narrative to give us every little minute information. I want this story to continue, for a long long long time, khabardaar jo tu ne iss ko itni jaldi khatam kiya toh. I will throw a massive tantrum otherwise & sab paltan ko bulaoongi mujhe join karne ke liye!!
And another aspect in their relationship that caught my eye here is though they r coming close to each other, though they look forward to spending time with each other, though they want to stay with each other they never try to suffocate one another, they give ample space to each other.
He saw her going to the room, he didn't stop her, she saw him talking to the guy, she didn't call him to come with her, she gives him time to study, eat & goof with his friends, he does the same about her practice, work & her time with Mohita & Pooja! I like this, they demand but not unreasonably, give each other the freedom they need. Or else the relationship wouldn't be so sweet like it is now, the frictions would have started immediately.
And he is now comfortable enough to talk about his family & how gently she nudges him to call his mom! A typical woman, always trying to hold the family together. Nice touch there. Sach mein Saazy tere yeh do, masoom 'Laila Majnu' bahoot pyaare hai! I really like & love them equally.
And the last part, the sweetest of all, she called his name & was rewarded by a kiss again. What will he do if she calls him by his name in public??
Ok the entire sequence was beautiful, her humming in the bathroom & his listening to her, his taking the dupatta & putting it in his jansport, to keep a part of her always with him even when she is not physically present with him!! So sweet, so cute!!
But if the 'pantar' gang ever sees the dupatta Shaan will have it!!
I can imagine all the songs having the word 'churni, dupatta, odhni' will be sung loudly to the entire campus to hear!!
And poor Shaan, uska chehra toh dekhne layak hoga!!
But on a sweeter note she is so a part of his existence now!
What about her? Does she feel the same way too? Does she have something of him with her as well?
And his disappointment at her going away & she realised he is unhappy & her coming back & asking should she stay back...brilliant Saaz! This is what marriage is all about, the give & take, the understanding, the dependency, the help, the comfort level & love, all these from both partners makes the journey easy & cherishable!! He didn't want to spoil her plans & she understood his unhappiness & came back...a perfect synchronisation!
And the kiss itself was beautiful!! And this time no excuses but a direct proper kiss with all the possible 'haq', intention & love, a perfect melodious symphony!
Finally 'sapnon mein bahene do'...waited so long for this!
But I think she is not left 'pyaasi' & doesn't want to remain so!
Saazy now next update pls pls pls start from this moment, I want to know & see how each will feel after the kiss, the initial shock followed by shyness, then the full bloom response of both, pls details mein likhna. Wanna see their each & every reactions after this, how comfortable they r or will they go away soon to recover their breath & then the realisation sinks in of what happened? If any second thoughts or any afterthoughts progresses from here, mujhe sab jaan na hai! Or even if they r happy about it & take it from there, that too I wanna know.
And I also want to know what was their reaction after they came out from Dr. Shreela's room. How they reacted, did they talk about it at all, did they decide anything, were they busy in their own thoughts or were they gauging each other trying to understand what the other was thinking...details de pls!!!! Its helps me to analyse the characters.
And was this 'Shantanu main reh jaoon?' & his 'rahe jaao Khanak" meant to be the answer to Dr. Shreela's question?? Is he asking her to stay back only for this moment or from moving to Hostel 11?? I would like to think for both but will wait to see what u have got planned for this.
Ok get ready to be nagged by me about next update!! And pls will u update in the weekend as well? Pls bata dena then will be around to catch it for sure!
Thumbs Up for this one!!
Edited by lghosh - 10 June 2011 at 8:35pm