FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 - Page 10

Urooj

@rooj-i

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

I was right...Shaan is attracted but holding back because she was to his bff wife

Khanak accepted the situation but she is not there yet.

btw wat is namr? i never heard it...lol sorry im good in urdu not hindi...:)

Great update Saazy!!!!

I love it!!!

And I miss you!!!

Edited by rooj-i - 12 years ago

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purvi08

@purvi08

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

loved the update saaz di.

dr.shreela is vey nice

thanks for the pm

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

Saazy wen i first read ur update, the mere mention of Hostel 7 brought a smile to my smile..the sole reason being Madhouse a book based on the same...if u get a chance do read...its funny!!besides the update..m just waiting for this musical love story to begin!hope Shaan gets all the prototype right for dis one!😃

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601153

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

Wow ... Saaj yaar!!!!

Kya hain ye ... such practicality ... I'm floored !

Loved this Shaan ... tum log Shaan ko aisa batate ho ki uspar hi sab ruk jata hain.

Aage kya hua? She will consult him on the teacher's position or no?

jaldi update dena plsss...

~Cheers,
Dish

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

oh...thanks saazy...4 ur update...its getting interesting...

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

@Vat..no not much of GF history…at least have not planned yet..but dekhte hai

😲😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

Accha khaasa these two are coming closer, dont you think of bringing in a gf.😡

I obv had to love the line "sleep switched her off"😳 I loved the acknowledgement of wifey😳

It doesn't really seem like he married her out of sympathy..though he is conscious of the fact that she was to be his best-friend's wife and hence is...reluctant? Held back?

And I really like Khanak's simplicity..Sweet hai😃

Love

Vatty

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SachDJ

@SachDJ

Goldie

Posted: 12 years ago

👏👏👏

very nice Saaz. I really like the concept here, I guess that is why we fell in love with RBO anyway. This one was slow and steady...I can see that story will resume at a normal pace, I guess the first 2 parts a lot happened quickly, so felt like story was moving fast. Keep writing gal. Looking forward to next one.

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Daebak

@Daebak

IF-Stunnerz

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely part chhe..
Majja aavi gayu vanchine !!

Havve update kar !!

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142958

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

OMG!

three parts?

I had no idea!

Crazy Friday

Lovely!

I loooved the second part more

Too much crackle in it

I loved the last line Just absolutely SPLENDID!

"You are at my desk"

Gosh!

I am a sucker for this type of romance

Strong intelligent chicks and sexy careless guys

Sigh!

Aur chhota nahi likhe sakti thi?

Waste di ni

Unbelievably good second part

I actually SAW it!

Very rarely that happens to me reading a story!

Loved the Southie friends!

Too cute

Loved the talk at the restaurant

Its your usual breezy casual style no bhashans I love it!

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jyothi1989

@jyothi1989

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

woww simi he felt his wife to be beautiful wowww he is starting to notice her nice nice ,counseling section was gud and i loved this ,see u wifey!!!!!!!!! thanks for the pm simi waiting for the next thoda bada vala upadate karo na yar

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