FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148 - Page 95

reserved Edited by purvi08 - 12 years ago

Saaaz,

I took a deep breath after reading the two updates... so that's how Suraj convinced Shaan and Khanak to marry... wow!

Dinner at Tripathi's - beautifully written scene. 👏

Are they going to Poona or not? May be not... why wud Shaan want to be around the boys all the time? LOL...

Madam Saaz,

I love your writing dear!!!!

Haaye kya likhti ho yaar ... the min I saw ur comment on my FF, I knew you would have updated ...

And volla!

Haaye kya Shanakalicious update that ye ... absolutely love it!

screw the screw!

Loved the part of Karthik coming and her shouting from the bathroom...

They did not go on purpose na, they wanted to be together without the botheration of the gang around... hain na ... kya plan hain boss!

Ab next update kab ... ye dil maange more!

~Cheers,
Dish
Edited by dishbhan - 12 years ago

One more update plz.i just love this fic.shanak r so cute.kartik wrngtime main entry mara.now shaan wl plan smethng 4 both n weknd yay.plz cnt soon...

thx saazy ... luvly update👏

the whole convo was cute starting frm asking to leave that shagun ka roop., bahu each and every single line makes me smile... u've written it so beautifully juz as normal life conv goes

the best part
 

Shaan: (points to the bathroom):  where the hell did I put the keys??

Suddenly, the sound of running water stops..and its Khanak's voice that can be heard loudly from inside..

Khanak:  Arrey suniye..dhoondiye mat..mil gayee..blouse mei hi thee..

🤣🤣LMAO... i couldn't read till the next 2 minutes i was laughing my heat out and i keep on taking pauses after each line ... super cute yaar

Pure H7 ko pata chal gaya k blouse main kya hai ... lol 😆

the romantic ritual... gud nite and gud morning... awww luved it

plz yaar continue soon weekend hai update to banta hai.

oops i forgot to add... YE PUNE TO NAI GAYE 😉

dhinka chika dhinka chika dhinka chika

ab kuch cute shanak moments aajein... waisey they are super cute but i mean romantic moments😍

Edited by IF_rida - 12 years ago

here it is..awkwardly...at your request ...for dare i say no..


dude...its a crazy weekend. but i was able to cath the last two updates. and man.i was compelled to comment.  i seriously have no words for you. the last update had me feeling melancholy and sad and anxious and all things in one go. 

 for one that song is phenomenal. and the way you wrote it. the last update. i could almost see the scenes playing. like a movie. not a show. a movie. their emotions were so raw and so present. the sense of understanding and space between these two that you've created is phenomenal. i know i was the one who once said im surprised at her calm given all the circumstances. but man was i wrong. the way you bring out emotions in them is unreal. and so very true. we react in the most calmest ways to the most volatile or biggest things. and when its small things we freak out all the more. food is like their solace of everything.

the friends are seriously a great bunch. but these two. are unreal. it was a shot in the dark. and risk bigger than any risk they might've ever considered taking. but at the end of the day. ironically the tragedy was the best thing to happen to them. for otherwise they wouldn't have found each other.

i know this is all fictional and all. but the beauty of a great story lies in the writers ability to make the characters come to life and make the readers feel as if they are in the story. and man are they real.

thank you thank you. for giving this needed emotion to the weekend.

hope you have a great one!